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-aparichit- THREAD 1 pt11 pg141 6JUNE (Page 57)

anushaarja IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:24am | IP Logged
phir se fight... ohh god!! bacha le...

muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged


ridzy - forget past . .. he probably has never even touched a girl.. u r the only girl in his life.
Geet was definitely happy.. thrilled.
Geet was all dreaming, fantasizing about him. She was surely falling for him, already.

She checked her phone couple of time to see if there was any calls or message from him. The whole day was pretty much the same except that she was terribly missing his call. Finally he called in the afternoon. She picked up in one ring.
Maan - hi
she blushed - hi..
Maan - kya kar rahi ho?
She played with her curls - rounds pe hoon
Maan - coffee?
She had a wide smile - umm
Maan - mummy ji se baat karni hain kya
she jumped
he smiled at her keenness...
Maan - shall I pick u
she was so happy - ji
Maan - see u at 6
Geet - umm

6pm sharp Maan was outside sanjeevini..waiting..
6.15 Geet called up.. Maan kuch emergency hain will take 15 mins
Maan - umm..
he was getting restless.. & bit irritated.. but the excitement of meeting her was overshadowing every other feeling that was playing. Finally she rushed out removing her coat at 6.35pm.. sorry sorry sorry.. she said & came rushing out to the other side of the door. He smiled delightfully seeing her.
Main ne bahut late kardiya na
he was in no mode to complain.
She quickly settled in, settling her coat & purse in her lap, tossing those curls that teased her cheeks. Suddenly, out of nowhere his hands caressed her curls. She looked up sideways & saw his face..his deep eyes looking admiringly at her. She felt a butterfly in my stomach as his hands tucked them behind her ears. She immediately lifted her hand settled her curls.. scraping his hand softly. The air was so heavy. She didn't know what to say. He was silent and yet he wouldn't start the car. He felt he would be insane just to sit their & admire her like that. All the while he could think was how it felt to feel her close to him. He was losing all the sanity he ever had. He wanted to feel her, hug her kiss her.. he straightened himself & tried to look straight.

He finally started the car & drove towards a coffee shop. He drew in silent and it made her nervous. he glanced at her once in a while, she always wore that beautiful smile. He looked at her again, his eyes locked at her lips. She placed her eyes on the floor of the car nervously. They finally reached near the coffee shop. Geet nervously undid her seat belt & tried to move out.. he pulled her wrist & held her back. He turned her body to him & slowly pulled her back.. it as so natural to just get carried away, then he touched her cheek. His hand was warm. She closed her eyes blushing. His hands slowly slipped behind her ears..she chuckled, he long fingers caressed her scalp softly & then griping her hair pulled her closer to him. His other hand carnally grabbed around her waist. She tucked her belly & almost stop breathing. He madly kissed her cheeks, shoulder, neck.. ears.. she clung on to him.. crumbling his shirt harder in her fist, her eyes closed tightly, unsure how she was supposed to react. After a long moment of passionate kisses & hug..he pulled her yet to his arms both panting and she let it. She rested her head on his chest, enjoyed the warm, the tenderness and the comfort he gave to her excited nervousness. His warmth, his  scent, she absorbed it as much as she could.. she felt herself weak.. lost in his embrace. Without word they stayed like that for a long time. Before they could realize it was too late.. she had to rush home. He halfheartedly dropped her home. She felt so shy..she didn't dare to look into his eyes.

She threw herself on the bed.. without changing.. she cold smell him all over.. Oh god she loved it.. she was definitely going crazy about him.. the way he made her feel. . She was so tired after the long day.. but she couldn't sleep.. she was restlessly rolling over.. yes!!! it was Maan .. just Maan the whole time in her mind!!! she just wished he called..

he reached home, showered changed & fell thud on his bed.. her feel!!! the moment they was so perfect.. she was his!! the thought tickled his senses. They were going to be married.. his wife!!.. oh yes.. his only his. He couldn't have enough of it. He was on top of this world. Like he got wat ever he ever wanted.

Every thing was beautiful perfect . They met couple of times.. every time.. the passion seem to fire up to a new level. Geet was nervous & terrified while he was fervid & passionate. They never went beyond hugging & kissing. Not even a lip-lock yet. But the passion was driving then to insanity.. leaving them molten within..wet & oozing.

Maan did feel may be she was getting little scared & he should take it talk something.. but the moment he sees her he couldn't think much..he goes blank. He feels possessed with the feel of just consuming her.  Geet was wanting to talk to him, know him better but they hardly spoke when they were together. She even mentioned to him indirectly I need to know u better..etc..

Family had decided on the wedding date too. It was for next month. Now the anxiety was uncontrollable especially for Maan. But then he decided he was going to be in control & talk. He went to pick her up with the driver today. Geet was taken a back. He opened the door for her & nicely sat next to her.
Maan - how was ur day
she was little confused - fine
his hand caressed hers.. that was enough to push him to the edge. He looked out side the window.. clinching his fist..cursing himself to have got the driver. Geet was finding all this odd. She thought as the wedding date is nearing probably he is losing interest.. may be she was right it was just an attraction . They reached the coffee shop. He elegantly opened the door for her & helped to come out. This was really the final blow for her, in last few weeks of them dating they never came out of the car. She was heart broken. Babaji yah sab kya ho raha hain.. he is not interested in me any more.

They settled down in a corner table
Maan - coffee? He asked her
she was so hurt.. he doesn't even know wat I like...
Geet - ice - tea she said looking away
they sat silently drinking their respective drinks.. ok.. Maan knew it was all wired he needs to talk.. needs to say something. He just casually said ur job is quiet demanding na!!
she as totally pissed off with this change in their usual meeting.. uppar se silence.. he doesn't even know wat she likes..  she was fuming within
she just nodded
ok.. he wanted to continue to talk.. so just without even thinking .. will u be able to manage after marriage.
Thats it ..she lost it completely.. agar house wife chahiyen thi tho..why did u get engaged to me...
Maan was dumb stuck at her reaction, he had no clue wat he said that she was getting so disturbed.

-BLOG aparichit part 5-


please do comment
thanxs a lot for the warm welcome

Edited by muskanp - 25 May 2011 at 4:17pm

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kawaii_geet IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
oye hoye...Dancing
me 1st...yippie...oye balle balle...Party

hehehe was actually about to stalk u and write waiting and all stuff
 wen i just stumbled upon the updateLOL

now cuming to the update...
great update muskan...Clap
but precap is scary...Confused
they r in luv
still dey kinda dun trust each otherCry
plz update soon...
and yeah...
want Mus to be cleared as soon as possible!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 24 May 2011 at 2:11am

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craziekudi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged


this happens actually !!!LOL

Edited by maneet1985 - 24 May 2011 at 2:13am

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:56am | IP Logged
aree muskan diii
now toh thy were fine
bt y d misunderstanding
hope thy clear it out soon

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
wonderful update... maaneet romance ws amazing... Geet wants to know him better and when he tries to do tht... mis understanding... am sure they would sort it out... but how its gonna be... me waiting for that

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ridhz21 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Wonderful update

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Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Shaadi bhi nahi hui aur misunderstanding shuru. . . . Nahiii. . . . .lol. . .

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