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Maan and Anjali went to meet Adrian… he was a counselor and had known Geet since the time she was 9 yrs.. he knew everything about Geet and Maan… she was his favorite student … he was a middle aged man.. he listened to Maan and Anjali's side and also told him Julie's and Geet's side
Listen MK Geet has had a very bad childhood, Rano had been a constant terror for her, she was again and again made to do things against her will, and she did because she loved you all too much… she sacrificed her happiness for her family and your family, Rano threatened her that she will make the 2 families rot in jail … now what shall I do how will I erase all those things… by rewriting them with your love, you love her… yes more than my self… then make her realize it, once she knows Rano is dead she will willingly go ahead…. Shall I take her to my house… (smiled) not know, start afresh, Julie is gonna suggest her same… how… get to your house and propose her … but we are already… anyways to legalize your marriage you will have to remarry then why not with all pom and show… means… woe her, propose her, give a big engagement party… have a today is 14th feb and your MA is on 21st dec, right… right… so have a 10 month long courtship period and marry on 21st dec like you all Indians get married with lot of music dance, jokes etc… Maan blushed hard… Man you are blushing now go she'll be waiting, and don't forget to invite me.. yes sir… and Anjali you too play a perfect friend tease her and also don't leave him and Adrian laughed
In the Handa house
Geet… Anjali tu aa gayi… tu kahan chali gayi thi.. kahi nahin… achcha jhoot bol rahi hain… achcha chal kahi bahar khana khaate hain… baha r aur tu,… yes dera I am very happy today… MK se lad ke aai hain aur khush hain… tune kuch kaha… nahin to… achcha sun tere liye ek parcel hain.. mere liye … wo I was coming so Maan Sir gave me … what Maan sir… mere bhi samajh nahin aayaa, par mana bhi to nahin kar sakti thi, tu isse khol mein aati hoan change karke… ok… she opend the parcel, there was a box in it she lifted the lid and a heart popped out and there was amessage on it "WILL YOU BE MY VALENTINE", she looked at in amusement and then saw a letter in it she opened it "Geet mujhe tumse pehli nazar mein pyaar ho gaya hain kyat um meri Valentine banogi"
Oh God Maan … there was another slip.. she opened it… "can I have the privilege of taking this beautiful lady for dinner"… Maan.. then she noticed a packet in it… she opened it was a beautiful red suit it hada slip tagged she read it "make this dress beautiful by wearing it, its dying to feel the skin as much as I am dying to feel you" she blushed … and as she was unfolding the dress a note slipped she picked it up it read "will be at your doorsteps at 8" she blushed hard… she straightened as she heard Anjali giggling… ANJALI you…. Ofha yahan kuch jayaada garami nahin ho rahi… Anjali… hai boss ne propose kiya mein mar jaana… Anjali… Geet chal meni tujhe tyar hone main help kar do… koi zaroorat nahi… haan janti ho wo to pehle se hi bowled hain bechara … Anjali…. Pata hain jab tu sharmaati hain to bahut pyaari lagti hain , achcha jaldi kar 8 bajane wale hain… tujhe pata hain… meri jaan mujhe sab pata hain

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Thanks!

will add more abhi
EDITED---------------------------------------------------------
Shruti diii!
I loveee you!
AWWW...
aaaj toh mujhe iss fan fic ke kitne logo se pyaar ho raha hai...
JULIE...ANJALI...GEET aur Maan toh pehle hi the...
OMG!!!
Finally!!!
YIPEEE!!!
*Swati does a little jig*Big smile
and the realises that she has an exam in two daysDead so, she better rush,
BUT THEN, SHRUTI DI ki treat koi kaise miss kar sakta hai...
di, thankyou for the updates and the PM!!!
YayyyParty
Love
Swati


Edited by princess163 - 20 May 2011 at 6:06am

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ROCKiNG upd...
lov it...

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged

DIII!!!!

edited the comment below part 28...
n haan, the LIKE button is not working for meCryCryCry
waise mujhe nahin chahiye tha woh...
MAIN LOVE BUTTON DHOONDH RAHI THI...MILA NAIOuch
Crazily
Swati

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Awesome update di
loved it alot.
Thumbs Up
 
continue soon
can't wait to read about the dinner date

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Oh i jst loveddd it. . . . Awesomeee

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oh god !! am officially dead didi ..

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loved it di ...excellent!!!

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