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Back to us (MG) "THE END" 5th JUNE 2011 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOw!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome
uff Vicky kitna show off karta h
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice part dear ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part 
loved it
uff vicky
i think Anjali will find out 
pls cont  waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful!!!

I loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god her a mother
do that to her own child
i'm glad maan got the letter
uff vicky what show of
i'm sure anjali i'll find out
the mystery btw geet & khurana
she such good friend
love it 4 parts
super duper
wonder when i'll geet find
happiness
update soonnn dear
muah

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Edited by sharmake11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Back to us
part 18

they were ready by 5 Prabha being skeptical about Vicky's ways send Nakul with the driver... on seeing Nakul Geet put her duppatta on her head... Nakul looked contantly at her (these eyes look familar) ...
 
Geet made sure that they were dropped 2 blocks from the house... she wondered here and there for a while as she knew Nakul's eyes are following them... then she sneeked in a lane and finally reached the house... herways confirmed Anjali's doubts...
 
when they reached the house a couple was already tending the garden... nanny aunty... the woman 5'2" ht on her early 40's looked at them and tehn GGEEETTT Baby... nanny aunty and the 2 hugged (sorry for not making the nanny a old woman leaning on a stick)
 
aree suno Geet baby aai hain taala khol do... aao baby aap bhi aai .. namaste aunty... namaste kya naam hain aapka.. Anjali.. arre suno zara doodh coffee chinni aur nashta le aao ... aunty iski zaroorat nahin hain... Anjali beta yeh iska ghar hain samjhi... jee...

the house was clean and tidy it was regularly mantained... Nanny aunty papa... he is in raurkela... and others I mean theres no one at HSPur also... all are at Raurkela... where... its in Orissa Geet.. oh but why there so far... the settlement for Divorce was 20 lacs and they had to sell their buisness here to accompolish it, and for the manthly allowance that Rano got for you 50,000 was too much so they sold the land at HSPur but the Haweli is still intact... oh... what do they do there... your papa is a professor at NIT there Mechanical deptt and your Chacha runs a school and Rajji and Titto study... oh

meanwhile she made coffee and breakfast... Baby let me take leave today and she called her office meri beti aai hain to chutti... thanks... you work ...um as a supervisor in a office ... then why all this... are meri baby ka kaam hain I love it baby... your hubby I mean uncle ... he is manager at a IDDBBII Bank... oh... kids.. 1 a boy he studies at mysore...oh... baby what is your cell no. ... wo aunty mera cell kho gaya hain... Geet jhoot kyo bolti hain, aunty she does not have a cell... its ok baby, not every one keeps a cell... aunty its not like that... she even does not have any money...why?... and Anjali told Nandani every thing...
Edited by smj1977 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey superb part
plz pm me wenevr u update nxt
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part Shruti
Nakul must have remembered Geet too and so
he followed her.
Geet smartly escaped from nakul but not from Anjali's suspicion.
Nanny Geet meeting was great.
Geet got to know of her dad's whereabouts
She can atleast reach her dad and family now.
Nanny got to know of Geet's condition.
Thanks to Anjali she is  a true friend and a sweetheart.
Waiting for Maaneet meeting.

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved Anjali's self dialogues scolding vicky for show off๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
hopefully nakul will pass on the informaton to maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i knew it anjali
is geet saviour good
she told the truth nandani
love it
the story turning interesting
muah
mindblowing update
cont soonnn

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