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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by atop

This was just another fabulous part. You know am just loving your confident and straightforward Gopi, I so am liking her this avataar. And about Ahem what do I say, the man is surely going to have a hard time first to digest this sudden changed and confident Gopi, then speak to her in person about the divorce.
Must say it was one fabulous reading and I urge you that though it is a short story but please do not end in 3-4 parts instead atleast keep it for a decent duration, I would just love to see the stupefied Ahem and an insensitive Gopi..
Wonderful is all I say.

Luv atop

Thank you atop .. I dunno how long or short this is going to be .. but dont want things to abrupt, I want it to seem gradual and I hope to deliver on that.. writing the next parts is going to be a challenge...

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bloem123

i can't wait for the next part 

awww... thank you Bloem123 .. next part coming right up 
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MeetPremeer

loved it

Thank you MeetPremeer Smile
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Poojiebbz

That was absolutely AMAZING! very much speechless. 
it felt like i was there  with Gopi and could feel each of your words,
Must say you have great writing skills and i'm glad you're using it on such things like FF ! :) 
Please continue and we shall wait for the next part.  

-Pooja

Thank you Pooja .. U r very kind.. Smile
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swasthi

This is a fresh look at the Gohem story with a bold Gopi. Update soon.

This is how I want Gopi to be.. I cannot take a low on confidence Gopi anymore...

Update coming right up

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bidaaifan09

Wow this is just to wonderful for words cannot wait for you to continue. Now with this is what the show should be.

Thanx Angie .. U r very kind...
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chenling

Outstanding update...the courage that it took for Gopi to say all that to him, wow...I am really enjoying this. I love how empowered she is and I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you chenling !! I am having funn writing it as well.. its interesting thinking from both their perspectives...
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged

Thank you all for being extremely generous,... I am flattered.. Here's Part 3 


PART 3

The next morning Aham checked his schedule and moved his appointments. He left for a meeting and decided to go home immediately after. When he reached home, he saw Gopi in the kitchen trying to finish her chores. Kokila spots Aham and asks him "Did you need anything dikra?" Both Aham and Gopi look up to see her, Gopi realizes Aham was there as well.  Aham looks at his mother and says "Mom, had a meeting around here and I had a slight headache so decided to come home and rest for awhile."  Hearing that Kokila looks at Gopi and say" Gopi bahu , please make Aham some strong coffee and take it up to your room."

"Ji Maaji "Gopi replied nodding and got back to the task at hand.

Aham, meanwhile, was waiting in his room, for Gopi to show up with the coffee. He heard a soft knock about 5 minutes later, the door opened and Gopi walked in. She left the coffee on the table and turned to walk away.

Aham saw this, was annoyed, and said "Gopi, we need to discuss a few things before we meet the lawyer, so how about we go out after lunch today?"

Gopi looked at him, took a moment before she replied slowly, "I have my lessons scheduled after lunch and I do not wish to cancel them, could we...  possibly go in the evening?" she looked at him anxiously, "I could finish my chores sooner "She was waiting for his response, there was an uncomfortable silence.

Aham finally said, "Ok, let's go out in the evening, I will let Mom know." She nodded turned and walked away. Aham tells his Mom that he and Gopi were going out later this evening, Kokila, though surprised, was happy. She assigns Rashi the responsibility to fix dinner that evening and asks Gopi to leave everything to Rashi and Mani.

By evening Gopi finishes her chores and is ready to leave of her room, she hears a knock and turns around to find Aham standing in the doorway to ask if she was ready to go.  She nods and they head out together. Both of them aware, of the impression they were creating by going out together.

Aham took Gopi to a restaurant and immediately regretted the idea because it was crowded and Gopi would not be comfortable, he wanted privacy and wanted her to be at ease. Gopi, sensing his discomfort, said "We should probably go to quieter place, it's too noisy here." Aham thanked her silently and took her to a park.

Once, they reached the destination, Aham got straight to the point, which had been troubling him all night yesterday and all day today. "I got the contract examined by my lawyer and he thinks it is pretty straight forward, but there a few things I need to understand and certain things we need to agree upon before we go ahead", saying this he looked at Gopi, who was listening to him attentively.

"Until the divorce has gone thru, we will need to behave as a couple in public and for the sake of the family'" Gopi nodded and he continued, "'this includes all the social and religious functions, family gatherings etc." He paused and said "'this also means us having to putting up with each other, in one room. " She was shocked but he went on "just for the sake of appearances."

He paused to look for a reaction from her and she continued to listen in silence, "The settlement of the divorce, the alimony and the maintenance, will be at my discretion" ... Gopi was getting uncomfortable "and you will have no say in that"

Gopi flared up, she retorted, "I have made it clear in the contract and have told you personally, I will take with me whatever is mine and what was given to me at my wedding by my family, and this is not up for negotiation."

"Let me be the judge of that", Aham stated as a matter of fact.  Gopi was annoyed; Aham asked sarcastically, "what is it exactly that you intend to do after six months, how do you plan to survive, without any support? What are your plans, do tell"

Gopi was quiet for a bit and then replied slowly, "I have been taking home lessons for almost 5 weeks now,  Papaji wants me to get basic functional knowledge of computers, so I am going to enroll myself in course which will start in about a week from now. Once I begin to understand things, I shall be in a better circumstance to figure out what I really want to do. I do not want your pity or your money and I do not want the sudden show of concern"; with that last statement she stunned him.  

Aham was taken aback, he looked at her in stunned silence and said "I do not mean to undermine you; I am pleasantly surprised at your initiative and wish you all the success. I would be the happiest to see that your talents are being put to better use.  Having said that, I am adamant about the settlement being at my discretion" and before Gopi could object he added "and we shall try to cross the bridge when we get there" in all finality.

It was getting dark; Aham asked if she wanted to discuss anything else and when she replied in the negative, they decided to head home. Aham on the way back told Gopi that he had a busy schedule for the next couple of days but he would try and make a slot for the lawyer. 

The first thing they did when they got back home was to move Gopi's stuff back into their room. Gopi though a little apprehensive was adamant about getting thru it unscathed.  For both of them, a certain sense of relief set in, something which could likened to a liberation, a new sense of calm had descended. Gopi, it seemed had moved up a few notches in Aham's value chain. An unusual camaraderie had set in and it had never happened the entire time she was pining for him. A daybed made way into the room later that night and they were all set to play and fool the world, for the next six months. 

******************End of Part 3 **************************




Edited by angelirebelli - 14 May 2011 at 7:38am

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