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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: mansi_47

me 4 miss him




list aur lambii kro itne men updy krun   😆


touba shrafat ka zamanq nhii hai... all r in love wid luchaa... choryan biger rhii hen 😆
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list aur lambii kro itne men updy krun   😆


touba shrafat ka zamanq nhii hai... all r in love wid luchaa... choryan biger rhii hen 😆



achha ji toh ye baat hai...Mahi ji if we start making a list then IF ke pg chote paar jayenge😉

ab bhai sharafat ki kya baat hai...jaisi writer waise hi readers😆 aur iss baar mein inn sabke saath hoon abb in he pyaar hai toh hai...aab Arjun luichha ho ya chichura...zamane se koi farq nehi parta...tumne suna nehi pyaar kya toh darna kya hai...baas yehi smajh lo...aur as moon said Arohi hai na luichha ko sudhar ne ke liye🤣

choriyan bigar nehi gayi tumhari asar hai Mahi...readers ko sirf pyaar hai...tum toh bhag bhi gayi thi iss luichha ke saath 🤣 Mahi Badnam Hui Darling Arjun ke liye🤣



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Posted: 11 years ago
Mahi,simpl sa theory hai hamesha ek typ ke arjun ko padte padte achanak agar aisa besharm,luccha arjun mile to wo jyada interestng ho jata hai. Aur positive se jyada negative thng hame attract karti hai. Jaise hame HP se jyada DK pasand tha,KSA se jyada RPS pasand tha. Samjhi.
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<font size="2">achha ji toh ye baat hai...Mahi ji if we start making a list then IF ke pg chote paar jayenge😉

ab bhai sharafat ki kya baat hai...jaisi writer waise hi readers😆 aur iss baar mein inn sabke saath hoon abb in he pyaar hai toh hai...aab Arjun luichha ho ya chichura...zamane se koi farq nehi parta...tumne suna nehi pyaar kya toh darna kya hai...baas yehi smajh lo...aur as moon said Arohi hai na luichha ko sudhar ne ke liye🤣

choriyan bigar nehi gayi tumhari asar hai Mahi...readers ko sirf pyaar hai...tum toh bhag bhi gayi thi iss luichha ke saath 🤣 Mahi Badnam Hui Darling Arjun ke liye🤣
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acha jii ..dekun gii kitne lambii comment kroge 😉

wah kya logic hai... sara credit mete sar

men nhii bhagii..mujhe sare arjun passand hen...agr sb k sath bhagii to sari life bhagne men guzar jay giu 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: moonkmh

Mahi,simpl sa theory hai hamesha ek typ ke arjun ko padte padte achanak agar aisa besharm,luccha arjun mile to wo jyada interestng ho jata hai. Aur positive se jyada negative thng hame attract karti hai. Jaise hame HP se jyada DK pasand tha,KSA se jyada RPS pasand tha. Samjhi.



wah wah kya logic hai ..ache se smjh gaii 😉
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CHAPTER-8




                   He slipped her dress from her silky shoulders.His grip tightened on her waist dt nailed her back in his chest.Her enchanting fragrance was driving him crazy.He let his lips work on her sexy shoulder.She fall her head back. .her moans. .her teasy whispers in calling his name,turned him soo oN.He turned her around in arms,slowly moved away her silky hairs to gt clear view of her beautiful face.As soon his eyes recognize her. .His eyes shot open.
 
    He sat up on his bed,in shock:thank God ye sirf khwab tha.
He was feeling hot even in his black T-shorts.He ran fingers in his hairs:kya combination tha. .'hot & horror' is ladki ne mera jeena haraam kr dya hai,khwab men bhi peecha nhi chorti.
His eyes winded to saw her. ."his nightmare Miss Arohi" standing near his bed.Her eyes suspicious,her hand had a cup of coffee.He shook his head in disbelief:ye subha subha mere room men?Impossible!
He confused: mean men ab bhi khwab dekh rha hun. .khwab men khwab.
He rested his hands behind his head,comfortabely leaned back on bed smirk:mere lye coffee lai hai,wese bhi khwab men to sb kuch possible hai.
He ordered:ye mug yahan rkh do.
She quietly placed it on da bed side table.To clear his confusion he hold her wrist,confused:kitni real lg rhi hai.
Within a moment,she grab his hand,dip his fingers in hot coffe which made him jump in pain.
Arohi wid smirk:toot gai neend?jag gaey?
He blowed on his fingers,angrily:tum yahan mere room men,mere ghar men kya kr rhi ho?
She gave hm glass of water in whch he kept his burning fingers.
Arohi:men kal raat ko aai thi,aur 4,5 din tk yahien rhun gi.
Arjun annoyed:kyun tumhare ghar walo ne tumhe nikal dya?
She folded her arms across her chest:sb ko apne jesa smjha hai?
She added:sb log shadi attend krne Delhi gaey hen.Office men buht kaam tha islye Rudr uncle ne leave nhi dii. rehne ki jga ka prblm tha to unhune bola yahan raho.
Arjun grittng his teeth:pura ghar chor k mera sar hi mila hai?subha subha shakal dikha di. .din kitna bhyank guzre ga.
Arohi annoyed:mujhe koi shok nhi hai,tumhari dadi ne mujhe force kya tha tumhe jagane k lye.
Arjun:jgane k lye kaha tha,jalane k lye nhi...men tumhari dadi ko hi complain krunga.
Arohi quickly:han to mana krdo apne dad ko k tumhe mujh se shadi nhi krni
He lukd away.She continue:kyunke agr men tumhari life men rhi to roz tumhari subha aese hi hogi ya shayd is se bhi bhyank.
She added:aur kya complain kro ge dadi se?tumhe khwabo ki dunya se bahr lane ka koi aur option bhi nhi tha.
He smiled mischvly,whisper:aese khwabon se koi bahr aana bhi nhi chahe ga.
Arohi suspicsly:tum khwab men mujhe dkh rhe the?
He gave her such smirk whch made her blood boil.
Arohi irritatd:tum mujhe khwab men nhi dk skte!
He raised his eyebrow:xcuse me! . .meri aankhen hen,mera khwab hai,men jis marzi ko jese chahe. .
He scanned her head to toe:jahan jahan dekhun tumhe kya?
She felt her nerves were going to brust:shutup. .bhar men jao,apni in burnt fingerz k sath.meri tarf se morning gift smjho.
She turned to went he call her from behind.As she turned to face hm he tk out his fingerz from glass throw water on her.
Arohi shocked:meri dress.
Arjun:ye meri tarf se. .men kisi ka gift udhar nhi rkhta.
Arohi lukd around for smthng to hit his bloody head.She grabbed his blanket tried to pulled it away from him.He pulled it back wid a jerk dt made her fall on him.
   Their eyes lost in eachoter. .Their lips close enough to feel eachother breath. Both luked at door which had opened by Purvi.Arohi quickly straigthend herself.Her hert felt a pinch reading Purvi bitter gaze,dt was telling'dis chalu ladki spoiling her bhola bhala bro'. After giving her disgust luk she left.
Arjun calmly:to kahan the hum?
She gave him killing luk.
Arjun:subha subha ladko ka blanket nhi uthate. . .baad men tum bolti mene alert nhi kya.
Arohi angrily:shut up. .gande,gathya aadmi.
She rush to door while he yelled from behind: my pleasure!!!

     In office,Arohi was talking on phone wid Shefali.
Arohi irritatd:ek to wo '3rd class' already hai mera demag khrab krne k lye...aur dadi wo to smjhti hai men un k paas ideal bahu bne ki training lene aai hun.wo to aaj us langur ki hr fav. dish mujhe sikha kr rehti.Thank God Rudr uncle aagaey,unhe yaad dilane k lye k men yahan office k kaam ki wja se ruki hun..aur mujhe apne sath office le aaey.
Shefali remind:wo '3rd class aur langur' nxt month men tumhara fiance bn jay ga aur phr ptti.
Arohi rolled her eyes:men vese hi buht preshan hun mujhe aur preshan mt kr.
Shefali confusd: mujhe smjh hi nhi aa rha,jb tumhe wo passand nhi to tum ne us se shadi k lye haan kyun ki hai?
Arohi remain quiet,she cudnt tk risk of telling Rudr plan to her stupid friend.
Shefali:so gai kya? . .tum itne preshan ho aur men tumhare lye kuch nhi kr skti.u knw na hostel rules;4rnds nt allowed.
Arohi:hey its ok. Vese to koi prblm nhi hai.She paused:mene tumhe btaya tha naa Saleel aur Tina k bare men.
Shefali:hun. .
Arohi:mujhe to yakeen nhi ho rha log itne diplomatc bhi ho skte hen. .aaj jb mene breakfast table pr Saleel Purvi ko sath dekha. .to lga kitna pyar hai dono k beech..aur ab wo Saleel  us Tina k sath 1 ghante se cabin bnd kr k. .
Shefali:aru mujhe lagta hai tumhe chup nhi rehna chahey.
Arohi depressd:to kya men Rudr uncle ko bta dun?
Shefali:nhi. .tum Arjun se baat kyun nhi krti?
Arohi:us se kya baat krun?
Shefali:usi se to baat kro,us k dii aur jiju ka matter hai.aur wo Tina ko bhi janta hai. .ho skta hai wo kuch aesa kre jes se sb theek ho jaey.
Arohi:theek hai. .chlo men tum se raat men baat krti hun.
 She cut da call went to canteen for hot coffee dt cud refresh her mind.On da way she bump into HIM.Before she luked up,he whisperd:I love you.
His seductive voice melt into her.She didnt wantd to admit dt he was luking steamy hot in his business attire.
She lukd up & lost in his brown eyes which had their own speciality.His words were soundng like music:tumhari aankhon men dkhta hun to sari dunya bhool jata hun. .kuch yaad nhi rehta aur na hi yaad rkhna chahta hun. .tumhare baal jb bhi. .
She listend hm widout a blink.His eyes translatng his words.Finally her eyes noticed bluetooth on his ear.She shrugged her shoulder,walked inside.
He annoyed: i call u later baby..No but,bye.
An old peon walked inside whr dy two were alone.
Peon:sir,mam aap ko kuch chahey tha mujhe bta dete.
Arjun kept arm around his shoulder,asked loudly:aap k khyal men ek ladki aese ladke k sath shadi k lye kese tyar ho skti hai jo ek time men do ladkyun se flirt kr skta ho.
Kaka confusd luk at him.
While making coffee she thought for a way of dis trouble.
Peon:sahab pta nhi.
She walked to them:kyunke ye IT ka zamana hai,buht mehngai hai.Girls love 'da things' jo ek time men 'do' kaam handle kr skti hun.
They luked her in dead shock.She handed dm coffee,walked out shrugng her shoulder:hv a gud day.




   'cheeth cheeth' Arjun talking on cell(sittng in living room) again luk up at dining area where Arohi was standing.He lukd around in deserted living room.
Romit:tera dhyan khin aur hai,tu meri baat theek se nhi sun rha..mujhe Shefali ka no. chahey.
Arjun:sun to raha hun. .
He again luk at her as se mk noise wid spoon & plate for getting his attention.Romit:tu sch bta tere aas paas koi ladki hai naa?
Arjun confused on her behaviour:haan.
Romit:tbhi tu meri baat nhi sun rha.
He excitdly:kya keh rhi hai?
Arjun:ishare kr rhi hai.
Romit:wow. .kese ishare?
Arjun:mujhe smjh nhi aa rha..yahen aa rhi hai.
Arohi walked to him,whisperd:terrace par aao,abhi.
Sayng dis she quickly went 4rm dere.
Romit excitdly:kya hua?
Arjun:chath par bula rhi hai. .abhi.
Romit:wah yaar teri to nikal pari..
Arjun sighed:men Arohi ki baat kr rha hun.
Romit shock:what? phr to bilkul nhi jana.upar chath se dhkha de kr tera murder krna hoga.
Arjun:ye ladki mujhe bilkul smjh nhi aati.
Romit chuckld:pr mujhe to smjh aagya.tu ja shayd tere lye koi special surprise ho.koi romantic date. .
He cut da call.

 On terrace,Arohi:kb se wait kr rhi hun,itna late kyun hue?
Arjun luk her puzzled.She lukd around,slowly:tumhe kisi ne aate hue to nhi dekha?
Her attitude unknwngly showing him wrong direction.Arohi:wahan us side pr aao mere sath.
He raised his eyebrow:kyun?
She hold his hand,asked him to follow him.She made him sat down in corner behind swing,too joined him.
He cud read hesitation on her face.She was nervous'revealng some one's jiju affair was nt such easy task'.While her nervous luk made him sure 'there will be more dn a KISS'.To set himself in romantic mood was nt so hard after lukng her so close,in moon light.
Arohi tk a deep breath:mujhe . .mujhe tumhe buht zruri baat btani hai.
Arjun:baatien to hoti rhengi. .baad men!
Arohi:kese baad men?. .mujhe abhi baat krni hai. wo jo Tina hai.
Arjun annoyed:baatien baad men krenge,pehle wo kro jis k lye mujhe yahan bulaya hai.
Arohi irritatd:yehi baat btane k lye to bulaya hai.
His eyes popped out:tumhe 'sirf baat' krni hai?tum ne yahan mujhe sirf baat krne k lye bulaya hai?
Arohi:haan to baat hi to krte hen.
She paused for a moment,readng disappointment on his face she realized hw close she was sitting wid him.She got up abruptly:tum gande,ghatya hi nhi kam*ne bhi ho.kitni gandi soch hai tumhari.
Arjun:ye baat tum mujhe neeche bhi bta skti thi!
He got up,mockingly:jis trhan tumne ishare kr ke yahan akele terrace pr bulaya hai,kisi bhi ladke ko aesa hi lagta.
Arohi:apna ye logic apne paas hi rkho. .meri galti hai,men bhool gai thi tum kya ho.
She was about to went but he blocked her way:kya baat btani hai,btao?
Arohi stubbornly:mene ab kuch nhi btana,men sb kuch khud hi handle kr lungi.
She walked away bt he pulled her back by grabbing her waist.Her breath caught in her throat as her back hit his chest.
He whisperd:meri baat abhi khtm nhi hui.
She felt lost of words feelng his warmth breath on sensitive skin of her neck.She asked:k k..konsi baat?
He turned her around playfully.In a moment she was in cage of his arms.Her stomach tied in knots in result of his dangerous gaze.
His breath slowly blowng hairs from her rosy cheeks:yehi baat k hum baat kr skte hen. .aftrall u r my soon to be fiance.
She tried to free:nhi. .i mean . .wo
She lied: hmari family ki ladkyun par curse hai,jo bhi shadi se pehle hmare paas aaey ga,wo marjaey ga.
He jumped back in shock:what?
Her face lit up seeng his shockng response.She wrapped arms around his neck:aur tumhe maar k mujhe buht khushi hogi.
He was about to jerked her hand back,paused as Purvi came lukng for Arjun.
 Arohi quickly mvd back in embarrasment.Purvi lukd away in disgust:jb free ho jao to dinner k lye neeche aa jana.sb wait kr rhe hen.
She went down.Arohi was feelng so low,she lukd Arjun angrily.Arjun:ab mene kya kya?tum mujhe ooper laen thi.
She walked to door,He called her from behind:kyun ja rhi ho?dii ne kaha to hai,jb free ho jao jb aana.
He brust into laugh while she went downstair shakng her head.


 In Saleel cabin,Arohi:ye sb kuch pehle se plan tha.pehle wo shoot k bahane late night aap k sath office men ruki.Phr akele men tbyat khrab hone ka drama kya.aap ne us ko smbhalne ki koshsh ki,god men utha kr gari men bithaya. .usko ko ghar tk,us k room men chor k aaey.aur us k kehne par us k boyfriend ne aap dono ki pics shoot krli. . .jinhe dekh kr kuch aur hi lagta hai. wo to aaj mene Tina aur us k boyfriend ki baatien sun li,vrna mujhe sch kbhi pta nhi chlta.
Saleel rub his forehead:men kya btata?ye dunya sirf ladkyun ki baat par yakeen krti hai.Sb ko lgta Tina schii hai.koi mera yakeen nhi krta.
Arohi sat nxt to him:aap kyun blackmail ho rhe ho?aap Purvi dii ko khud sch bta do.
Saleel got up,shook his head in horror:no. .wo kbhi mera yakeen nhi kre gi.
He added:ye pyaar buht ajeeb hota hai Arohi.kbhi buht mazbut bnata hai,kbhi buht kamzor. shayd tum theek ho,Purvi ko in sb se zyada mere pyar pr yakeen ho lekn agar aesa na hua. .
He sadly luk at her:she iz very precious for me. .my 1st & last love.men itna mazbut nhi hun k itna bra risk le skun.
Arohi:phr aap kya krenge?jb us ne apne boyfriend ko btaya aap ne use aur paise dene se mana krdya to us k boy4rnd ne us se pics mangi k wo khud un ko use krega,apni tareeke se.
Saleel sighed:kal k newspaper men chapne ki dhmki dega. .mera career,meri family sb khtam..pechle ek mahene se men blackmail ho rha hun,tng aa gya hun men.
Arohi shock:wo log aesa kese kr skte hen?is se Tina k modelng career pr bhi to asar pare ga.
Saleel:ab use kesa dar?tum ne use vese hi job se nikal dya hai.in sb se to us ki aur bhi publicity hogi.
Arohi thought for a moment:dnt worry,men sb smbhal lungi.
She tk her cell:mujhe buht zruri kaam hai men ja rhi hun.
At da door she bump wid Arjun:tum kahen nhi ja skti.
Saleel & Arohi lukd him confuse.He shouted:wht da hell u think of yourself?Kis se pooch kr tum ne Tina ko job se nikala hai.
Hearng his shouting,employed gatherd around cabin.
Rudr came:ye sb kya ho rha hai Arjun?
Arjun:apni is ladli se phuche jis ne sari dunya ko apna gulam smjh rkha hai.is ne hmari imptnt model Tina ko bger kisi ki wja k fire kr dya.ye jaante hue bhi k hmare kitne shoot uncmplt hain.Aaj 4 bje us ka shot hai,clients ko 7 bje tk pics chaheyn.
Arohi & Saleel remain quiet.
Arjun:ab hm Tina ko minte kr k wapis bulaeyn,jis se us ki paison ki demand aur brhe gii.ya phir-koi aur model jo k in teen ghanto men impossible hai.aur agar koi faltu model mil bhi gaii aur client ne use except nhi kya to? . .Sb khtam!sara advance wapis krna prega. . sare contract khtam!
Rudr:tumhare paas kya jawab hai Arohi.
Saleel tensed:wo. .
Arohi stubbornly luk in Arjun challengng eyes:shot 4 bje hi hoga. .7 bje tk clients ko pic puhnch jaeyngi.
Rudr:it should. .Everyone gt back to work.Saleel mere sath aao.
All left dese two alone.Arjun smirkd:ye 7 kb bjenge?. .tum is office se bahir aur mere ghar se bhi.
He went out confidntly.

Precap:  Arohi check her moustache & beard in bar mirror.She turned & bump with him.Her face turned white. .She cud recognize dis colonge in million.She lukd up in his naughty brown eyes.
Arjun patted her shoulder:bari jaldi hai "Sardar Sahab"

  Finally updtd! . .hv updtd aftr so long time.Extremely sorry if it disapoint u.
Please do comment if u want me to continue.
Next will be SS:MOTHER OF HIS CHILD
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1st yayyy[:D/]
Is ki updt to bilkul xpt nahi kar rahi thi...mahi surprse dyti ja rahi ho mujhy lol 😃 🤗 Edited by M00NA - 11 years ago
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1st yayyy[:D/]
Is ki updt to bilkul xpt nahi kar rahi thi...mahi surprse dyti ja rahi ho mujhy lol 😃 🤗



yup u 1st😉

haan mujh se unexpected kaam hi hote hen😆

love u too.. hope u enjoy😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mahi u update..i thought u completely forgot about this one...i got back memories of LI dont know why ..but it feels good to read and remember previous works...when ever i read ur work i remember KMH but today surprisingly LI :) 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: piamist

Mahi u update..i thought u completely forgot about this one...i got back memories of LI dont know why ..but it feels good to read and remember previous works...when ever i read ur work i remember KMH but today surprisingly LI :) 



 yup finally... mujhe bhi yakeen nhi aa rha😆

da lovely comments i gt for LI mk me feel so special☺️

thank u so much for ur love🤗