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ShaNak SS - Sathi Sath Nibhana:Pt11|Pg25 17Sep11 (Page 21)

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Dish!

Aaj kal dikh nahi rahi hai tu

Kidhar hai?

Chal, tere update pe kuch bolti hu

Loved loved the talk they had!

Very realistic! To tell u, even i think the way Khanak thinks...If ever i have a crush on a guy, this is exactly what goes thru my mind n i don let it go further! 

M lovin how dheere dheere ur unfoldin their relationship

But i want to know ye jhagde se pehle how was their relationship

Umm i mean how they spent their time together...basically i want them to recall their time spent in flash backs 

What made them come closer n all, u gettin it?

Interestin bante jaa rahi hia teri story!

Jaldi jaldi update diya kar!


Edited by Casa.Addict - 22 June 2011 at 7:01am

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
loved the update Dish keep it up!

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
im dying of aniticipation
 pls update soon dish
 its fab:))))))))))))

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged

Hello Writers,

After all the torture I have put you guys thru by badgering you all for updates...Finally you all can heave a sigh of relief as I wont be doing that anymore...
 
M taking a sabbatical from posting on the forum...No telling when I will return...!!
 
You all have done an exceptional job with your writing skills and in weaving your stories soo beautifully...leaving everyone spellbound...Continue with the GR8 work...
 
Shall return after I have sorted out stuff !! When? I dunno...Maybe next week...Maybe next month...Maybe NEVER !!
 
Love you all...Thank You for making such beautiful stories a part of my life and my addiction...And THANK YOU for humouring me whenever I threatened/annoyed/bugged you all for updates...I know I have done that way too much...
 
LOVE,
Vandu




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dish wen r u updating dear

waiting eagerly

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Thank You post:

A big thanks to all who read and like my posts.

Special thanks to Manita for supporting me and encouraging me to write. Smile

Vanduu ko bahot jyada miss karti hoon main
Cry , just saw that she is reading the FFs made me write and post this one. And also the others who followup.

Really appreciate the motivation provided by Neha, Lana, Saaz, Simi, Shanakyasharan, Christmas, Deepa_01, mystory, IF_Rida and others who comment, and follow-up with me for an update.

Thanks for the support guys ... and for bearing with my writing skills Wink

~Cheers,
Dish



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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged

Part: 10

This is for Vandu who used to pester me all the time for the update, and I miss her a lot on the forum, I know she is a silent reader and does not want to comment. But I will still dedicate this to her as I know she is reading.


14th May 2011 - Back to reality 

Precap:

Khanak looks at him, meeting his eyes again "ye kya ho raha hain humein Shaan"

Shaan not leaving her gaze "Shayad isi ko pyar kehtey hain..."

Khanak looks away "Pyar..."

They both realize what has been said and their hold tightens on the others hand.

Shaan walks out of the washroom in a towel and walks over to the bed. Grabs his trouser and walks towards the washroom but not before throwing a glance at her. She is still sound asleep. "I will wake her up in 10" to himself.

He walks out wearing the trouser n a white vest and is ready to pick his shirt when he sees a movement at the window and her shifting a little bit. He keeps staring at her face, which is changing expressions, from a deep sleep mode to a frown, to a smile. The curtain around the seat moves and is over her face now. 


Shaan cannot resist and walks over to her, holds the curtain with the right hand and stares at her face. He is amused as he sees her move, her hand finding it entangled in the quilt. She shakes it around, feels the quilt around her, opens her eyes in little slits and looks down on herself. Gets her hand out of the quilt and looks at her chudda, still unaware of the person standing over her. He keeps still, looking at the way she is behaving.


Khanak touches her left hand chudda with her right hand, takes the same hand to her mangalsutra and as she touches it, a small smile forms on her lips. She looks out the window and sees that there are very few people standing down, cannot see his dad around, exclaims, "Oh! The reception!"

Gets up hurriedly and bam! Bangs her head onto Shaan's chest.


The force throws her off balance and she goes reeling backwards, trying to control her feet. She is about to fall on the window seat again, when Shaan holds her by her left arm. Her right arm grabs the hand he is holding her with to stable herself and looks up.


The first thing that she sees, are those deep brown eyes, penetrating through her jet black ones.


It was like their first eye lock and she just fell for him all over again. His heart was beating at double speed now. He straightened her but could not let go of her. Khanak also still has her right hand on his arm.


Slowly he comes near her, moving his hand up her arm to her neck into her hair. Her hold on his other arm tightens, turns her head to look down. He moves his left hand to her waist, her right hand involuntarily moves to his shoulder, his thumb probes her chin and makes her look up.


She looks into his eyes, they shift from her eyes to her lips. He slowly bends down and brushes his lips against her. She clutches his vest at the shoulder, while feeling his hand at her waist pressing her back and moving her closer into him.


Her hand touching at his shoulder makes him groan and kiss her more fervently. Both are lost in the kiss.

Later ...

They hear the faint sound of thumping, not sure if it was just their heart beats... Khanak is the first to realize that someone is banging on the door. She moves her head and looks down "Shaan, someone is at the door" moving out of his hold.


Shaan still trying to recover looks around and there it is the sound of someone knocking on the door. Khushboo: "Khanak, darwaja kholo, the parlour lady is here."


Khanak: "Aayi bhabhi" slowly moves towards the door, while shaan grabs his shirt and goes into the washroom. She opens the door and there a middle-aged lady is standing with a vanity case in her hand and Khushboo all ready for the reception, standing by her side.

Khushboo: "tumne abhi tak change nahi kiya. Late ho raha hain, its already 5:30. Jaldi change karo, It'll take 30-40 mins for the makeup, we need to leave by 6:30 if we want to reach on time. Ye Shaan kahan hain?"


Shaan walking out of the washroom in his purple shirt tucked into the trouser, "Bhabhi! Kisi ne mujhe yaad kiya?"


Khushboo: "tho tum yehi thhe, issi liye der lagi darwaja kholne mein". Shaan just looks at Khanak and smiles.


Khanak blushing slightly "Nahi Bhabhi, main so rahi thi."


Khusboo: "phir ye devar ji itna muskura kyu rahe hain ... huh?


Shaan: "Bhabhi, aaj hi shadi hui hain ... abhi tak rone wale din nahi aaye hain mere" earning a glare from Khanak.


Khushboo: "ab chalo tum tayar ho jao jaldi and let Khanak get ready, we need this room for her and u out of here"


Shaan: "Bhabhi, agar aap bhool gayi ho tho yaad dila doon, ye mera kamra pehle hain"


Khushboo: "Main tumhe ye yaad dila doon, ki biwi ke aane ke baad sab cheezon par pehla haq uska hota hain"


Khanak can't help letting out a giggle. Shaan just shoots her a glance and goes ahead to pick his blazer from the hanger.


Khushboo holding Shaan's hand "Arre mere devarji naraz kyu ho rahe ho, aao main thoda makeup kara doon aapka. Khanak ke muqable kam nahi lagne chahiye aap"


Shaan: "Come on bhabhi, what nonsense. Vaise bhaiyya kahan hain"


Akshay appears at the door "Shaan, ready hue ke nahi? Dad and chachaji dhund rahe hain tumhe."


Shaan: "Am ready, give me a minute" grabs his watch from the bedside table and steps towards the door, stops. Looks behind at the dresser and starts walking out again.


Khanak calls out "Shaan, tumhara perfume chahiye?"


Shaan turns back with a smile. Khushboo and Akshay are looking amused at the way Khanak hands his favorite perfume, he sprays it and gives it back to her with a whispered "thanks". Walks out the door, holding the blazer in his hand.


Shaan and Akshay walk out of the room. Khushboo immediately turns to Khanak "Tch, kya pyar hain, already know about his perfume and all!"


Khanak blushes and looks around for her reception dress. Khushboo hands her a deep purple saree. Makeup girl quickly removes her makeup from morning and tells her to freshen up and come.


 Wedding Dress:

Reception Dress:

 

She goes in washes up and comes out in a bathroom robe. Then takes her dress change and comes out in the reception dress, holding the dupatta in her hand. "How do I drape this bhabhi?"


Makeup girls: "Layiye main who baad mein kar doongi. Pehle makeup kar lete hain"


Khanak nods and sits down. In next 30 mins her makeup is done, Khanak worries all the time that it's too much. Khushboo coerces her to calm down saying the makeup person knows her job.


Khushboo gets a call on her cell and walks out of the room.


Just when they are done, and the lady takes Khanak's dupatta to drape her, Shaan opens the door and walks in. He sees Khanak in her wedding dress looks at the dupatta not being worn, turns around and walks out saying "Sorry, I had just come to tell it's getting late, we should be starting soon". Just then Khushboo enters, before she can speak anything Shaan leaves the room.


Khushboo: "ye Shaan kyu aaya tha yahan."


Lady: "Who batane ki der ho rahi hain, nikalna chahiye. Kitne sharmile hain"


Khanak is blushing and thinking, "Sharmile! From no angle is he shy"


Remembers the first time they had interacted and how he had retorted "So should I ask you - Why are YOU following me?"


 

Coming up: On popular demand will take it back to flashback of how they met and fell in love in the next few parts and then end it with their SR.

Next: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1682936&PID=46836390&#46836390

~Cheers,
Dish



Edited by dishbhan - 16 September 2011 at 9:19pm

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finally caught up wid all the updates...

loved it dish...HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug

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