aik dil keh do tukhre premeer ff (Discontinued ) - Page 16

it was really so sweet

awsum! luved it!!!

Chapter 17

heer cornered prem to a wall and traced her fingers on his face.prem was shocked to see a different side of heer.she came closer to prem and kissed him on his lips.prem was shocked but was enjoying this different side of heer.he also kissed her back and heer who was in romantic mood kissed prem oh hi cheeks one by one and on his eyes.after kissing him she starts to move back but prem being prem gets hold of heer waist and pulled her closer and started to nuzzle on her nose.heer says prem tum kya karrahe ho koi aajayega.prem says apni biwi ko pyaar karraha hoon kyun kisi ko problem hai aur waise bhi galti meri nahi tumhari hai .heer says meri galti magar kaise prem .prem says kisi koi haq nahi hai keh woh itna khubsurat dekhe.kisi ki bhi niyat (intentions) kharab hosakthi hai.heer says premm tum bhi naa,din ba din badmash hote jaarahe ho ,chaht bilkul tumpe gayi hai.magar aditya mujhpe gaya hai.prem  says ofcourse chahat mujhpe hi to jaayegi ,meri princess jo hai woh and dekhna jab woh mujhse mile gi naa to mein aur woh dono milkar tumhe tang karenge.prem brings heer so close to him that their noses r almost touching.he was about to kiss her when suddenly preet coughed ahem ahem.prem and heer were irritated and saw preet standing there watching them naughtily.preet says pb and bhabhi agar apka romance katam ho chuka ho tu kya aap chal sakthe hain,sab aapka intezaar karrahe hain,cake cut karne ka time hogaya hai.prem and heer were embarrassed and moved towards the hall quietly.
cake was cutted and preet and meher fed everyone.prem and heer decided to tell everybody about their kids.prem says maa bauji mujhe aur heer ko aap logon se kuch kehna hai,actually kuch batana hai.lalit says haan prem puttar bol naa.prem says woh bauji mere aur heer keh do bache hain aur woh is waqt london mein hain.lalit and gay3 r happy to listen about their grand children and everyone else was also haapy.both brothers hugged prem and congratulated him and kulraj,meher,veera and gay3 hugged heer.gay3 says to lalit mein dadi ban gai aur aap dada.lalit says han gay3 mujhe bhi isi din ka intezaar tha keh kab heer aur prem keh bache is duniya mein aayen aur kab mein unse khelon.preet says ab tu arjun aur gungun ko bhi company mil jayeegi magar bhabhi yeh to bataye keh aapke bachon ka gender kya hai i mean lardke hain ya lardhkiyaan.heer says mera aik beta aur aik beti hai.heer phone rang and it was sneha from london,she attended her calls and says haan,kaisi hai tu aur bache teekh haina ,says heer but heer didnt noticed that sneha was crying.sneha says heer woh chahat ko...but before sneha could complete her line heer shouts and says sneha kya hua meri chaht ko,woh teekh to ahi naa but line was disconnected.prema nd other were very worried to see heer in that state.she collapsed on floor and started to cry and says to prem,prem london se sneha ka phone tha ,kahin meri chaht ko kuch to nahi hua hoga naa.prem says hamari chaht ko kuch nahi hoga says prem.heer hugged prem

Precap :Dr Robert says Mr Juneja aapki beti chahat ko brain tumour hai.prem is shocked to know this and tears started to flow from his eyes.however heer is not able to bear this shock and faints.heer yelled prem
Edited by heer_varsha - 12 years ago

awsum! luved premeer romance! n family scene!!

thanks for updating...
both the updates were awesome...
loved the twist in the last part...

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Lovely part... loved prem heer scenes... i m looking forward to read the interaction of prem with his children and i hope everything will be fine

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Chapter 18

heer says prem agar chahat ko kuch hogaya naa tu mein apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karongi,kabhi nahi.prem says kuch nahi hoga hamari chahat ko heer,mein usse kuch hone bhi nahi donga,mein wada karta hoon heer,chahat ko tumhari godh mein wapsi lakar rakh doon ga.heer says prem mujhe abhi london jaana hai.preet says bhabhi aap fikar mat karo mein abhi jaake hum sab ki london ki tickets book karwata hoon aur woh bhi jitni jaldi flight ho uski.preet goes to arrange for the tickets.everyone was controlling heer but noone was able to control her emotions.prem made her sit on the chair and made her drink water when preet came and told taht their flight is in 3 hours and they have to leave for airport in an hour.everyone goes back to home to do packing.after an hour,everyone left for airport
In London,heer's house,heer entered and yelled,aditya,chahat but noone answered then she yelled again and called sneha but noone was at home.premand every entered in house and saw heer calling someone.heer tum kisko phone karrahi ho says prem.heer says prem mein sneha ko phone karrahi hoon,pata nahi woh aur bache kahan hain.sneha attended heer's call and heer says sneha kahan ho tum aur bache ,yahan ghar pe to koi bhi nahi hai.sneha says heer mein aur bache hospital mein hai.tum plz jaldi se aajao.and cuts the call.heer says hello sneha,tum hospital mein kyun ho but call was already dropped.heers says prem humhe abhi keh abhi hospital jaana hai.prem says teekh hai heer.and everyone went to hospital
In hospital,sneha was continiously crying and aditya was sitting beside her .heer came and says sneha.aditya runs towards her mom and says mom aap wapis aagayin thankgod,dekhiye naa chahat ko kya hua hai.and aditya started to cry and heer hugged him.sneha walked over to heer and took her towards ICU where chahat was sleeping.heer says sneha mujhe buhat dar lag raha hai,bolo naa meri chahat ko kya hua hai,sneha could say nothing instead she was crying when Doctor Robert came outside and asked for chahat's parents.both heer and prem moved forward and says taht they r the parents of chahat.Dr Robert says i want u to meet in my cabin.its urgrnt and he went away.aditya is shocked to know that prem is his father.papa says aditya .prem turned around and hugged his son and says beta mein chahat ko kuch nahi hone doon ga yeh mera aapse promise hai .heer and prem went to Dr cabin and he asked them to have a seat.prem introduced himself and Dr Robert says .Mr juneja ur daughters report has come and it states that ur daughter chahat is suffering from brain tumour.prem is shocked to know this and tears started to flow from his eyes,but on the other hand heer couldn't bear this  shock and faints .prem yelled heer.

Precap:Juneja Family gets to know about Chahat's Brain tumour