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::|Ur Luv's Amazin|:: SaJan OS~ Pt2 Pg5[18/05/11] (Page 8)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
very nice update , continue soon

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged

Awesome part Nivi...!!Clap  Its too good yaar...Clap short but,very-very sweet part.Smile Very well written Part.Clap'GuNur' conversation is very very touchy.CryMarriage scene was short but,presenting so...perfectly.I loved it.Clap Smile

Study is important...I understand very well to your situation...but,if,you have some time... Please,continue...EmbarrassedThanks for PM...and very sorry for my very late reply.Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

JosephHeart



Edited by Joseph_A - 22 May 2011 at 4:45am
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Awesome part Nivi...!!Clap  Its too good yaar...Clap short but,very-very sweet part.Smile Very well written Part.Clap'GuNur' conversation is very very touchy.CryMarriage scene was short but,presenting so...perfectly.I loved it.Clap Smile

Study is important...I understand very well to your situation...but,if,you have some time... Please,continue...EmbarrassedThanks for PM...and very sorry for my very late reply.Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

JosephHeart

 
Hey Joseph Bhai!! I am glad you loved it. I am really sorry for the short part but that was all my schedule could allow!Ouch And it is okay!! Late replies are forgiven!Big smile
 
Love, NivritiEmbarrassed
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mjiJ

very nice update , continue soon
I am glad you liked it.Embarrassed Will update soon!Big smile
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
lovely update nivriti
realyyy nyccc
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont soon


Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 22 May 2011 at 11:33pm
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ar_sajan4evr

lovely update nivriti
realyyy nyccc
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont soon
 
Hey!Hug
I am really glad you liked it!Big smile
I will try and update soon but circumstances don't allow me to update!Ouch
So Keep WAITINGWink
 
With Love,
NivritiSmile
 
P.S:: What is your name by the way?Embarrassed
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Heyyy
Welll waooo it was a fantastic update.
And if u want us to be free,so its a little request from me.
As in this update thr was less romance of sajan,its was just a Passionate kiss and cuddleing,
U would have written the last part in a bit detailed way or a bit longer way,so that we will all be seeing sajan "suhagrat" in a romantic way,
But overall.
it was a Greattt part,seriouslyyy it was very nyc as it was
"THE MARRIEGE OF OUR SAJAN"
If u would have little more exxagrate it,it would have be Outstanding update among all ur updates till now,
Plzzz don't mind,thr is no heart feeling,i just told u as u told us to say.
okay
and plzzz do pm me whenever u update the next part,eagerly waiting for ur next update aur iplzzz update it soon.as i really want to see the "Fresh,and a new bigning of our SAJAN life after marriege.

Sorry if i have hurted u with my cmment...plz don't mind.Cry
luv u
sara

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess_sara

Heyyy
Welll waooo it was a fantastic update.
And if u want us to be free,so its a little request from me.
As in this update thr was less romance of sajan,its was just a Passionate kiss and cuddleing,
U would have written the last part in a bit detailed way or a bit longer way,so that we will all be seeing sajan "suhagrat" in a romantic way,
But overall.
it was a Greattt part,seriouslyyy it was very nyc as it was
"THE MARRIEGE OF OUR SAJAN"
If u would have little more exxagrate it,it would have be Outstanding update among all ur updates till now,
Plzzz don't mind,thr is no heart feeling,i just told u as u told us to say.
okay
and plzzz do pm me whenever u update the next part,eagerly waiting for ur next update aur iplzzz update it soon.as i really want to see the "Fresh,and a new bigning of our SAJAN life after marriege.

Sorry if i have hurted u with my cmment...plz don't mind.Cry
luv u
sara

Hey Sara!!Hug
Thank you for your lovely response!Smile
I am glad you put in your views!Big smile
I'm sorry I had to put a very little part of "Suhagraat" but that is all the time I had would allow!Ouch
I will try and make it up in the prologue!Big smile
You have not hurted me with your comment, I am glad you took my advise seriously and added critism..
Now I know what shall I do in the prologue!Wink
I will try and continue soon! Let's see how much my time allowsOuch...
I wanted to update ASAP but under some circumstances I can't and plus I have to update 2 of my SS too... Currently I am going to update Love Is Always ComplicatedBig smile 
Thanks again!
Love,
NivritiEmbarrassed

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