aik dil keh do tukhre premeer ff (Discontinued ) - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 3

In london,there u see a big house with a beautiful garden where two cute little kids were playing.a girl slowly walked towards them and hugged them from their back and says surprise.chahat and aditya yelled sneha maasiii aap aagayen humne aapko buhat miss kiya.andbot of them kissed her on her cheek.acha yeh batao my cute little angels that tumhari mom kahan hai says sneha.as usual mom apni kisi  presentation ki taiyari karrahi hongi .says aditya.ok mein tumhari mom se baat karke aati hoon tab tak tum log yaheen khelo phir hum sab mil kar khelenge ok.syas sneha yes maasi both aditya and chahat said at the sametime.now inside the house u see a women dressed in the buissness attire and was talking to her manager when suddenly sneha hugged her from back.the women turned back and there u see that its none other than... HEER.
sneha tu achanak kaise aagayi says heer and hugged her back ,bas heer tumhari aur bachon ki yaad aarahi thi to socha apna trip todha short kardoon said sneha .acha hua sneha keh tu aagai miujhe aik buissness conference keliye canada jaana hai aur uskeliye mujhe aaj nikalna hai isliye bachon ko tujhe sambalana hai.says heer.Mujhe pata hai heer tujhe kuch kehne ki zarrorat nahi hai.mein bachon ka achi tarah se khayal rakhoon gi.ab tu jaa teri flight ka time horaaha hoga.take care heer says sneha.yes i will says heer.both heer and sneha came down and told aditya and chahat that heer is going to canada for some business purpose and will be back soon.heer kissed both of her kids and went away.
back to canada,prem suddenly felt heer's presence and felt that heer is coming back to him forever .meher put her hand on prem's shoulder and says kab tak aap heer di ki yaadon keh shahre jiyenge prem jiju.heer di keh jaane keh baad ap khabhi bhi aage nahi bardh pai jiju.kyun jiju.prem says tum jaanti ho meher 6 saal phele meine uske dil ko kitni takleef ponchai thi,usko apni zindagi se nikal diya tha yahan takh keh usse is ghar se bhi nikal diya tha magar mujhe yeh nahi pata tha keh heer naa sirf meri zindagi se chali jaayegi balke iss duniya se bhi chali jaayegi.woh kyun chali gai meher,uske bina mujhse yeh zindagi ji hi nahi jaati har pal mujhe aisa mehsoos hota hai keh heer mere aaas paas hai aur mujhe dekh rahi hai.meher mujh se uske bagair nahi raha jaata.nahi raha jata.jijiu sambhaliye apne aap ko.bhale hi heer di hamare saath na ho woh hume dekh rahi hain aur unko buhat dukh horaha hoga keh aap unko yaad karke ro rahe hain.syas meher.preet was standing outside prem's room and was listening to meher and prem's conversation.

precap:heer is at canada's airport and is walking towards the exit when suddenly she bumped into someone and when she see's the person she is shocked.
Edited by heer_varsha - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesommeee too good very nice lovely parts loved both parts waitinggg for next asap.
Posted: 12 years ago

Superb, awesome partπŸ‘...aww i feel so sad for prem and preet...awww preet is such a sweet person he so much respects heer and prem he is so heartbroken this is just because of thet stupid evil gay3😑

awww prem and heer has twins. i am so looking forward to read about the encounter between heer and prem and what happened in the past about heers death and all...

Thanks for the PM..😊

Posted: 12 years ago
rockin!!
 
heer n prem hv 2 children chahat n aditya! gr8!!!
 
heer cumin in canada! feelin sad seein prem in such condition!
whom does she meet in airport???
wa8in 2 noe! awsum! luved it!!! update soon! wil b wa8in!!
 
thx for d pm dear!
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Heeer πŸ€—
super work dear rlly ❀️ it
awo feeling 😭 4 my prem
per 
πŸ˜ƒ heer is a life
nd premeer hv twins *chahat & adtiya* wawo😍
fabulous work yr w8ing 4 PremeeR melanπŸ˜‰
plzzz do update sooon 😳
varna spam kar karki tang kar doongi tujhi jaanthi honaa mujhi LolzπŸ˜† 

HeeR
πŸ‘

Edited by _HaNo_ - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by _HaNo_


Hi Heeer πŸ€—
super work dear rlly ❀️ it
awo feeling 😭 4 my prem
per 
πŸ˜ƒ heer is a life
nd premeer hv twins *chahat & adtiya* wawo😍
fabulous work yr w8ing 4 PremeeR melanπŸ˜‰
plzzz do update sooon 😳
varna spam kar karki tang kar doongi tujhi jaanthi honaa mujhi LolzπŸ˜† 

HeeR
πŸ‘



haan haan janti hoon tujhe but it will take sometime to make premeer re unite.thanks for commenting luv u 😳 πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
wohhh thanks for the awesome update
Heer is alive woow hope Prem and Heer meet soon
that Gay3 doesnt intefere in their life anymore
waitingg for next update pleaseee sooon
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by AMMI6


wohhh thanks for the awesome update
Heer is alive woow hope Prem and Heer meet soon
that Gay3 doesnt intefere in their life anymore
waitingg for next update pleaseee sooon


thanks for ur encouragement,maybe gay3 will interfere in their life and maybe not but for that u have to read the ff.will continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 4

at juneja's office,preet aaj Mr sabrawal aane wale hain america se isliye mein chahta hoon keh tu unhe airport lene jaaye .says prem .jee pb mein Mr Sabrawal ko airport jaakar receive karloonga.aik baat poochon aapse bhaiya says preet.pooch na preet aaj se phele tune mujhse baat karne ki permission kab li jo aaj leraha .bol naa kya baat hai says prem.bhai kya aapko heer bhabhi ki yaad aati hai says preet .this question shocked prem because for six years preet had talked to him only for business matters and now he was talking about heer.haan preet mujhe buhat yaad aati hai heer ki kyunke woh meri zindagi thi aur zindagi keh bagair koi insan zinda nahi rehta magar mujhe pata hai keh aaj jahan kahi bhi meri heer hogi woh mujhe dekh rahi hogi aur mujhse utna hi pyaar karti hogi jitna phele kiya karti thi.tu jaanta hai preet mujhe lagta hai keh shayad meri galti ki wajahse bhagwan ne heer ko mujhse cheen liya thake mein heer ko aur dukh na de sakhoon kyunke phele hi mein usse itne dukh de chuka hoon.6 saal phele jab maa ne heer par ilzam lagaya tha keh uski waja se veera ki zindagi barbad hui to meine maa ka saath diya tha naa  us waqt socho preet keh heer ko kitni takleef hui hogi keh uske prem ne uska saath nahi diya tha phir meine usko maa aur veera keliye ghar se nikal diya yahan takh apni zindagi se bhi nikal diya magar mujhe kya pata tha preet keh mujhse naaraz hokar is duniya se hi chali jaayegi,meri aik galti ne heer ki jaan leli .meine aisa kyun kiya preet kyun kiya meine aisa.prem started to hit himself as he was feeling very guilty .bhai sambhalo apne aap ko says preet kaise shambalon apne aap ko preet meri wajah se heer ki maut hui sirf aur sirf meri wajahse meine maa ko maaf sirf isliye kiya kyunke agar mein maa ko maaf na karta to shayad heer ki aatma ko takleef hoti joh mein nahi chahta tha.preet woh kyun chali gayi mujhe is duniya mein akela chordh keh woh jaanti thi keh mein usse kitna pyaar karta tha magar woh phir bhi chali gayi.prem started to cry bitterly as he remembers heer and her sweet memories.
prem wiped his tears and ask preet to go to airport as he has to receive Mr sabrawal.
At Canada airport,heer's flight had already landed and she was walking towards the exit and from the enterence preet was entering the airport
meri saanson mein tu hai samaya
mera jiwan to hai tera saya
teri pooja karon mein to har dum
yeh hai tere karam
kabhi khushi kabhi gham
na juda honge hum
kabhi khushi kabhi gham
heer was waiting for her car to arrive and preet was waiting for Mr sabrawal's flight to arrive when suddenly he saw heer .he was shocked to see heer alive.heer bhabhi yelled preet.preet was crying and ran towards heer but before preet could catch heer she sat in her car and went away.preet says heer bhabhi zinda hai magar unho ne meri taraf dekha kyun nahi,kya woh heer bhabhi theen ya phir unki humshakal.nahi woh heer bhabhi hi theen .mujhe pb ko batana hi hoga.Mr sabrawal arrived and preet hugged him and they both went to juneja office.

Precap:preet telling prem heer being alive and prem getting shocked
Edited by heer_varsha - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee too good lovely part waitinggg for next asap

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