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Dard-e-Dil...kuch shayariyaan.. (Page 2)

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Radhe Radhe Rajji,
 
Beautifully written poem, dukh bhari shayari pesh kiya hai aapne.
 
It was one of my farmayish that Dev has to tell a shayari either to Radhika or her statue ever since they showed he is a sculptor.  Shayaad in dono ki dosti hone ke baad this wish of mine will be fulfilled.

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
 You have written beautiful words in poetry expressing Radhika,s feeling  Raj ... ..Recently i have learnt to post the song, just one song crossed my mind , can i post here...Rang Dil Ki Dhadkan Bhi Laati To Hogi...  .
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 Radhika is not blind but has innocence of Mala Sinha in the picture , lost in her dreamworld


Edited by neerjashingla - 13 May 2011 at 11:02am

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
nice n heart rendering poems/shayaries by u raj broClap
u hav got an awesome talent bro...Clap 
not everyone can write poems/shayaries.. just like dat... one really need dat kind of flow of words n thoughts to write dem...

yes bro...Approve ur shayaries suited radev to the'T'Approve

God bless u bro... alwaysBig smile

love
swetha


Edited by sv003 - 13 May 2011 at 11:17am

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
RBG

Aaj kya baat hai hasi ko bhula diya aur aasuo aur dard  ko apna liya.I DONT KNOW MUCH SHAYARI






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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
 
 
  Thanks a lot for  gret shers , I would not call them  sad  but  so very romantic .

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
REALLY HEART TOUCHING SHAYARI YAAR
we were not having GD's so u started BUT ALL ALL OF THEM ARE SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.
5-8 th were like so emotional that i was feeling bad for radev
thankyou sooo muchhh
for this emotional shayaris

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Bhai Wah, yeh sooraj aaj pashchim se kaise nikla ?! LOL Comedy ne shayari ka rang kaise nikala ?!
 
RBG, you are gifted or what and kya shayaris ! Subhan-allah ! Big smile My chota sa contribution is this ghazal which, per moi limited knowledge, is another form of sher-shayari !
 
 
Rads ka andaaz-e-bayaan hai ...
Haal-e-dil yoon unhein sunaya gaya
aap hi ko zubaan banaya gaya ...
 
 
 
 
Dard aur nafrat ke beech sirph ek halki si lakeer hoti hai yaar
iss liye Dev mann hi mann apni feelings ka iss tarah karta hai izhaar ...
 
Ae gham-e-dil kya karoon
ae wahashat-e-dil kya karoon ..
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by radev24 - 13 May 2011 at 12:45pm

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 4:24pm | IP Logged


Kya Bat--Kya Bat--Kya Bat---ClapClapClap
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Each and everyone one of the shayari is just fantastic---Thumbs Up
Each word, each feeling---and the way you put it all together---kudos to you-Thumbs Up----You are talent personified---in such things

And thank you also, for encouraging me---reading your snippets, has made me try my hand at it--(very amateurish)--but it is fun---so here are my tries...

2...Dard hai dil mein par ehsaas nahi hota,
Rota hai dil jab woh paas nahi hota;
Barbaad ho gaye hum unki mohabbat mein,
Aur woh kehte hain ki is tarah pyaar nahi hota..!

Pyaar koi saza nahi,
Pyaar koi dard nahi
Ek mitha sa ehsaas hai
Jo pyaar karne wale hi jaante hai

6...Akela sa mehsoos karo jab tanhai mein,
Yaad meri aaye jab judaai mein,
Mehsoos karna tumhare karib hoon mein,
Jab chahe dekh lena apni hi parchhaein mein...

Door rahekar, door nahi hum
Rahate dil me, unke hum
Anjaane chahe woh, rahate hai humse
Milenge jaroor hum, pyaar ki es raha p
e


 
7...Wo roye to bahut, par mujhse moonh mod kar roye,
Koi majboori hogi to dil tod kar roye,
Mere samne kar diye mere tasveer ke tukde,
Pata chala mere peeche woh unhein jod kar roye...



Dev to Radhika:-

Tasveer ke tukde to jod diye hamne

Par dil ke tukdon ko kaise jodenge hum...

Sapno ki pari thi'hamari sangini

Par hava ke jhoke ne , bana di usko parayi


Ab to jeena hai, use kisi aur ki sochkar

Sochke yahi to, ghabharata hai dil abhi

Uski khamoshi, chubhati hai hume

Lekin majboori ne,.. rukaliye hamare kadam


Ankhoo ki boondo ko, banake hasi

Kaise bitengi yeh tanha zindagi

Na woh khush hai, na khush hai hum

Kaise katenge yeh jeevan ke pal

 

Kanha ki leela, kya rang layegi

Kya hamari astha, naya rang layegi




Edited by radhika5 - 13 May 2011 at 9:14pm

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