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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
long live muskaan at leas geting t one update on this slow without geet. saturday...

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
waiting...Day Dreaming

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muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:39pm | IP Logged


He whispered close to her ears.. I like ur hair like this..
she dipped her head & smiled.. she could feel a shiver down her with his breath fanning her earlobe. Ridzy teased her on the other ear he is macho macho..
chup kar
Maan looked at her wondering why did she say that. She immediately looked at him.. appko nahi .. woh meri frd.. she introduced ridhima
Geet - this is my frd Ridzy..& amy
he was little confused with their name
then she cleared her throat I mean Dr. ridhima Gupta & Dr. armaan Malik
Maan extended his hand Maan Singh Khurana in a heavy voice very serious tone.
Armaan immediately hugged him.. yaar now we are family.. so hug. Maan was little reluctant then smiled weakly. By then anu just came to congratulate Maan.
Maan shouted - abhi aa raha tu salen
Geet, amy & ridzy looked a the them & smiled. Maan hugged him tight.. & introduced anu to them as his best friend.

They all moved to have dinner. While heading towards the dinner table Maan held her hand she missed a beat & stiffened. He pulled her closer & dragged her running towards the steps. Yah kya kar rahen ho. She couldn't keep pace with him, she held her saree upwards with the other hand panting. The moment they reached away from the venue & the crowd. He pulled her in his was thrilling, exciting, scaring.. their heart was beating faster & faster.. she landed on his chest he felt a jolt all over him. His hands held her & crushed her closer. He closed the distance between them, oblivious to the surronding.. they were in the corridor next to lift. He didn't care about any thing that little moment he had been craving for .. he pulled her against him.

Maan she exclaimed with a giggle before her mouth wa s crushed into his neck. His perfume was intoxicating. His lips kissed her neck deeply.. it was so hot & passionate that left no guessing as how desperate he was for her. He wanted to touch & kiss every inch of her. He walked her back until she was pinned between him & the wall behind her. She moaned, pressing tight against him. His hand wandered all over her back... caressing her holding her close almost crushing her into his embrace. She was so turned on & feeling really conscious. It was all really exciting & giving her new sensation. He gave her a tight hug, she felt her bone may just crush.. melt into his arms. They were forced to pull away panting yet still holding her close when the lift just stopped at their floor. Luckily it was empty they both laughed when the lift closed. He kissed her cheek before they headed towards the dinner table. She bit her lower lip & dipped her head down feeling really shy & shocked with his sudden explosion of passion.

As they walked in the hall, Rano asked.. kanha rah gayen the tum dono.
Geet didn't know wat to say, she looked flushed.
Maan - woh mumy ji humare koi rishten dar jaldi nikal rahen the.
Geet smiled still looking down.
Rano - koi gal nahi puttar dinner kar lathen hain.
Maan still held on to her hand firmly as they walked in.
she was feeling so conscious but didn't resist now. She knew he won't like if she did that. 

Ridzy came close to Geet & whispered in her ears, atleast Maan ke galen se aapna lipstick wipe kar lethi. Geet got scared & looked at Maan.
He knotted his brows looking at her scared & baffled face.
She tip toed & whispered aapke galen main.. woh.. woh .. she was feeling so odd to tell him, she took her pallu & wiped it.. making sure no one was looking. Armaan, ridzy & anu pretended not to notice.
Maan was least bothered.

Next day in at Sanjeevni Geet looked really worried as she was slamming her locker & curing it.
Ridzy - kal hi teri engagement huwi hain, why r u looking so upset today?
Geet - nahi yaar I am not upset I am just confused
ridzy - why r u confused?
Geet - Ithink Maan is just attracted to me he doesn't love me.
Ridzy - kya matlab
Geet knotted her pallu & walked around - mera matlab hain.. its not like u & amy.. it is just physical types
ridzy - how do u say that
Geet was little shy, but then she had to share otherwise her head would just explode - kal after engagement me just
ridzy interrupted kissed u ??
Geet snapped - NO
ridzy was little disappointed
Geet - he dragged me to a corner & hugged me..
ridzy - & then
Geet - really hard.. almost like crushed my bones, caressed me here & there
ridzy - thats so cute
Geet was already confused & now more ..
ridzy pulled her cheek.. it is normal
Geet - so hard
ridzy smiled - actually think about it .. it means..
Geet made a odd face.. means he is desperate
ridzy - grow up Geet!! there is nothing wrong about being keen towards an opposite sex.
Geet rolled her eyes..
ridzy - Geet stupid .. it means u r the first girl in his life
Geet smiled feeling really shy now. Oh like that..
ridzy - so ur macho.. is all urs.. only urs.
Geet - but he was so raw types
ridzy - don't worry soon u will miss this
Geet - kya matlab
ridzy whispers amy is so soft & gentle
Geet - how romantic
ridzy - but u know amy had a past in college
Geet smiled doesn't have any past
ridzy - forget past . .. he probably has never even touched a girl.. u r the only girl in his life ever.
Geet was definitely happy.. thrilled.
Geet was all dreaming, fantasizing about him. She was surely falling for him, already.

- BLOG Wink aparichit part 4-
oops fight
thanxs a lot for all the beautiful comments thanks a lot
please do comment

Edited by muskanp - 24 May 2011 at 1:52am

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
Yayy me first
Fab update::
Awww loved how he took her away & start romancing
Even me wondering that is he attracted to her only or duz he luv her cuz wen rano called he didn't even about the lipstick mark
Cont soon Xx...

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 21 May 2011 at 8:49pm

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my_maan_geet Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
awesome was sooo romanticEmbarrassed
but geet is totally jhalliLOL...

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PoojaMishty Goldie

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
SmileCute update... Smile
Maan is really naughty...Wink

Geet .. Pagli hai...

Loved the converation between Ridz and Geet...Clap

Precap... No ways... Abhi to engagement hui hai... Itni jaldi fight...Ouch
Thoda to romance karo...Wink

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MsMovielover IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
aww that was amazing...
oh no precap is scaring me i hope its not a big fight
continue soon

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
love geet & ridz conv
maan so naughty
the precap sounds interesting
beautiful part
love it
cant wait to read next part


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