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sirf tum...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged

hey guysss...hiii deshians...i m new ovr here bt jst lvd all ur ff's...espicially...grace nd selvy...i hv also dcided 2 gv bst frm my side...

hope u all lv it...
plzzz supprt me...
wid love...
-piyuheer...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
i m writng d 1st chp...if u lke den only ill cntinue...
plzzz tell mee...
if u lke it...
 

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piyuheer

i m writng d 1st chp...if u lke den only ill cntinue...
plzzz tell mee...
if u lke it...
 
chapter 1...
pyaaar...ek aisa ehsaas jo sirf ek baar hota hai...
jo hamari zindgi me khushiyon ki bahar laata he...
pyaaar...jo hume jina sikhata he...
pyaar jo mera he...
pyaarr jisme SIRF TUM ho...
 
 
as she wlkd through d beautiful streets of shimla...
winds blowng all around taking her soft hairs up in d air...
it seemd as if she ws crying...all ovr...shivring...she bumpd into sumone...all of a suddn...
who knew d prsn she bmpd wud change her life 4evr...
yesss...dis was heer maan...nd she bmpd wid d love of her life prem juneja...
she opnd her eyes nd found herslf in his arms...she flt most securd nd most protctive ovr der...
she wntd 2 drown in dose eyes...nd make him hers 4evr...she fell in love wid him d very moment...love at frst sight...
SIRF TUM...jeeungi sirf tumhare liye...
marungi sirf tumhare liye...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
ey guyzzz...tell me if u lke it...
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Hello dear Hug
nice to have another deshian join us and that too with another FF!

Please do continue I loved the first chapter...some great writing skills you got...very nice description and I loved her dialogues, specially the last 2...jeeyu gi sirf tumhareliye and marun gi sirf tumhare liye...very nice Clap

Update soonBig smile


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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
add me to the pm list...
welcome to the forum...
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Harshiti...

Hello dear Hug
nice to have another deshian join us and that too with another FF!

Please do continue I loved the first chapter...some great writing skills you got...very nice description and I loved her dialogues, specially the last 2...jeeyu gi sirf tumhareliye and marun gi sirf tumhare liye...very nice Clap

Update soonBig smile


 thnxxx a lot guyzzz...
i m glad u lovd it...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Hai welcome to Desh forumHug
really loved your writing and waitinggg to seee more and All the Besttt to you DearThumbs Up
interstinggg one Pleaseee conitinueee and me in your pm listDay Dreaming

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