Not to make you "pareshan" darling !!!

Not to make you "pareshan" darling !!!

 

All of you might have noticed how ArMan hide things from each other and others, their excuse always being they didn't want to make the other one/others pareshan.

 

See how high can the height of hiding things can be.

 

Pregnant Archu is not well. Manav has failed in his business.

 

Archu- (Feeling pain in her stomach) Uiii Maa

Manav- (comes) tumne uii maa kyun kaha?

Archu- aise hi kal ek movie dekhi thi maine udhar heroine baat baat par uii maa kaha karti thi..to is liye maine bhi bol diya

Manav- oh tum bhi na.. (manav's phone rings..an underworld bhai is calling him for paying back his money..)

Manav- Hello

Bhai- sale kab paise dega

Manav- de dunga na

Bhai- kab dega be

Manav- main tumhe 15 min baad call karun? (disconnects)

Archana- kis ka phone tha manav? Koi tumhe dhamki to nahin de raha?

Manav-are nahi ek dost ka phone tha. Keh raha hai 25 rupaye udhaar dene ko..maine bola de dunga..bas aur kya..achha chalo main nahake aata hun

 

(Manav goes to the bathroom. Archana feels severe pain and rolls on the bed but she is not shouting. Manav comes back)

 

Manav- kya hua? Koi dikkat hai kya?

Archana-are nahi main yeh bed pe roll karke dekh rahi thi yeh sone keliye comfortable hai ya nahi..

Manav-yeh bhi koi tarika hai..main darr gaya tha kahin tumhe koi dard to nahi ho raha

 

Archana completes around 8.5 months of pregnancy. She is now having labour pain.

 

Archana- ahhh

Manav-dard ho raha hai kya?

Archana- nahi wo to main aise hi

Manav-tumhe na jhooth bolna nahin aata. are sach bolo na

Archana- thoda sa dard ho raha hai…par tum pareshan mat hona.thoda sa hi hai

Manav-achha main padosh se Ganga mausi ko bula ke lata hun..

 

(Mausi comes)

Ganga Mausi- are beta isse hospital leke kyun nahin gaye..bachha hone ka time ho gaya

Manav-oh ab main kya karun?Archana tumne mejhe bataya kyun nahin ki labour pain shuru ho gaya hai

Archana- kahin aap pareshan ho jaoge yeh socha maine

Manav-tumne mujhe apna samjha hota to mujh se kabhi kuch chhupaya nahin hota

Ganga Mausi- beta yeh nautanki band karo..pehle doctor ko bula ke lao..abhi isse hospital leke jane ka bhi time nahin apne paas

 

(Manav rushes to the doctor. After some time he comes back with a doctor and ambulance)

 

Manav- yeh kya ghar se bachhe ke rone ki awaz aa rahi hai

Ganga- beta tu baap ban gaya..nanhi si pari aayi hai tere ghar mein

 

(doctor goes and checks up mother and baby)

 

Doctor- deklhiye manav ji..aap ki wife ko abhi ke abhi blood dena padega..unhe jaldi hospital leke jana padega..bachhi ko bhi kuch treatment ki zarorat hai..both suffer from weakness related problems

 

Manav-hey bhagwan…

 

(all go to hospital)

 

(Treatment of both mother and new born goes on. Suddenly Manav faints. He is also taken to a bed adjacent to Archu's)

 

After sometime Archu's doctor comes.

 

Archu's doc- kya madam..aap ko itni kamzori thi..aapne pregnancy ke time diet bhi nahi liya..dawai bhi nahi li..shukr hai bachhi bach gayi..but aap ko abhi 4 saal dawai leni padegi

Manav- Archana tum ne mujhse itni badi baat chhupayi..jab jab tumhe dard ho raha tha tumne kaha ki yeh dard nahi hai filmy dialogue hai..archana tum ne yeh theek nahin kiya..yahan tak ki labour pain ke time bhi tumne yeh nahin bataya ki tumhe dard ho raha hai..

Archana- aap aise bhi tension mein hote hain..aap ko aur jyada tension na ho is liye maine yeh baat chhupayi

Manav's doctor comes.

 

Manav's doc- manav ji aap ko report aa gayi hai. Aap ki to ek kidney gayab hai. Kamzori us wajeh se hai

Archana-nahiii manav aap ki kidney kahan gayi

Manav- mujhe nahin pata..kaise gayab ho gayi

Archana- sach bolo aap ko meri kasam

Manav-business mein loss hone ke baad underworld ke bhai se maine kuch paise liye the..usse de nahin saka..to usne meri kidney kat li

Archana- achha wo phone calls..jo aap mujhe keh rahe the ki aapke dost aap ko Rs 25 udhhar manga raha hai

Manav- haan..

Archana- aap ne itni badi baat mujh se kyun chhupayi Manav

Manav-tum aise bhi tension mein thi..tumhe aur tension na ho isliye maine yeh sab nahin bataya tumhe

Archana- nahiii..main mar kyun nahi gayi yeh sunne se pehle

Manav- nahiii…yeh sab kya ho gaya

Nurse- yeh natakbaazi baad mein kariyo..bachhi ko doodh pilao..usko bhuk lagi hogi..par aap dono ki bachhi hai na is liye ro bhi nahi…shayad isliye kahin aap pareshan na ho jao

OMG shud I laugh or cry... initially I laughed especially at 'Arey kidney kahaan gayi' but when I thought about kidney-less Manav I cried.

Nice one SD bhai!! Laughed so much. I can expect this on the show!

Btw how r u? Long time no talk. Hope everything is good with u.

SD bhai kya baat hai?  Stupendous Nautanki 👏

SD too good... M still laughing 😆😆😆😆😆... Aaap tension mein the, tumhe koi pareshani nahi ho, kaha gaya kidney hehehehe just hilarious...

This time  I don't know to laugh or feel frustrated on your write up .Really good work SD .I hope the creatives of this show read this ..

Guess who is here.. Where were you and how are you ?

Very well written.. Its like raising an issue in humorous way..

very nice as always..😆..

AWSOM STORY.I REALLY ENJOY IT FULLY.PLEAS GIVE US MORE THESE KINDS OF STORY ABOUT PAVITRA RISHTA.