hey guysss...hiii deshians...i m new ovr here bt jst lvd all ur ff's...espicially...grace nd selvy...i hv also dcided 2 gv bst frm my side...
hope u all lv it... plzzz supprt me... wid love... -piyuheer...hey guysss...hiii deshians...i m new ovr here bt jst lvd all ur ff's...espicially...grace nd selvy...i hv also dcided 2 gv bst frm my side...
hope u all lv it... plzzz supprt me... wid love... -piyuheer...This content was originally posted by: piyuheeri m writng d 1st chp...if u lke den only ill cntinue...
plzzz tell mee...if u lke it...
This content was originally posted by: ...Harshiti...Hello dear 🤗
nice to have another deshian join us and that too with another FF!Please do continue I loved the first chapter...some great writing skills you got...very nice description and I loved her dialogues, specially the last 2...jeeyu gi sirf tumhareliye and marun gi sirf tumhare liye...very nice 👏Update soon😃
CHAPTER 2...
His almond shapd eyes gazed at her with great awe…
He too had the same feeling and attraction towards this god created beauty with care who was clunging in his arms with her eyes closed and trembling lips…
He lovingly gazed at her face…
He found her eyes to be so pure…so innocent…so divine…
Her eyebrows in the best shape ever…
And fnally her pink rosy lips…
He slowly lifted her up….and as she slowly lifted her eyes up…she saw a speeding lorry coming towards her love…
She quickly caught hold of his hand and took him to the side falling…they went down the hill rolling on each other….
Her world came upside down…
She found herself as if her whole world was spinning around her…
But still she found herself cozy and protective in his arms…
He was holding her tightly till they came to a halt…she found herself on top of him…
He asked in a rather concerned voice,"aap theek to he naa…aapko zyaada lagi to nhi…"
She drowned in his words and simply nodded her head stating a no…
He carefully lifted her up…but she found hard to stand and was about to fall,but thank goodness…once again he held her in his arms…
She found hard to walk….looking at this he suggested her,"agar aapko bura naa lage…to kyaa mein aapko utha loon…aapko pareshaani nhi hogi…"
She gave him a smile in return accepting his proposal…
She sa his head bleeding heavily and she could not take it now…
She said,"aapko bahut chot aayi he…plzzz hum log us cottage mein chlte he…taaki me ise saaf kar skun…"she said in a rather concerned tone…
A few minutes later they were in the cottage…she felt tingling sensations as his breath trailed along hr neck…her hands possessively wrapped around his neck…
As he lifted her down on the twigs,she gently pulled him down and tore her dupatta…and tied it on his forehead…
He was seeing all this in a surprise that how can a stranger show him a lot of concen and love…
When his own parents kicked him out of his house….
so how was it...
plzzz tell me...
love...
~piyuheer...
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