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[Maaneet FF] Karmas of Love Update New Thrd (Page 61)

harshdb IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by harshdb


thnx sooo much! wish too a very happy independence day!! 

_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 3:53am | IP Logged


It was Fantastic MadhuStar

Beautifully penned down Geet's state of mind ...well her past is holding her back from falling in love or realizing the depth of a relation between a Man & Woman.

Hope Maan will find out about her fear & help her to realize & believe in love than waiting for her to realize & accept their relationship.

uff Daadi tho ...bilkul sweet haiEmbarrassed ...she knows what she has to do & whenLOL I would say that was a good step by Daadi ...warna Maan sae kuch nahi hoga ...I accept the fact that he wants her to accept him,love him & accept their relation ...but uskeliye U should take some steps ..than sitting dumb.

pata nahi ...Daadi ka kya plan hoga ...can't wait to read it ...cont. soon.

love uHug

Edited by -dia- - 15 August 2011 at 5:40am

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-



It was Beautiful!!!
just like u jaanu Smile

me flattenLOL

Beautifully narrated the meaning of Love between any two individuals.
thnx it was something that i naturally felt coming while i was typing i am glad it made sense Wink

I'm glad that U were in Sense while typing itLOLWinkLOL

So ...tumne mera idea execute kardiya ...should say nice one DiaLOL ...I think Pari will one handy help sometime in future ...hena sweetu???
haan acchi lagi Wink well pari hai magar us group mein aur kuch log hai, sonika, minu... (to tell u the truth the are modeled after my old frens from swimming back from 8 yrs ago LOL)

umm ...where they like this?? Nahi nahi ...whther U Gurls were like this Ogling & drooling over all guys???

Finally she started to show her authoritativeness & possessiveness towards him.
wait wait dont get any ideas jhalli hai voh she changes too soon u shall know in this update (*running away from ur jhuttis*)

Exactly ...confused soulConfused *U can't get away from me so soon & U don't try tooEvil Smile*

Possessive & restless Geet ...uff ...issae kuch nahi hoga ...for how long she gonna fight with her feelings ...but I think if we want something to happen we should inject her over-does ...kyu ki normal does sae kuch kaam nahi hoga.
over dose... hmmm me already thinking while evil plan is rising in my mind Evil SmileLOL keep that thought alive for future purposes Wink

looking forward for its executionWink

'J' Geet is so adorableLOL ...bechara Maan ...*Geet ki* Babaji & *Madhu ki* Muruga ...raksha karna mere Maan ko ...when she turns into wild Tigress.
haan voh toh mere ko voh sab log raksha karenge dont worry janu Big smile

Not at all ...mera Maan hai ...he ll know to handle everythingEmbarrassed *Personal experience & trained hai*LOL

But it would be a treat for Maan to see different avatars of Geet ...chalo free entertainment hogayaLOL

Now Let me come to the main point ...But why Geet is thinking that the relationship of a Man & Woman or a Love between Opposite sex is only meant to fulfill their Physical desire??

Why she is feeling suffocated with Love??? 

Why she is fearing to fall in Love???

Why she have concluded that Love is nothing but fulfilling one's Physical desires???

As it is due to lack of love or due to some personal experience where her parent's or someone close to her has undergone something serious which resulted in making her believe  like this???
rem she has been affected if not physically but mentally. rem the times she was with her mom. she only saw her mom being used to make babies, do household chores, more like a machine because of the opposite sex, her father. she lives in a world where for her a relationship between man n woman is merely between a parasite and a plant. no mutual relationship its always one person, the man, has advantage over the woman. so she is still reluctant. her mind doesnt allow her to think beyond that. we need to change that opinion first. phir dekho voh maan ki ghulam banke ghoomegi Embarrassed

Oops ...Maan ki chakar mein ye bhoolgayeEmbarrassedLOL ..Ya I got it now ...well Maan needs to work on it as I have stated earlier.

Why I'm raising these questions, because this sentence "Failing to see this, men and women, who are intent on finding love, are always on the lookout for the opposite sex to fulfill their physical desires." ---> is just not inform for a person to decide something like that, that persons will have some personal experience in their dark past.
yes her past has been revealed to the audience n maan needs to understand her fears, which he will slowly. Big smile

warna ...he will be waiting ..waiting ...waiting ...till he becomes old ..phir bhi kuch nahi hoga.

wonderful update!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!!

love uHug
thnx sooo much jaanu. i never update the next part without ur comment so dont worry da chellam i shall wait until u are ready Smile

U r welcome sweetuTongue ...that would be easy for me ...I will tell U one secret actually there is still 10+ FFs where I want unres my post ...pata nahi when res will turn to unresDead

PS : - I think OS comment ll delayConfused ...ShollyOuch
OuchAngry hmm chalo u r excused after this shweet comment Embarrassed btw tumhari OS kahan hai... inteha hogayi intezaar ki ConfusedLOL

*pouting* gussa kyu ho rahe hai??? *Dia sob sob* ...Btw mera OS time to type it ...DW U will get in this life timeLOL

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

It was Brilliant update MadhuStar

I need more spicy J scene ...let this be just a trailerLOL
haha spicy huh?? for that we need anushka dont u think EmbarrassedWink

of course let her play the lead ...but some times random ones bhi chalengaEmbarrassed
nahiii random ones cannot come near maan Angry (phir bhi humare geet ke liye voh bhi kuch zyaada hai LOL) spicy J scenes mein there has to be closeness and for that closeness we need anushka Wink(i cannot bear a random bandhi near maan) 

Sweetu ...if I can bear with random ones ...then what's wrong with u ..kyu ki Maan tho meri henaEmbarrassed ...chalo teek hai ...for u I ll leave this random onesLOLLOL
jaanu is karmas ka love maan mera hai!! samkhi tum... sirf mera Embarrassed

woh tumhari Kawab hai ...sirrf ek ki Maan hai ...woh Maan sirf Mera haiEmbarrassed ...SamjhiWink
haan kya... mujhe kuch sunayi nahi de rahi hai... i mean kuch dikhai nahi de rahi hai LOL

Oh ho ...lagta hai tumhara dimag mein gehre chot lage hai ...uff duffer dumbo how can I see it ...for it is ur dream can I see itLOL

If this is the Dean in charge of  AIIMS,then it would not be All India Institute if Medical Science, but All India Institute of Mental ScienceLOLLOL What an intro ...whether u imagined ur Dean while writing it???EmbarrassedLOL
haha actually i was reminded of a bunch of professors i had he was actually a mix of my old chem prof and sanskrit prof LOL

See ...I was rightLOL
arent u always Big smile
woh tho hai ...I'm alwaysWinkLOL
Shocked yeh joke tha?
Tumae ye Joke lag rahe hai???Angry
haan bilkul ROFL
Urghhh ...Angry Angry

If this is the condition he will tell everyone that he is her husband ...stupid thoda intezaar kar ..if I want more 'J' track no one should know that U r married & more over if U want her to realize & accept her Feelings for U soon ...U need to wait.kehate hena Sabar ka pal meeta hota haiEmbarrassedLOL
bilkul nope dont worry he wont go around saying he is her husband LOL next update we shall see geet's friends Big smile J track ke liye humari Anushka hai naWink

woh tho hai about Geet's Friend flirting with Maan & u know what I meanWink
haan haan voh toh hota rehta hai... poor geet's friends our sherni will rip their heads off ShockedROFL

rippingROFL ...seriously ...but how she ll justify her actConfused ...woh tho Maan sae pyar nahi karthi hoo naLOL
tum dekho toh sahi Wink
dikha dhoLOL
patience is the greatest penance... wait n watch.. Wink

waitingWinkwaiting waiting

First symptom - reacting to his touch, has started & its own it way to make it more stronger ...Geet u can't escape from MSK's charm ...meine kaha na.
its hard... phew OuchLOL

its hard to escape maan's charms Embarrassed poor bandha even he doesnt know he has so much charm ROFL
Oyeee*teri BF style(Brij)*LOL ...teri itni himat hui call My Maan bandhaLOLLOL
mera maan hai mein kuch bhi bula sakti hoon. shweetu, maanu, jaan, bujji, etc etc (other names only he knows Embarrassed)

Sharam nahi aati tumaeAngry ...Kisi aur ki cheez mein haath lagnae ke liyeROFL ...aakri baat keh rahe hoo ...Maan sirf aur sirf Mera haiEmbarrassed obviously those names are not under considerationLOL
chaddo... hey babaji aap hi is pagal ladki ko samjhayiye na maan mera hai... uff... D'oh

khair chodo ...hey Muruga neengalae intha loosu ku puriya vaiyungga Maan is all mine *GAWD Tamil bhi na hard ..phew*

Ps: If I din't get more 'J', I swear I ll do what I have mentionedEvil Smile Sach meinBig smileLOL
dont worry da jaanu i promise to not disappoint u Smile

as u as the writer i think i don't want to be worried I have full faith in UBig smile
aawww muah!! Hug

ek aur J scene mein dene waali hoon (actually by the time u read this comment i would hv updated so technically de chuki hoon Wink)

Yup ...U r right ...good one ..but we want to try more hot hot 'J' scenesWink
uske liye anushka chahiye... anushka darlinggg ajaooo Embarrassed

anuska I need MalaikaLOL

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Today I read your FF from the beginning and eagerly waiting for the next updated pls do update 

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Amazing update..!!

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