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aik dil keh do tukhre premeer ff (Discontinued ) (Page 12)

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Thanks for all the updates it was awesomeClap
specially last part oneee lovely romantic scenes of Premeer Heart
waiting for next part updateee soonDay Dreaming

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
hey...
wonderful update...
loved premeer romance...
do continue soon and thanks for the pm...

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Chapter 11

both prem and heer were sitting on heer's bed and were hugging each other.heer's head was placed on prem's shoulder and prem's arm was around heer's body.both of them were silent but the heer broke the silence and says prem tumhe meri yaad aati thi.haan heer tumhari buhat  yaad aati thi mujhe ,aur shayad yeh che saal tumhari yaadon keh shahre hi guzar gai.heer kissed prem on his cheek.ouch says heer.heer kya hua tumhe ,tumhe kahin dard to nahi horaha hai naa.says a worried prem.mein bilkul teekh hoon prem bas woh todha sa dard hua tha choot mein.says heer.heer tumhe ab aaram ki zaroorat hai mein chalta hoon.ok apna khayal rakhna .mein tumhe phone karonga aur kal tumse milne bhi aaonga.take care heer luv u.prem kissed heer's forehead and eyes and went away to his office because he had some work
At night,at juneja's house.veera and maya were talking with each other and how they both are feeling guilty for seperating prem and heer.veera cried and says maya bhabhi heer bhabhi to hamesha mera bhala hi chahti theen magar meine unke saath kia kiya ,unko pem bhahiya ki zindagi se nikal vadiya,is ghar se nikal vadiya,maa ko jiss bahu se sabse ziyada muhabat thi uss bahu se nafrat karadi meine.aur nihal,nihal to mujhse pyaar bhi buhat karta tha magar meine kiya kia uss ko jail bhejwa diya,mein paison ki lalach mein itni andhi hogai thi keh sab kuch meine apne hatoon se katam kardiya yahan tak apne bache ko bhi meine apne hatoon se maar diya.but little did they knew that gay3 had listened to their confession and shouted veraaa.both maya and veera turned around and saw gayatri standing there .gay3 moved forward and took both veera and maya's hand and pulled them .maa chordiye naa buhat dard horaha hai says maya wincing in pain.but today noone could stop gay3.gay3 brought both veera and maya in the hall and then leaved their hands.every single person came in the hall to see what had happened.bolo veera aur maya kyun kiya yeh sab tum dono ne bolo.aakir in sab mein heer ki kiya galti thi joh tum dono ne uss ko apna shikar banaya.sirf aur sirf tum dono ki wajahse meine uss lardkhi pe ilzam lagaya jis ne is ghar ko shambala,mujhe shambala  aur woh bhi tab jab hum sab ko laga tha keh prem is duniya mein nahi raha,aur badle mein meine usse kya diya nafrat di,tum log ki wajhase heer ki maut hui sirf aur sirf tum log ki wajhase ,shayad aik aurat hokar mein tum dono ko maaf kardeti magar aik saas aur aik maa hone keh naate mein tum dono ko kabhi maaf nahi karsakthi kabhi nahi kyunke tum dono ki wajahse heer ki maut hogai.jisske liye mein tum dono ko kabhi maaf nahi karongi.chali jaao meri nazron keh samne se.gay3 startec to cry bitterly as she remembers heer and her memories and how she treated heer.meher and kulraj consoled gay3 and lalit weeped remembering heer.preet,harman and stared at each other and went into their room.gay3 went inside the room where heer's picture was hanged with a garland and stood infront of heer picture and cried and says heer beta apni maa ko maaf kardena,tune mere liye aur is parivar keliye itna kuch kiya magar meine tujhe badle mein sirf dukh ,takleef aur nafrat di.tu aaj jahan kahi bhi hai aur agar mujhe dekh rahi hai to apni is maa ko maaf kardena beta.kulraj came and hugged gay3.

Precap:heer 's car stops at signal and gay3 sees her

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged

awesomeee too good very nice part lovely update waitinggg for next asap.



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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
awsum! luved it! finally d truth is ouT!
nw gay3 wil bring heer bck home!
thx for d pm dear!

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
very well written...
at last gay3 came to know about veera and maya...

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will update tonight Wink

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