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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
great
loved it

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Jst awsm concept really very good

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Hey dat was so sweet i liked ur aparichit do update soon

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wow!!!!!!! sweet one...

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~Aparichit~
2

The families jelled & it was a yes from both Maan & Geet. So the engagement was fixed in a weeks time. Maan smiled at her before leaving, she shied.

On the way back..
annu - kya baat ki? Wat did u ask her? How did u find her?
Maan kept quiet with a blush teasing his cheek
annu - bolna yaar, wat did u ask her?
Maan was still quiet
annu - tell me something about her
Maan - she is very talkative & he laughed
Daadi - perfect for u.
he blushed yet again
annu - yah tu tho baat nahi kartha aacha hain atleast she will

Geet ran into her room to answer the call from impatient amy & ridzy.
Ridzy - kya huwa?
Amy - is he macho types?
Geet giggled - sat ko engagement hain
amy - oh no!! mera back plan ka kya hoga
Geet - sorry ..u missed ur chance!!
ridzy waked amy
amy - aah!!! its paining
she waked him again
Geet laughed meri taraf se bhi
amy - some one is really happy there.
Geet was blushing crimson red.
Ridzy - so tell me something about him
Geet - I kinda liked him, he speaks straight frwd, amy tumhari tarah nahi guma phiraken
amy rolled his eyes
Geet - he said I am beautiful
amy -  tumhe dehk ke koi andha bhi aisen kahe ga
Geet - tu meri taarif kar raha hain yah tang keech raha hain
they all laughed

ridzy - aacha chal hal sanjeevni main milthen hain

Geet was getting really excited & happy about the whole engagement thing. She would dream crazily about Maan. She was so happy, she wanted to talk to him. But then she was girl how could she call him first. She felt the time was moving like a snail.. not passing the 2days seemed like ages..& Mr Macho has not called her yet.. seems like there is no emergency in his side. She twisted her lips & closed her phone rolling into the spread.

Maan was restless too. He dialed her number god knows how many times but didn't dare to complete the call.. press the green call button. Anu was watching him for last 2 days, dialing the digit & then erasing it.
Arren yar aab taak tho mujhe yaad hogaya hain uska number. Maan immediately slipped th ephone back in.
annu - baat karle na
Maan - nahi its ok.. any way I will be meeting her on sat..
& his heart went SAT!!!! OMG.. he just gulped his drink. He tried to think different but didn't seem to help. Around 11.30pm again he was dialing the digit & before he could cut it, anu pressed the green button...maan looked at the phone in shock.. & before he could cut he heard her sweet droopy voice hello..& then probably she checked the number..cleared her throat ..tried to sound fresh oh!! hai!! hain..
kya huwa??
Maan blibked couple of times..kya huwa?
She giggled ambulance kanha behjni hain
Maan checked the number yet again..& tried to recollect...
then very carefully..geet?? & closed his eyes tight fearing...wat if it was a wrong number
aap mera number dial karogen tho main hi boloongi na!!
he sighed in relief, then smiled oddly at anu. Took his hone & went out to the parking lot.
Annu shook his head & ordered another drink of himself.
Maan was still wondering wat to say
aapne bataya nahi ambulance kanah behjni hain
ambulance?
U said u will only call me in case of emergency
he realized wat she meant now. .. he totally forgotten that comment of his.. now regretting it totally
Tho emergency nahi hain she teased
hain na.. he retorted
she narrowed her brows
yanha kisi ka heart beat high ho raha hain,
tachycardia??(medical term)
he rolled his eyes
kuch kaam nahi ho paa raha, bar bar number dial kartha hain lekin ..call complete hi nahi hota
call she was confused now
she tried to sound sincere ..tachycardia under normal health condition could be due to
'Exercise or exertion
nahi
'Large meal
khana tho ..uff man hi nahi kartha
'Anger
na...
'Nervousness
why will be nervous...
his ego
'Anxiety
may be
'Excitement
may be..actually a bit
'Emotion
wat emotion??? he was trying to lead her
like..grief
he was frustrated now.. damit ..I was dieing to talk to u!!
her face turned whole red & she hid herself in the pillow.

 
- BLOG aparichit part 2-

Precap
engagement
-PREV  PART 1   NEXT  PART 3-
hope u like this journey of Maan & Geet to maaneet in aparichit.
Aplease let me know how u like the concept
another love story ..aparichit means unknown..ignorant
love
muskan


Edited by muskanp - 18 May 2011 at 11:33am

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ah both of them are restless and nervous...happens in arranged marriageWinkWinkWink
sweet talk...finally he told her the reason else she would have asked atleast 20 more to find out the reason...


Edited by puth - 13 May 2011 at 11:51am

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no words for this update
simply out of the world

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