SS-No One But You - Last Part /Page 27 - Page 4

Wow, you're a really good writer. It was so easy to lose myself in the story and feel the emotions. I would have given anything to see the expression on Ahem's face rather than jus imagine...  :)

This was just another fabulous part. You know am just loving your confident and straightforward Gopi, I so am liking her this avataar. And about Ahem what do I say, the man is surely going to have a hard time first to digest this sudden changed and confident Gopi, then speak to her in person about the divorce.

i can't wait for the next part 

That was absolutely AMAZING! very much speechless. 

This is a fresh look at the Gohem story with a bold Gopi. Update soon.

Wow this is just to wonderful for words cannot wait for you to continue. Now with this is what the show should be.

Outstanding update...the courage that it took for Gopi to say all that to him, wow...I am really enjoying this. I love how empowered she is and I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This content was originally posted by: tina_1234

aaawww luved it...bring on d next part soon :))

Edited by angelirebelli - 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: sunshine33

Wow, you're a really good writer. It was so easy to lose myself in the story and feel the emotions. I would have given anything to see the expression on Ahem's face rather than jus imagine...  :)

 

I do hope that the CVs read this FF...they could learn a thing or 2.

This content was originally posted by: atop

This was just another fabulous part. You know am just loving your confident and straightforward Gopi, I so am liking her this avataar. And about Ahem what do I say, the man is surely going to have a hard time first to digest this sudden changed and confident Gopi, then speak to her in person about the divorce.

Must say it was one fabulous reading and I urge you that though it is a short story but please do not end in 3-4 parts instead atleast keep it for a decent duration, I would just love to see the stupefied Ahem and an insensitive Gopi..

Wonderful is all I say.

Luv atop