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Is it DEED???? *running off to get other Deedians* (Page 58)

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

Originally posted by kesha2412

I wanted to post this so I have... an amateurish attempt from a poor writer...


He looks at her with burning fire in His eyes.
The passion that flows between them is hard to disguise.
He grabs her, and hauls her to him; he seems to like it rough.
But when it comes to the Deed this is just not enough.

His hands on her sexy exposed back are getting bolder and more possessive.
His kisses, however, are still confined to her forehead and look awfully regressive.
Looks like he is at last ready to let go of all inhibitions.
He tells her, "I want to be a Dad", but what he means, he is on the Deed mission.  

He is finally starting to get the gist of things.
We guess the separation was not good but with it some benefits it brings.
He is desperate and now cannot hold back.
And decides to do it in a barn somewhere in the deep jungle outback. 

BTW i am sure none of you remember but this is an alternative version of my poem I wrote to pass the tests to enter Deed Club... 

Ahhh... have been missing this.. Wish Geethu was here today. No worries hopefully she'll be around tomorrow. Me off to go joggin with hubby. 

Cu my Deedians... united together once more. Party


Crap!! Thats so awesome!! So bloody awesome!!! **staring open-mouthed at the poem** Keshu!! Where were you hiding all these days?? ClapThumbs UpHug

In the closet... WinkLOL

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

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Happy Deed Day !!!!!!!!!!!! Approve

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
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Happy Deed Day !!!!!!!!!!!! Approve

Do sitaaron ka jungle mein hai milan aaj ki raat!!LOL

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

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Originally posted by jazzerette

Saturday!!!!PartyDancingParty


Happy Deed Day !!!!!!!!!!!! Approve

Do sitaaron ka jungle mein hai milan aaj ki raat!!LOL


Zindagi bhar nahi bhulenge yeh Deed ki raat Embarrassed

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LuvScooby

Originally posted by jazzerette

Originally posted by LuvScooby

Originally posted by jazzerette

Saturday!!!!PartyDancingParty


Happy Deed Day !!!!!!!!!!!! Approve

Do sitaaron ka jungle mein hai milan aaj ki raat!!LOL


Zindagi bhar nahi bhulenge yeh Deed ki raat Embarrassed

Happy deed day jiLOL

Aaj ki raat hona hai jo ho jane doEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by happygolucky

Originally posted by LuvScooby

Originally posted by jazzerette

Originally posted by LuvScooby

Originally posted by jazzerette

Saturday!!!!PartyDancingParty


Happy Deed Day !!!!!!!!!!!! Approve

Do sitaaron ka jungle mein hai milan aaj ki raat!!LOL


Zindagi bhar nahi bhulenge yeh Deed ki raat Embarrassed

Happy deed day jiLOL

Aaj ki raat hona hai jo ho jane doEmbarrassed


Wahi hoga joh manzoore Gurti, I mean Maaneet hogaEmbarrassed
Pyar ki raas-leela hum bhi dekhenge, aankhe phaad keLOL



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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LuvScooby

Originally posted by happygolucky

Originally posted by LuvScooby

Originally posted by jazzerette

Originally posted by LuvScooby

Originally posted by jazzerette

Saturday!!!!PartyDancingParty


Happy Deed Day !!!!!!!!!!!! Approve

Do sitaaron ka jungle mein hai milan aaj ki raat!!LOL


Zindagi bhar nahi bhulenge yeh Deed ki raat Embarrassed

Happy deed day jiLOL

Aaj ki raat hona hai jo ho jane doEmbarrassed


Wahi hoga joh manzoore Gurti, I mean Maaneet hogaEmbarrassed
Pyar ki raas-leela hum bhi dekhenge, aankhe phaad keLOL






Hum sab yeh prem leela ka anand uthayengeLOL


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