aik dil keh do tukhre premeer ff (Discontinued )

hi guys im Zoha,some of u must have remember me.when kis desh was on air i used to visit the forum and comment .now guys i have thought to write an ff on premeer right after the leap.my ff is pure imaginative and its my own opinion that how should the show must have moved.i will be posting the first chap soon and characters r same and dont forget to comment on my ff .negative comments will be accepted whole heartidly

luv heer

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Index
Chapter 1 -pg 2
Chapter 2 and 3 -pg3
Chapter 4-pg 4
Chapter 5-pg 5
Chapter 6 -pg6
Chapter 7 -pg7
Chapter 8-pg8
Chapter 9-pg9
Chapter10-pg10
Chapter 11-pg13
Chapter 12-pg16
Chapter 13-pg17
Chapter 14-pg20
Chapter15-pg21
Chapter16-pg24
Chapter17-pg24
Chapter18-pg26
Chapter19-pg27
Chapter20-pg 29
Edited by sarunholic_arhi - 10 years ago

do pm me...
eagerly waiting for the update...

looking forwad to read continue soon and do pm me... :)

Hey heer ... nice to have another writer here in the kis desh forum🤗

waiting plz do update and add me to ur pm list

Chapter 1

6 years later,Canada
there u see a big houses fully lighted and decorated and a girl standing with a women ."meher " says kulraj and there u see that the girl turns back and its meher and the women was gay3.gay3 was talking with meher about the party which was going to be held tonight in their hotel,in which different business men/women were invited from different countries.acha meher aaj ki party ki sari taiyari hogai naa beta says gay3.jee maa sari taiyari hogai aap fikr mat kijeye says meher.while meher and gay3 were talking preet came there and told meher that meher mujhe buhat bhook lagi hai mujhe khana chahiye,but before meher could say anything gay3 interrupted and says arre preet tu meher ko kyun keh raha hai mein kitchen mein jaarahi hoon mein tereliye kahan laadeti hoon.yeh dekhawa karne ki koi zaroorat nahi mrs gayatri juneja ,apne jo 6 saal phele kiye woh kya kaam tha joh ab aap mujhse hamdardi karne lageen.app shayad bhool rahi hain keh bhale hi prem bhaiya ne aapko maaf kardiya ho magar mein aapko maaf nahi karsaktha kyunke aapki wajahse mere pb aur heer bhabhi alag hue meher tried to interrupt but preet stopped her and says aapki wajahse meri heer bhabhi ko itni beizzati sehni pardhi jiske liye shayd prem bhaiya ne aapko maaf kardiya ho magar mein aapko maaf nahi karsaktha kyunke uss din naa sirf aap ki wajah se iss ghar ne apni bahu koh kodiya tha magar aap ne mujhe apne aap se buhat door kardiya tha .chalo meher says preet and holds meher hand and went away.gay3 left there standing and tears started to flow from her eyes.

Precap:entry of prem and heer
Edited by zohakhan59 - 12 years ago

awesomeee too good lovelyyy part waitinggg for next asap

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeee too good lovelyyy part waitinggg for next asap

sweta tell me frankly did u liked it and should i continue with its next part

Originally posted by: heer_varsha

sweta tell me frankly did u liked it and should i continue with its next part

Originally posted by: sweta2005

 

ofcourse i liked it plzzz do continue soon waitinggg for premeer part

sweta thanks for ur encouragment and accept my buddy invitation.the story will become interesting in the coming updates 😉 😳