Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Heya Lovely Minzyyy...
I READ IT...I READ IT...LMFFFAOOO...ok first of all...YOU ARE AN AMAZINGG WRITER...no serioulsy...this is not bcaz i love u (ok, maybe a bit of it IS...lol) but seriously dude...this FF is awesummm...the storyline, characters, emotions...everyfing was sooo amazing girl!!!!!
i simply loved the whole concept...
PROLOGUE n PART 1:
the prologue itself got me hooked...Ammy dreaming abt AR's magical kiss...ahhh...n then their lovey dovey moments...Ammy's emotional ride thru his past was sooo touching
Ammy's a LONELY Singer i felt sooo bad for him...oh btw...the BEST scene here was the dream sequence...it was jus sooo perfectly written...i cud actually imagine Ridz in tht tranquil place...my fave. was
"she was sitting on a white swing'holding a flower in the most delicate way he had ever seen'swinging back and forth slowly'She looked Beautiful'he walked up to her slowly and sat beside her''Armaan'.stop staring at me''..she turned her face around to face him and smiled''I can't help myself'I want to look at you for as long as I can'because'because'. I won't be able to have this moment when I wake up''he whispered''I promise to visit you tomorrow''
she leaned forward and placed her head on his shoulder''Promise'?''Yes Armaan'I promise'' dis part made me SADDD they love each other with such passion / / he can actually see her in his dreams weneva he wants...such PURE love... Awww...Muskii understands him sooo well...true frnds
n i love WOH LAMHE...its sucha romantic yet sad song...LOVEEE IT!!!!! it portrayed Ammy's emotions soo well!!!!!
Rahul n Muski are sooo cute...Awww, they'r helping him out of his sufferings...
they'r true frndship reminds me of a lil poem...well not exactly a poem but yuh...LOL
True friends are those,
Who care without hesitation,
Who remember without limitation,
Who forgive without explanation &
Who trust without communication.
n the PIANO MUSIC...*thud* dude did i ever tell u tht m a CRAZYYY piano player...i totally loved the GOTH music, ermmm i kinda hunt for such creepy haunting n dreamy kinda piano notes...LMAOOO, thanks for sharing lol
OK, n now..the part where i literally had tears in my eyes...u made me cry Miniii...RIDDHIMA IS DEAD...as in DEAD!!!!!
GOD how can u do this to us...
(lol, sorry fro being sucha drama queen)
but why'd u turn the romantic AR into DEADLY AR u know when i read the whole graveyard scene...i was like...W*FFF!!!!! my Ridzi's DEAD i honestly cried -______________- BAD BAD MINZYYY
now u HAVE to cover up the story quickly...n NOT with a SAD ending *warns* m sooo f**kING hooked to this story man, wanna read MORE abt Riddhima's death...n will she ever cum back? :| :| :| :| LMAOOO...
i know stupid question...but m a SUCKER for happy endings dude, i want 2 see AR happily married in the end, since DMG cudn't make it up to us...i want YOU to get them togethr now...
IDC if u turn into EKTA MAI for a while...ROFLLL...JK...
ok plzzz continue sooonishhh...i know u hav other priorities as well...but its YOUR FF tht compels me to read MORE, so imma blame YOU for it
ok now enough of ma gibbering...Cont. sooonn<33
oh n thanks ALOT for all the PMs sweetheart...
JIA PS: this is my FIRST EVER long comment on any FF, pheww, hope this makes up for the delay mwwaahhh<33
Edited by pinkss - 12 June 2011 at 9:10pm