Originally posted by: xmaangeetx
cool.updt soon
Originally posted by: zaara2212
finally an update ๐
Originally posted by: mayadika11
awesooome...
superb.
fab...
rocking...
wonderful...UPD...
loved it to the core...
thanx for the pm...
take care...
Originally posted by: sayaneegupta
hehehehe ab aya na uut pahar ki niche๐.. hehe Geet is sooo j๐... loved her actions soo funny๐คฃ... n Maan hai main to unke har ada pe fida huโค๏ธ... lovely update dear๐
Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Really nice part...
Thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: drashsree100
Super cool part ๐๐ผ ๐๐ผThe jealousy aspect was really funny ๐But I feel Maan should tread very carefully !He should understand why , in the 1st place , she is reluctant in opening herself up to him ??? she has been through a lot !To get closer to her 1st he needs to be her friend , not feel pity for her but show empathy ๐Loved the update ๐๐ผThanks for pm ...
Originally posted by: maaneetsangel
wow !!!!!!!! awesome ... superb ...
loved part 9 ...thnx 4 d pm ...continue soon ...
part 9
fantastic...
last time that lady and this time her friends...
OMG that was very funny but cant blame the girls...
Maan hi to aisa...
Geet hasnt realized what blunder is going to make...or made...
cont soon dear...
awesome...
dank u ๐ณdekha maine sahi bola tha...it was an old lady...๐คฃ..but u made it all up in this ...by introducing younger ones...๐loved it...haha haan i actually intended for a young receptionist but then my mind wanted an older lady n then i got confused ๐geet didnt even want to introduce him...but how can maan lose such a good opportunity ...seeing his wife J...n possessive...n i bet he enjoyed every moment of it...๐๐of course he did enjoy every moment of it but he needs to be careful!!maan i so not coming to her college...again...agar geet ka bas chale toh...๐คฃbut i so want him to come daily or at least on weekends...so i can c much more of this geet...well for that to happen it has to wait a little more pressing issues at hand...y is she running from it...the more she runs...the more love will come near to embrace her...she is not realizing it...maan is affecting her...but she is not ready to accept it...she is very far away from it...or so she thinks...ah darling that last line "or so she thinks" ๐ LOVE IT!! tum meri mazak uda rahi ho kya?? jo bhi ho i still love it n love u... or so i think ๐คฃcontinue soon...thnx for PM...thnx sooo much for the lovely analytic comment!!
Originally posted by: sharmake11
wonderful update
love geet possessivenesslove it corewaiting eagerlymuahbless yuty 4 pm
Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
awesome parts!
loved geet's possessivenessfor maan!continue sooN!
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*EDIT*It was Beautiful!!!just like u jaanu ๐Beautifully narrated the meaning of Love between any two individuals.thnx it was something that i naturally felt coming while i was typing i am glad it made sense ๐So ...tumne mera idea execute kardiya ...should say nice one Dia๐ ...I think Pari will one handy help sometime in future ...hena sweetu???haan acchi lagi ๐ well pari hai magar us group mein aur kuch log hai, sonika, minu... (to tell u the truth the are modeled after my old frens from swimming back from 8 yrs ago ๐)Finally she started to show her authoritativeness & possessiveness towards him.wait wait dont get any ideas jhalli hai voh she changes too soon u shall know in this update (*running away from ur jhuttis*)Possessive & restless Geet ...uff ...issae kuch nahi hoga ...for how long she gonna fight with her feelings ...but I think if we want something to happen we should inject her over-does ...kyu ki normal does sae kuch kaam nahi hoga.over dose... hmmm me already thinking while evil plan is rising in my mind ๐๐ keep that thought alive for future purposes ๐'J' Geet is so adorable๐ ...bechara Maan ...*Geet ki* Babaji & *Madhu ki* Muruga ...raksha karna mere Maan ko ...when she turns into wild Tigress.haan voh toh mere ko voh sab log raksha karenge dont worry janu ๐But it would be a treat for Maan to see different avatars of Geet ...chalo free entertainment hogaya๐๐ฒ๐คฃNow Let me come to the main point ...But why Geet is thinking that the relationship of a Man & Woman or a Love between Opposite sex is only meant to fulfill their Physical desire??Why she is feeling suffocated with Love???Why she is fearing to fall in Love???Why she have concluded that Love is nothing but fulfilling one's Physical desires???As it is due to lack of love or due to some personal experience where her parent's or someone close to her has undergone something serious which resulted in making her believe like this???rem she has been affected if not physically but mentally. rem the times she was with her mom. she only saw her mom being used to make babies, do household chores, more like a machine because of the opposite sex, her father. she lives in a world where for her a relationship between man n woman is merely between a parasite and a plant. no mutual relationship its always one person, the man, has advantage over the woman. so she is still reluctant. her mind doesnt allow her to think beyond that. we need to change that opinion first. phir dekho voh maan ki ghulam banke ghoomegi ๐ณWhy I'm raising these questions, because this sentence "Failing to see this, men and women, who are intent on finding love, are always on the lookout for the opposite sex to fulfill their physical desires." ---> is just not inform for a person to decide something like that, that persons will have some personal experience in their dark past.yes her past has been revealed to the audience n maan needs to understand her fears, which he will slowly. ๐wonderful update!!!loved it ...awesome!!!!love u๐คthnx sooo much jaanu. i never update the next part without ur comment so dont worry da chellam i shall wait until u are ready ๐PS : - I think OS comment ll delay๐ ...Sholly๐ก hmm chalo u r excused after this shweet comment ๐ณ btw tumhari OS kahan hai... inteha hogayi intezaar ki ๐๐
It was Brilliant update Madhuโญ๏ธI need more spicy J scene ...let this be just a trailer๐haha spicy huh?? for that we need anushka dont u think ๐ณ๐of course let her play the lead ...but some times random ones bhi chalenga๐ณnahiii random ones cannot come near maan ๐ก (phir bhi humare geet ke liye voh bhi kuch zyaada hai ๐) spicy J scenes mein there has to be closeness and for that closeness we need anushka ๐(i cannot bear a random bandhi near maan)
Sweetu ...if I can bear with random ones ...then what's wrong with u ..kyu ki Maan tho meri hena๐ณ ...chalo teek hai ...for u I ll leave this random ones๐๐jaanu is karmas ka love maan mera hai!! samkhi tum... sirf mera ๐ณwoh tumhari Kawab hai ...sirrf ek ki Maan hai ...woh Maan sirf Mera hai๐ณ ...Samjhi๐haan kya... mujhe kuch sunayi nahi de rahi hai... i mean kuch dikhai nahi de rahi hai ๐If this is the Dean in charge of AIIMS,then it would not be All India Institute if Medical Science, but All India Institute of Mental Science๐๐ What an intro ...whether u imagined ur Dean while writing it???๐ณ๐haha actually i was reminded of a bunch of professors i had he was actually a mix of my old chem prof and sanskrit prof ๐See ...I was right๐arent u always ๐
woh tho hai ...I'm always๐๐๐ฒ yeh joke tha?Tumae ye Joke lag rahe hai???๐กhaan bilkul ๐คฃIf this is the condition he will tell everyone that he is her husband ...stupid thoda intezaar kar ..if I want more 'J' track no one should know that U r married & more over if U want her to realize & accept her Feelings for U soon ...U need to wait.kehate hena Sabar ka pal meeta hota hai๐ณ๐bilkul nope dont worry he wont go around saying he is her husband ๐ next update we shall see geet's friends ๐ J track ke liye humari Anushka hai na๐woh tho hai ...how about Geet's Friend flirting with Maan & u know what I mean๐haan haan voh toh hota rehta hai... poor geet's friends our sherni will rip their heads off ๐ฒ๐คฃ
ripping๐คฃ ...seriously ...but how she ll justify her act๐ ...woh tho Maan sae pyar nahi karthi hoo na๐tum dekho toh sahi ๐dikha dho๐patience is the greatest penance... wait n watch.. ๐First symptom - reacting to his touch, has started & its own it way to make it more stronger ...Geet u can't escape from MSK's charm ...meine kaha na.its hard... phew ๐matlab๐its hard to escape maan's charms ๐ณ poor bandha even he doesnt know he has so much charm ๐คฃ
Oyeee*teri BF style(Brij)*๐ ...teri itni himat hui ...to call My Maan bandha๐๐mera maan hai mein kuch bhi bula sakti hoon. shweetu, maanu, jaan, bujji, etc etc (other names only he knows ๐ณ)Sharam nahi aati tumae๐ก ...Kisi aur ki cheez mein haath lagnae ke liye๐คฃ ...aakri baat keh rahe hoo ...Maan sirf aur sirf Mera hai๐ณ ...so obviously those names are not under consideration๐chaddo... hey babaji aap hi is pagal ladki ko samjhayiye na maan mera hai... uff...Ps: If I din't get more 'J', I swear I ll do what I have mentioned๐ Sach mein๐๐dont worry da jaanu i promise to not disappoint u ๐as u as the writer i think i don't want to be worried ...as I have full faith in U๐aawww muah!! ๐ค
๐ค๐คek aur J scene mein dene waali hoon (actually by the time u read this comment i would hv updated so technically de chuki hoon ๐)Yup ...U r right ...good one ..but we want to try more hot hot 'J' scenes๐uske liye anushka chahiye... anushka darlinggg ajaooo ๐ณ
lovely story...please update soon and pm me
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