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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM again shruti
would have read it then itself but got caught up with work.
Thanks for another beautiful one.
You very quickly turned the tables now.
Geet got to know about Sam being his GF that too through somebody else
She will now may be slow down her persuasion to get back to Maan.
She wouldnt want to be a hindrance to him in anyway.
On the other side Maan the great opened the parcel finally.
He got to see her pain and feel it .
Geet's letters were really painful for us and Maan.
Her saving and struggling to meet the basic needs was beautifully painful.
He started persuasion now. Lets see how far he will be successful.
waiting for the afternoon one.

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seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Loveeed it, i hope maan find geet soon.

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
wow awsome one

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rupzloveu IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged

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surbhijn106 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Awsm ff yar too good

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ridhz21 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Maan open d parcel
sad for geet
update soon...waiting

plz add me to ur pm list

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smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Back to us
part 13

dated 18th August 2008, finally I managed the money I am sorry MK I have to sell that teddy you gave me, my freind Julie she wanted it for her sister, I have taken so good care of Jaanu that he still looks new... by the time you get this I would be forced to leave mom's house, pls MK I am putting this letter on top call me on this number as soon as possible its Julie's no. she knows about you, I can just live there till 21st her mom is my MOM's friend and she sure will tell her... so MK I will be waiting do call before its too late, I know you will

Maan fell down on his knees... yes he had got that parcel but stupid him he has not opened it... he grabbed his cell and called at the no. Julie picked up the phone.. hello.. is it Julie?.. yes... can I talk to Geet... Geet?? you should be MK... yes... so you got the parcel... yes... Man you are late... is she ok... IDK she waited and waited for you, she called her papa's number but it did not exisit an dthen on her birthday when you did not call she dialled your number and some girl out there told that Khurnan's no longer live at KM... what?? ...yes so she lost hope she cried the whole night and said that as you all have shifted you might not have gotten the parcel... then she had to leave... where did she go?... she did not leave the address as my mom would have told Rano... any idea... no... Julie how did she managed all these years... ny baby sittinga and tutions, clothes she got in charity from a charity here run by Indian nationals... whay in charity... yes Rano never gave her asingle penny... the allowance her father send... oh that all went to her fashion... she I mean those baby sitting ... she was not baby sitting since 16 ... why... once when she was with a kid one of the guys tried to force her so she left that work also and as she was not an American citizen she was not able to go to the cops and she also did not have her passport... Julie will she call you... yes I think she will... pls whenevr she calls give me a missed call on thi snumber I'll call yu back... ok... thankyou... MK pls fine her she loves you like anything... I am trying... i'll give you a call

Maan wanted to hit himself... Geetu tum kahan ho... Geetu ... she called here and some one told her that... but who was that girl...Maa and Daadi will not do any such thing... then who... he rushed out Nakul Nakul... ji Maan Bhai... do you remember 21st august Geet's b'day... yes... did any girl came that day... yes... who,.. wo apki freind can go thankyou

Maan hit the wall Sameera if anything happens to my Geetu my Rani youare a dead woman... let me first fins her then I'll seee you Sameera you will regret you ever met me...

Maa... hain beta... Maa Geet is 18 na... yes.. to use yahan le ke aao... but how can we noone knows where she is... Maa to use dhoondo, wo uske papa kya karte hain... is he not bothered about his daughter... Maan... ji Papa... what is all this... wo Papa... you know Maan that just to send her allowance every month Mohinder has to do so much, his condition is os bad, 50,000 rupees a month is no small amount... but papa does Geet ever get that money... ofcourse Rano receives on her behalf daily... papa you know Geet ko 18 yrs ke hote hi Rano ne ghar se likaal diya..uska koi ata pata nahin hai... kya???.. aur that money she never got a single penny out of it she lived on charity... what????????

Edited by smj1977 - 17 May 2011 at 3:46am

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged

loved it ...awesome!!!

Maan find her soon.

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