Back to us (MG) "THE END" 5th JUNE 2011 - Page 11

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Dimaag naa ho na bandye ke paas toh chalna nahi chahiye. . . . Aur maan toh jarurt sey jyada chala raha hai.

nice part...luvd it...Keep writing...

Haan par uski girl frnd toh hai naa. . . . Where is her father woh apne father key pass kyun nahi gayi. . . . I know uski pass koi contact nahi hai par brij key pass toh hoga father ka nahi toh HP ka hoga.

beautiful parts.
loved it.
 arrh i hate sameera , I want to kill her.
uske wajay se saare mus,
pehele maan ko ulta samjahya aab uske naam ko leke geet thinks like that.
this vicky ko toh maan ki sirf geet hain.
thank god maan open the percel and read those letter, know about geet's pain.
 hope maan try to find out geet and don't listen that sameera.
 continue soon.

loved all the parts

Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago

read all the parts in one go...the story is really gripping...feeling sad now that geet misunderstood Maan...update soon and pleez include me in ur PM list!!

thank god maan got the

Awesome update

Thanks for the PM again shruti
would have read it then itself but got caught up with work.
Thanks for another beautiful one.
You very quickly turned the tables now.
Geet got to know about Sam being his GF that too through somebody else
She will now may be slow down her persuasion to get back to Maan.
She wouldnt want to be a hindrance to him in anyway.
On the other side Maan the great opened the parcel finally.
He got to see her pain and feel it .
Geet's letters were really painful for us and Maan.
Her saving and struggling to meet the basic needs was beautifully painful.
He started persuasion now. Lets see how far he will be successful.
waiting for the afternoon one.

Loveeed it, i hope maan find geet soon.