SS-No One But You - Last Part /Page 27 - Page 2

Wow you really do have an amazing talent for writing. This was absolutely wonderful. And I totally agree with Shilpa. Your Gopi is amazing and exactly how we want her to be. Amazing start. Please continue soon. 

That was wonderful, I love the way you show Gopi thinking about every little thing.  She clearly sees where she is and how it relates to Ahem and the rest of the family.  You really let us get a chance to really understand her character.  Fantastic and gripping, you really leave the reader wanting more.  I can't wait for you to update. 

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Another chupi rustom on the forum!

Wow! Look at this! This is absolutely wonderful my love. So so wonderful
I loved reading every single word

And you told me once that you had no interest in writing. Huh. Lies!

I love a Gopi who actually thinks for herself and that's exactly what this Gopi is doing.
I love the self-education. I love the oblivious Ahem.

I can't wait to read more of this wonderful piece. Update soon!

Yuks

Edited by angelirebelli - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Oh Wow, this was a fabulous treat first thing this morning. You are a wonderful writer.

I just love, love, love your Gopi, this is how we all want see SNS Gopi, self reliant, not depended on anyone, especially Ahem.

Good job, keep going, update soon please.👍🏼

Originally posted by: shobi12500

really very nice eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Poojiebbz

Hey it's very nice start, Thankss for this, and keep updating! Looking forward to read more of it. 

😊

-Pooja

Originally posted by: sunshine33

This is a really fantastic spin to the story.  Enjoyed reading a lot. Looking forward to more.

Originally posted by: atop

Wow! I must say what a beautiful start..

It was really refreshing to delve into Gopi's mind and I am kinda in a trance reading this...You know what, many a times I have just happened think of such situation wherein Gopi thinks on her own and decides to learn things out..

Wonderfully penned and am looking forward for the next part..Please don't keep us waiting and update soon..

Luv atop

Originally posted by: tashi482

really nice story😊

Edited by angelirebelli - 12 years ago

Angel, that was really a great start. Loved it