till part10
Awesome story..
Loved Maneet's childhood..
Sad to see Maan on the verge of moving on..
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till part 32
Loved to see Maneet bonding...
Their emotions were very well penned down..
Geet is still not all-free..Something is binding her down n only Maan can completely release her..
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Finished
Nice story..
Emotions well portrayed..
I got a little confused with the babies being born and then a shock- that Geet had 4 of them..
Nicely written..
Edited by pearl_warrior - 11 years ago
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