Neat stuff Megz! π
I'm afraid I'm not much of a know how in context of Vampire Romance - the fancy for it never really took flight in my case - but just reading this prologue made a very intriguing read.
I really like your play with insinuations and facts - it reveals perfectly enough to keep one waiting for more!
Are you going to do individual prologues for each character? Just curious - also, what was the numbering about at the end of each passage break? A consequence of copy paste from your other site?
Basically, great start. I'm curious enough, if nothing else in terms of the genre, to definitely hang around. Plus, it's you (:
xx
JZee