MoNaya OS-When U say ILU Baby..! <3 complete pg6 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sumi!! It was just awesome..
I really liked the way in the end Mohit tried to lighten up the mood..
I would like to read moree!!
Are you planning to continue??
If you are then please PM me!
Love,
Nivriti
 
P.S:: Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago

What a wonderful OS sumi👏👍🏼

P.E.R.F.E.C.T!!!

Loved the way you described Mohit's feelings and nervousness...Gawd, I could actually imagine his condition 😆 But then he knew he had to do or die, and loved the way he proclaimed, that he'll respect her feelings at any cost either acceptance or rejection...See, this is our Gollu Mollu Mohit😉

Even loved San's reply, the way she wants to be 100% committed towards her relation with him was something that really explains Sanaya's nature...truly honest and wonderfully committed girl❤️

And, Now, the highlight of this whole OS was just perfect for our MoNaya...the end where they discussed this big issue in such a sweet and relaxed manner...cute nok-jhoks and obviously, that role reversal part cracked me up🤣 

''Mohit would always wait for his love just as Gunjan did and Sanaya would always remain ''dhakkan'' as samrat was''🤣

All in All, perfect Sajan/Monaya mix jaan🤗

Love You,

Shafaq

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Posted: 12 years ago
exactly this has happened... post this link in the blog😎 loool
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG sumi😲😲 its fabulous😃 ghosh outstanding👏👏
loved the way you penned n elaborated it... looked so real...
dunno why i think that would be the exact what would have happened when mohit had let out his feelings for her😳 you know i was imaging it happening in front of my eyes..n yeah btw i just love the dhakkan saga of our samrat n sanaya.. both the 'S' are dhakkan🤣🤣 ghosh it was just like monaya- so lively n sobar😳
i really loved it man!! brilliant job👏 continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sum 🤗it was really very cute OS loved it 👏👏 u described mohit's inner feelings and battle of heart and mind wonderfully 👏monaya were always come up with their lively and wonderful bonding when they were only friends and this friendship finally step into wonderful relationship of lovers seriously proud with this fact , any relationship needs comfort and understanding level no need to say their brooding and consideration on their relationship and then making step into after it thats the beauty of their wonderful bonding from heart ,their heart to heart connection and friendship is pillar in their relationship may god bless this couple , and ya superb OS hon 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
Sumi this was so cute loved it when u are u posting the next part ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG...!!!!
I was rolling with laughter wen i read this sumi...
God! this was sooo hillarious...!!!
I cant stop ROFLing after readng this OS...🤣 🤣 🤣
its sooo awesummm...
awww...poor mohit & his apprehensions...🤔
but i really liked the way he blurted out his feelings for Sanaya...
awwwiiieee...so cuttteee...😳
& i too undrstnd Sanaya's POV abt Love coz its not a Small thing...u gotta be sure abt it...
& m happy that hamare Mohit ko sirf 1 month wait krna pada for sanaya's YES...😳
really loved this OneShot so much...❤️
MoNaya shud read this & m sure they'll love it...!!
& Mohit ka to pata nahi but Sanaya will surely KILL you after readng this...coz u called her a DHAKKAN...!!🤣 🤣
loved Mohit's dramatic way of saying that we r role-reversal...u CONFUSED Samrat & me Waiting-to-be-loved Gunjan...i just cant stop my Fits...😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣
hope there is a nxt part to it coz i wanna see Sanaya's realization too...plzzz sumi...bata nxt part h kya iska???
i really wanna read...plzzz tell me...
this OS was amazing...seriously mind-blowinggg...
applauses for u yaar...👏 👏 👏
plzzz cont it soon & thnx 4 the PM...

Luv,
Ekta...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
sumi 
hugs 
i loved it t the core
vowww

awesome n sooo simple plus beautifull like thm😳
Edited by sashazmohit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys i think i did not live up to the expectations of this OS hence the few comments and likes.   Anyways thanks alot to those who gave ur lovelyyy and encouraging replies and ur comments mean sooo much to me.. 🤗  🤗

P.S: M being emotional.. 😳  🥺 
Silhoutte92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: CandYlicious_SG

Guys i think i did not live up to the expectations of this OS hence the few comments and likes.   Anyways thanks alot to those who gave ur lovelyyy and encouraging replies and ur comments mean sooo much to me.. 🤗  🤗

P.S: M being emotional.. 😳  🥺 

candy beta😆its time for update now atleast for those who loved it
n kon like nai krey ga love isko😉
dnt b sad n dnt b nervous n emo n senti 😳plzzz
continue soon evn i m thinking a monaya os
chahey koi commnt krey ya nai😆