Originally posted by: tina_1234luved it...waitin for another one frm u :)
i luved ahem's confession..i hope my prince charmin is as gud as him in words nd sendin gifts <3nd m very sad tht it ended :(
Originally posted by: tina_1234luved it...waitin for another one frm u :)
i luved ahem's confession..i hope my prince charmin is as gud as him in words nd sendin gifts <3nd m very sad tht it ended :(
Originally posted by: Eesha2Wonderful ending to a very lovely story. I loved it. Great job. We hope to read another one from you soon. 👏
Originally posted by: avivakirk👏👏👏I think u are the best writer in the forum!Continue to write more!Good job!
Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossomsWonderful good writing...particularly liked the way you managed to make Aham suffer...and work for it.
Well done, I liked it
Originally posted by: atopWhat do I say or rather what should I express after reading your entire SS. I was away and the moment I landed, I just rushed to read your SS and re-read the entire thing from start to end..You had me laughing, snickering, angry, smiling, awing, shocked, helpless, cranky and teary all at one place.
I just loved the tough game that Gopi brought out for Ahem to play and the realisation that hit him and eventually he decided to make his wife fall for him all over again..It was lovely to read the entire thing and to be very honest, the last paragraph of your SS, just blew me away..It was like it just took my breath away, my heart just fluttered..Loved it loved it..Please if something else crosses your mind, do pen it down for us to read..It was a lovely treat..Luv atop
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