DEEWANGI..MN OS ..note at pg 3 - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful OS
Amazing piece of Writing
But I just cant tolerate More sad endings
So plz next Time write Happy ending
But This was really amazing
and Poetry was so beautiful 
it bring tears in my eyes
Thanks for Pm.
Posted: 12 years ago
lovely

par nupur k mayuse dur jane k reason kuch samajh nahi ayi!!!!!!

shyness to samjhi but y she wanted k mayu to hate her !!!! kuch nahi samjhi

still loved ur writing
ratko sonese pehle ayse rulana jaroori tha!!!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by aj_madz


sorry jan
plz coment na...plish
Ab itna pyara Plish ho to i had to comment na😊...!!!

Actually its true life is no bed of roses...u don't get what u expect from life all the time...but agar Deewangi ki hadh ho to kuch bhi possible hai...n here it was in ur Os...they couldn't  be together in life but their passion broke all barriers even death can't apart them...they were soo much in love that there remained no walls of life or death between them...they were together forever...a happy ending in real sense...!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful
heart wrenching...the last part was mind blowing..dat made me cry
nice piece of work
Posted: 12 years ago

First i was confused

n then 2nd part i understand
it ws so amotional n painful 😭 OS hun
but beautifuly written 👏
thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
completely speechless...😭
Posted: 12 years ago
nice OS update soon

thx alot for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god

when I read this os I was so confused tht I had to read it again

but finally I understood

such an eMotional os

loved it

very deep

do write more
Posted: 12 years ago
that was a gr8 job
 
though a sad ending
 
but touching
 

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