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-aparichit- THREAD 1 pt11 pg141 6JUNE (Page 87)

Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Still waiting

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muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Their hips meld into one set, their hearts beat in rhythm, their tongues twirl and side step each others like graceful ballroom dancers. He open his eyes and find her looking into his now. Her heart skips a beat as she sees joy and passion flare within his eyes and he hears her breath gasp and catch.

He places another peck & lingers over her lips.. her smile widens & they share another passionate kiss. Slowly, ever so slowly, the kiss softens, their breathing deepens, and their grasp lessens. He pulls back and look into her eyes once again. She see a reflection there that her heart recognizes..very similar to hers. She has heard ridzy say the stars explode above ur eyes..behind the closed lids.. with this kiss she felt it all. She saw in his eyes the wonder she felt, the fear of losing herself totally to someone she barely knew. He kissed her forehead..I missed u..
why didn't u call?? she complained
I was angry
she pulled away.. & turned crossing her arms around her. Ek tho aap mujhe hurt karthen ho & then u only get angry.
When did I hurt u?
She wondered yehlo..inha pata hi nahi.. why I am hurt!!
he pulled her shoulder & face him.. I didn't mean to hurt u..
but u did
ok I am sorry
u really don't mind me working
r u out of ur mind??
he almost raised his voice...
then looked that they found.. it was still isolated.
Then why did u ask will I manage job & house
oh god jaan.. I was just trying to start a conversation.
(she almost fell for that jaan word their, though it was said so causally)
he rolled his eyes..& hugged her. She smiled & slowly slipped her around his waist.
Aap kyun naraz then?
Chodo na..
nahi..I want to know.. she insisted
tum mujhe se naraz thi.. teehk hain.. why did u have to tell every one. It was between us right.
She felt so touched, he thought they were so close. She bit her lips & hid her face in his embrace.. I thought we broke up.
He jerked her away still holding her shoulder looking into her eyes painfuly.. how can we jaan.
Oops again..jaan.. she was definitely fallen too hard for him.
itni choti si baat ke liyen koi engagement break kartha hain kya

All this confusion because  we don't talk & we don't know each other
their isolation was disturbed by the someone approaching, they immediately step apart. He slips his fingers between hers & walk her to his car away from crowd.
He pulled her & almost turned in a jerk pinning between the car & himself. I know u pretty well now.. tum kuch karne phele sochthi nahi ho.. phir gussa bhi ho jathi ho..
she made a baby face.. u don't even know I don't drink coffee.
Do u know..
he asks?
How am I to know.. we don't spend time together.
He moved closer kissing her shoulders.. naughtily.. jab main time spend karta hoon tho tum naraz ho jathi ho..
she snaps on his hands.. softly.. aisen nahi..
he steps back feeling little odd.. thats why I came with my driver.. woh bhi tumhe pasand nahi tha
she hugs him.. mera matalab woh nahi tha
he smiles.. loving her move to hug him.. pull him back in her embrace
phir kya tha
talk more..know each other... like wat I like..& u like..
we have the whole life to do that..
he dips his head deeper in her neck.. sweeping her into a world of passion.
I missed u she said breathing heavily
I know he smirked
he took those lips in his yet again..claiming as his!! only his.

Departing was so difficult..knowing where to stop was impossible.. especially when u know this is wat we do on that special night!!! but still holding back.. uff.. why!!! but then they had to!!

She did feel lighter & better. He was not wat she thought of him.. but now it all didn't seem to matter, because really liked him, found of him. The way he made her feel with his touch was special..he called her jaan...that was so beautiful.. she really didn't expect that coming from him. She really felt touched. Yes.. he was her would be!! husband!! she skipped a beat.. she looked at his pic & kissed him. Giggled & hid the snap .. thats when her phone rang. She immediately hid is pic & answered the call clearing her throat ..hi..
there was silence.. each drawn back into the sweet feel of their lips sealed together.
He finally broke the silence..abhi bhi naraz ho
she said promptly then blushed
phir kuch bol kyun nahi rahi
main kya boloon
nahi call kiya tho naraz hothi ho.. call kartha hoon.. tho chup rahti ho..karoon tho main kya karoon
jo humesha karthen ho...
oops that was an open invitation ..she realized .. then closed her eyes tight.. not knowing how to react. .. she definitely mean that..
He laughed... a loud
her cheeks were red & burning.

staying away for next few weeks was impossible. Every min was spend on phone. Knowing..actually longing!!! togetherness.

- BLOG aparichit part 8-

getting to know!!

please do comment
thanxs a lot for the warm welcome

Edited by muskanp - 31 May 2011 at 9:57am

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for the first m the first one to cmt. M very much happy. M feelin lyk m in cloud 9... Ok coming to update it was superb n fantastic...All theMU cleared. I jst loved it when maan says jaan to geet. Me wanting more cute talks on phone. It was awesome... Thnx 4 so nice update. Update soon...

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lovely update... cant wait for more.

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Kitna sweet tha!

Awww...i hope we get a few more phone calls...and no more misunderstandings!!

Amazing update


Cant wait for more :-) 

Edited by cue1 - 28 May 2011 at 1:56pm

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wow loved it so much Tongue

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