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Posted: 12 years ago

when are we gonna see ke kya hua...i mean the present..dont tell me madam is thinking all thi before teh exam..wah kya madam hai..hehe

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra
when are we gonna see ke kya hua...i mean the present..dont tell me madam is thinking all thi before teh exam..wah kya madam hai..hehe

sry dear i wanted to get the past part done so that u can hv a smooth present (ahem with a surprise entry *wink wink*)

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsm dear... loved it waiting for d next part, pls dont keep us waiting for long

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Posted: 12 years ago

ur damn super amazing

writer madhu

yu never fail to muse me

wish i heard another update

super pretty plsss

muah

bless yu

thanks 4 pm

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ambeern

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update
loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb updates...loved it...

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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful update madhu...⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update...

loved it...

ye panditji kahan se aa gaye...uff,,...ye daadi bhi naa...

but i was glad ki maaneet ki saaari baatein i mean gun milte hain...😳

maan is also very clever,...he understood geet getting uncomfortable n immediately found out a solution...

n wo pandit...usko yaad tha ki 500 nahi pehle 5000 bole...kya pandit hai...😆

lol...me imagining maan doing a victory dance...too cute...😆

geet hugged him...chalo kuch shuruat to hui...

lets c what happens next,,,,,

continue soon...

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Originally posted by: jyoti_l
awesome update...

loved it...

ye panditji kahan se aa gaye...uff,,...ye daadi bhi naa...

but i was glad ki maaneet ki saaari baatein i mean gun milte hain...😳

maan is also very clever,...he understood geet getting uncomfortable n immediately found out a solution...

n wo pandit...usko yaad tha ki 500 nahi pehle 5000 bole...kya pandit hai...😆

lol...me imagining maan doing a victory dance...too cute...😆

geet hugged him...chalo kuch shuruat to hui...

lets c what happens next,,,,,

continue soon...

aawww darling kya comment maara hai tune 😉 lovely lovely like my very own maan (shh dia ko mat kehna ki maine my own man kaha warna mujhe maar dalegi 😆) geet ne sirf hug kiya tume pata hai mere maan ko (vahi humare feast of love maan) ke saath main kya kya kia 😳 uff badmash hai vo 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey everyone!

so here is my dilemma. well i always send every single one of my works to my best friend to read before or usually right after i update. she is my guide, critic, my everything. she is in fact a non-mannetian but thats okay she reads my work 😆. anyway the point i am introducing u to her is because the latest i sent her was karmas of love chapters. although she usually critiques my writing (which i badly need coz i get carried away easily ) she really loved this SS. n i always discuss my upcoming story line with her. n like always i did with this one too saying i would be ending it in 1 or 2 chapters from the last update. she was very upset i was ending it n wanted few more chapters included. she wanted to extend it little more to see how geet is reacting, how maan is handling things.

so here is the real reason of my note (sry for too much bak bak 😆) so i would like to know whether you guys want to prolong the story a few more chapters with more maaneet moments. showing geet's reaction to maan's presence, n vice versa before i wrap the flashback as well as the story too. please please do let me know if u are bored with the pace of the story so that i can wrap it up in a 1 or 2 more updates. u r definitely free to give ur own honest opinion, no hard feelings taken or given 😊 u have to let me know else i wont be able to update this 😭

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