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aik dil keh do tukhre premeer ff (Discontinued ) (Page 3)

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
nice concept
waiting for more

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angelina_angel

nice concept
waiting for more


just writing the next chap and i will update it today. Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Chapter 2

after showing so much hatred to gay3 preet goes to a room and locked the door from inside and stand infront of heer's picture which was with a garland.he removed that garland and replaced it with a new one.he stared at heer pic for sometimes and then breakdown infront of his bhabhi picture.kyun bhabhi aap hum sab ko chodh keh kyun chali gain,aur woh bhi itni door keh jahaan se koi insaan nahi lut sakta.aakir apne bhaiya ,veera aur maa ki saza hum sab ko kyun di ,bataye mujhe kyun di apne humme itni badhi saza.aapke jaane keh baad sab kuch badal gaya hai bhabhi sab kuch,aik tarah se mujhe to maa se nafrat hogai hai ,unho ne jo kuch aapke saath kiya uske liye mein unko kabhi maaf nahi karsaktha bhabhi kabhi nahi.mein janta hoon keh aapki maut aik hadsa thi magar agar mom ki wajahse pb ne aapko ghar se nahi nikala hota to shayad woh accident khabhi nahi hua hota mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai bhabhi aapki maut ne hum sab ko hila kar rakh diya tha kyunke uss accident mein aapka chehra poori tarah se jal gaya tha aur pb to aik zinda lash bangaye the.naa woh kisi se baat karte aur na hi kuch bolte bas apki tarweer ko dekhte rehte par maa ko kuch farq nahi pardhta tha unne bas maya bhabhi aur veera se dilchaspi thi.mere dil mein jo unke liye pyaar tha woh aapki maut ke saath hi mar gaya bhabhi.jis din is ghar ne apni bahu ko koya us din maa ne mujhe bhi ko diya bhabhi,wapis aajao bhabhi hum sab ko aap ki buhat zaroorat hai kaskar pb aur meher ko.preet cried and went to open the door when he saw PREM standing there.preet just stared at prem and went away.prem slowly entered and looked the door and goes towards heer photo.he took out heer's photo from the wall and sat down on the bed.
tumko bhi hai khabar
mujhko bhi hai pata
horaha hai juda
dono ka raasta
door jaakar bhi mujhse
tum meri yaadon mein rehna
khabhi alvida naa kehana
khabhi alvida naa kehna
prem remembered all their moments.first one was the soap scene,then the mandap scene in which he stood up for his heer,then when they became one i.e their suhag raat and lastly heer's death.kyun chodhke chali gai tum mujhe heer pata hai mein tumhare bagair kitna akela hogaya hoon.6 saal hogaye hain tumhe koye hue aur in 6 saalon mein maa ne buhat koshish ki mein kisi aur se shadi karlon magar sach to yeh hai keh prem sirf aur sirf heer ka hai aur heer sirf aur sirf prem ki hai.aagar  aaj tum mere saath nahi ho to sirf mere hi wajahse nahi ho kyunke 6 saal phele meine tumhe apni zindagi se nikala tha,is ghar se nikala tha aur agar meine aisa nahi kiya hota tu aaj shayad tum zinda hoti.prem cries bitterly remembering heer and her memories Cry Cry and hugged her photo and says meine maa ko sirf isliye maaf kiya kyunke agar mein unko maaf na karta to tumhari aatama ko takleef hoti jo mein nahi chahta tha aur preet to mujhse buhat door hogaya hai.hum aik ghar mein rehte hue bhi itne door hogaye.heer yeh sab kyun hua.plzz wapis aajao.


Edited by heer_varsha - 14 May 2011 at 4:45am

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
wht the heck! heer is dead???
 
no! they must hv misundrstd! heer must b alive sumwher !
 
plz dnt say that she is dead! cnt wa8 for d nxt update! update soon plz!!! n try 2 update a big 1 if possible!
 
thx for d pm dear!

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
thanks for the pm...
wonderful update...
heer is alive right?????with chahat...
update the next part soon...

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:53am | IP Logged
WHAT?!?! OMG!?!?!? Heer's deadShocked, Nooo...I'm sure they misunderstood as her whole face was burnt

Everyone is suffering because of gaytri Angry

and awww preet is such a sweetheart, I felt so bad for him...the way he broke down infront of his bhabi awww

and prem...feel so bad for him...he feels all guilty now because of gaytriAngry, he will always regret sending heer out of tht house and loosing he forever because of gaytriAngry...and awww he forgave tht women just cuz of heer...Please heer wapis ajao apne prem ke liye!

Loved it how prem and preet broke infront of heer's pic and asked her to come back...it just showed that how empty everyone's life is without her!

Waiting for next update...really wanna know what happens!
Thankx for the PmBig smile

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Chapter 3

In london,there u see a big house with a beautiful garden where two cute little kids were playing.a girl slowly walked towards them and hugged them from their back and says surprise.chahat and aditya yelled sneha maasiii aap aagayen humne aapko buhat miss kiya.andbot of them kissed her on her cheek.acha yeh batao my cute little angels that tumhari mom kahan hai says sneha.as usual mom apni kisi  presentation ki taiyari karrahi hongi .says aditya.ok mein tumhari mom se baat karke aati hoon tab tak tum log yaheen khelo phir hum sab mil kar khelenge ok.syas sneha yes maasi both aditya and chahat said at the sametime.now inside the house u see a women dressed in the buissness attire and was talking to her manager when suddenly sneha hugged her from back.the women turned back and there u see that its none other than... HEER.
sneha tu achanak kaise aagayi says heer and hugged her back ,bas heer tumhari aur bachon ki yaad aarahi thi to socha apna trip todha short kardoon said sneha .acha hua sneha keh tu aagai miujhe aik buissness conference keliye canada jaana hai aur uskeliye mujhe aaj nikalna hai isliye bachon ko tujhe sambalana hai.says heer.Mujhe pata hai heer tujhe kuch kehne ki zarrorat nahi hai.mein bachon ka achi tarah se khayal rakhoon gi.ab tu jaa teri flight ka time horaaha hoga.take care heer says sneha.yes i will says heer.both heer and sneha came down and told aditya and chahat that heer is going to canada for some business purpose and will be back soon.heer kissed both of her kids and went away.
back to canada,prem suddenly felt heer's presence and felt that heer is coming back to him forever .meher put her hand on prem's shoulder and says kab tak aap heer di ki yaadon keh shahre jiyenge prem jiju.heer di keh jaane keh baad ap khabhi bhi aage nahi bardh pai jiju.kyun jiju.prem says tum jaanti ho meher 6 saal phele meine uske dil ko kitni takleef ponchai thi,usko apni zindagi se nikal diya tha yahan takh keh usse is ghar se bhi nikal diya tha magar mujhe yeh nahi pata tha keh heer naa sirf meri zindagi se chali jaayegi balke iss duniya se bhi chali jaayegi.woh kyun chali gai meher,uske bina mujhse yeh zindagi ji hi nahi jaati har pal mujhe aisa mehsoos hota hai keh heer mere aaas paas hai aur mujhe dekh rahi hai.meher mujh se uske bagair nahi raha jaata.nahi raha jata.jijiu sambhaliye apne aap ko.bhale hi heer di hamare saath na ho woh hume dekh rahi hain aur unko buhat dukh horaha hoga keh aap unko yaad karke ro rahe hain.syas meher.preet was standing outside prem's room and was listening to meher and prem's conversation.

precap:heer is at canada's airport and is walking towards the exit when suddenly she bumped into someone and when she see's the person she is shocked.


Edited by heer_varsha - 14 May 2011 at 5:46am

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awesommeee too good very nice lovely parts loved both parts waitinggg for next asap.

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