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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
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part 18

they were ready by 5 Prabha being skeptical about Vicky's ways send Nakul with the driver... on seeing Nakul Geet put her duppatta on her head... Nakul looked contantly at her (these eyes look familar) ...
 
Geet made sure that they were dropped 2 blocks from the house... she wondered here and there for a while as she knew Nakul's eyes are following them... then she sneeked in a lane and finally reached the house... herways confirmed Anjali's doubts...
 
when they reached the house a couple was already tending the garden... nanny aunty... the woman 5'2" ht on her early 40's looked at them and tehn GGEEETTT Baby... nanny aunty and the 2 hugged (sorry for not making the nanny a old woman leaning on a stick)
 
aree suno Geet baby aai hain taala khol do... aao baby aap bhi aai .. namaste aunty... namaste kya naam hain aapka.. Anjali.. arre suno zara doodh coffee chinni aur nashta le aao ... aunty iski zaroorat nahin hain... Anjali beta yeh iska ghar hain samjhi... jee...

the house was clean and tidy it was regularly mantained... Nanny aunty papa... he is in raurkela... and others I mean theres no one at HSPur also... all are at Raurkela... where... its in Orissa Geet.. oh but why there so far... the settlement for Divorce was 20 lacs and they had to sell their buisness here to accompolish it, and for the manthly allowance that Rano got for you 50,000 was too much so they sold the land at HSPur but the Haweli is still intact... oh... what do they do there... your papa is a professor at NIT there Mechanical deptt and your Chacha runs a school and Rajji and Titto study... oh

meanwhile she made coffee and breakfast... Baby let me take leave today and she called her office meri beti aai hain to chutti... thanks... you work ...um as a supervisor in a office ... then why all this... are meri baby ka kaam hain I love it baby... your hubby I mean uncle ... he is manager at a IDDBBII Bank... oh... kids.. 1 a boy he studies at mysore...oh... baby what is your cell no. ... wo aunty mera cell kho gaya hain... Geet jhoot kyo bolti hain, aunty she does not have a cell... its ok baby, not every one keeps a cell... aunty its not like that... she even does not have any money...why?... and Anjali told Nandani every thing...


Edited by smj1977 - 18 May 2011 at 1:16pm

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
hey superb part
plz pm me wenevr u update nxt
cont soon

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Nice part Shruti
Nakul must have remembered Geet too and so
he followed her.
Geet smartly escaped from nakul but not from Anjali's suspicion.
Nanny Geet meeting was great.
Geet got to know of her dad's whereabouts
She can atleast reach her dad and family now.
Nanny got to know of Geet's condition.
Thanks to Anjali she is  a true friend and a sweetheart.
Waiting for Maaneet meeting.

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
loved Anjali's self dialogues scolding vicky for show offLOLLOLLOLLOL
hopefully nakul will pass on the informaton to maan...

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
i knew it anjali
is geet saviour good
she told the truth nandani
love it
the story turning interesting
muah
mindblowing update
cont soonnn

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part 19

baby wait I want to give you some thing first and then she handed her all the letters cards gifts Maan had send for her during all these years … she looked at them in awe and then slowly went through the dates .. she picked the last one dated 21st august 2008 and kept the rest away… Anjali went through all of them and was surprised to learn that she had been married to Maan …

Geet opened the envelope.. it was written in a state of frustration… then she slowly went through all the letters they were initially cute and then as years went by they were having a sense of frustration where he complained about how his friends moved on with their GFs and he how he longed for her presence … in mostly all the letters he wrote during graduation he mentioned Sameera… the last letter that he wrote on 21st dec 2008 was full of complains and also stated that now that she had been 18 for last 4 months and have still not contacted him he assumes that she had forgotten him and he too needs to break through the virtual loving thing and  and wants to move on.. he was 25 now and its high time he had a wife and if she did not turn up today also he will definitely propose Sameera as she is the only girl he had been seeing from long and she is ok with Geet being his Past… Geetu pls I have waited long for you …I only thing he missed to write their was that it was purely a threat so that she comes fast … but Geet took it otherwise, and fainted… Anjali read the letter and Nandani was hell worried

When she came back she just said I am ok its alright … Geet aise kaise we should talk to him once… no Anjali I don't want to burden him with unwanted relationship, if I turn up now Maa, papa, Daadi, daadu will all force him to accept me, an dI don't want to force him….

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Geet got to read what Maan went through.
While her letters were full of love
his were full of frustration Confused
He knew when Geet was leaving with her mom
about Geet's mom and the way she treated her right.
But its strange as to why he didnt have a tiny bit of doubt
that Geet was not allowed to meet him or rather she was helpless.
Poor Geet has strongly misunderstood that Maan moved on.
The letters indicated the same too not her fault.
Things are going to be pretty difficult for Maan now
since Geet is going to be running away from him.
One good thing is that Anjali and Nanny are aware of the whole situation.
Waiting for the next one.


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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
uff maan letter full of
frustration
but maan knew what geet
going through
remember he saw her a scar
her mom did it to
why cant he put together that
geet in trouble even in once
uff she running way
from him
atleast anjali nandani find out
the whole truth
wonder when geet i'll happy
thanks back to back update
love it
lovely update
pls cont soonnn

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