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new ss:mrs shukla

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
hi guys!i knw m 2 pathetic writer n nobody likes ma prvs ffCrybt despite all ur disliking i direly want 2 write more abt chalka.Embarrassedsorry 4 tat!so here i present ma 1st ss on chalka.hope this time i dnt get such a pathetic response as i got previouslyShocked
p.s ill try 2 make it a bot funny so tat u guys cn bear wid it!


Edited by tinatartari - 11 May 2011 at 6:55am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
u r welcome dear...
write some..
we all waitin...

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
              part 1
(this scene starts 4m abhishek s wedding tat we hav been watchng nwadays)Silly
alka hs been quarreling wid chander tat she fears losing him as arti loves him n she cnt see the same feelings of any1 else 4 him as hers n tat he z only hers.chander reassures him tat he belongs 2 her only.
then in between the wedding jay wardhan comes n asks alka wen z she marrying chander?Confused
alka z dumbstuck by the question.NNt comes 4m behind.LOL
NNt:hi jay!kaise o?
jay:m fine tiwari uncle.ap kaise hain?
NNt:me theek hoon.ao tmhain guests c milwaon!
jay:sure uncle
n they both go away.
alka z lost deep in thot tat how 2 avoid losing chander.chander comes 4m behind.he puts his hands on her eyes
chander:kyun mrs shukla?ap itni pareeshan kyun hain?Embarrassed
alka:(first into the spell of wat he called her)main!pareshan!nahi to!m f9 chander!u go n enjoy wid arti!Angry
chander:oho alka stop it!kia o gaya e tmhen?baat baat p yehe kahe ja rahe o!bohat fikr e na tmhen?theek e aj me tmhari sari pareeshani khtam kar doon ga.ye mera tum c promise e!Smile
alka:ok.lets c shukla jee!ap aisa kia karte hain?Ermm


Edited by tinatartari - 11 May 2011 at 7:32am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
                  part 2
aftr bidaai,all rush 2 tiwari house.gauri z given a warm welcome n all the rasmen performed wid her.wid each n every act,alka imagines it 2 b wid her n chander.chander senses her day dreaming bt doesnt say anythng.
nxt morning
gauri makes kheer 4 every1!its so tasty.chander ws also thr.then alka receives a msg 4m chander aftr he z gone.
mrs  shukla!plz come 2 the temple whr we used 2 go earlier.i hav a v imp thng.
urs only chander
alka quickly gets ready n lies 2 every1 tat she z gng 2 meet her buddy.she hs come aftr a long time.
wen she reaches the temple,chander z already thr w8ng 4 her.
chander:ayeye mrs shukla!me ap ka e w8 kar raha tha!LOL
alka:kaheye shukla jee!Tongue
chander:aj kahna sunana kuch nahi,kar k dikhaon ga sirfWink
he holds her hand n takes her in the temple.alka z dumb struck wid this act of his.even tat wsnt enough.
wen they reach the temple,chander leaves her hand,goes 2 the pooja place,grabs the tray,takes a pinch of sindoor n comes n fills alka s maang.
alka z shocked dead!she cant recollect wats gng on?Ouch
chander:pandit jee!plz make the mandap ready. m gettng married 2day!Clap
alka z hell shocked bt then she starts smiling n blushing.
chander:mrs shukla!ab ap ko koi b mjhse nahi cheen paye ga!ab to khush hain na?n apka darr b khatam o gaya?
alka(smiles n blushes)Embarrassed
chander:(hits her shoulder wid the side of his shoulder)kyun mrs shukla!kuch bolti kyun nahi??
alka:shukla jee!ab me kia bolon?Embarrassed
chander:kuch na boliye,chup raheiye tab b hum apke dil ki baat smjh lenge!Wink
pandits starts the mantars n chalka takes pheras.
aftr finishing,chander refills her maang n ties mangalsutra around her neck!both take blessings 4m the pandit.
then they go out of the temple n go 2 their fav place 2 spend smtime alone.
alka:ab shukla jee?wat next?Stern Smile
chander:ab kia mrs shukla?ap officially mrs shukla en!meri dharam patni n hamara 7 janams ka relationship ban gayya e jisse koi nahi torr sakta!Heart
alka(blushes)Dancing
chander:mrs shukla!ap ye ghari ghari sharmane kyun lag jate hain?Approve
alka:(hits his shoulder)stop it chander!Day Dreaming
chander(playfully) mrs shukla!patnian apne pati ko aise nahi mara karteen!LOL
alka:shukla jee!aj kal ap bohat zyada e tarr tarr nahi karne lag gayye???Angry
chander:apne pati ka itna apmaan?mrs shukla kuch to lihaz karo!Ouch
alka:pati dev!(bends her head n folds her hands)main aj c ap ki pooja kia karoon gi har roz n starts gigglingLOL
evening
chander:ok alka its late lets go home.Ouch
alka:r we gonna tell every1!Confused
chander:no!4 sme days we gonna keep our marriage a secret!
ok guys!hope u like ma ff.plz plz plz do leave sme cmnts so i shud knw whether i continue or nt!its ma last attempt.if u guys dnt like it,ill stop writing any furthur!Cry

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
kya baat kya baat!!! I dont know about others but I liked it..:-))) Keep up!

U know in the episodes of marriage where they showed insecurities of Alka I wanted them to show some quality time between chalka..Like when she called Arti-Chander for dinner I wanted Chander to be already there and feeding each other..Not paying unnecessary attention to Arti..

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Eagerly waiting for that to happen..Hope Abhi dsnt over react..Amen!

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