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SV FF |Priceless Memories| Last Epi Pg 33 THE END (Page 30)

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Posted: 11 August 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
arrey waah bidzyyy superbbb FF...
i love d way you show the present n the past scenes...itzzz damnnn coool...
hope everything will b fynn...n the precap's just awesummm

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
I could picture him in the Sardar avatar, Sharad could do that role really well omggg haaiii!!!
"Shut up Sagar. Humare dosti mein thank u aur sorry ki koi jagah nahi hai, u know naa." ~awww they have such a cutee dosti <3 Big smile
awww Sneha is such a cutiepie when she asks him to help her sleep!!!!

Hehe the last scene was soo funny!! hahaha she's irritated with him, it'll be great to see her slowly remember everything!!

Can't wait until the next update !!

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
Thank u everyone for ur comments...love ya all Hug...here's the nxt episode..Big smile



Episode 14...

Coming out of the washroom, Sneha saw Sagar smiling which confused her. She walked up to him and asked, "Papa, aap aise akele akele muskura kyun rahe ho?" Sagar lowered his eyes and sensing the cuteness in his daughter's voice, he smiled from ear-to-ear making Sneha stare at him confusedly. "Beta, aap jab bade ho jaoge tab aap samajh payoge ki apke papa muskura kyun rahe hain!", Mohit walked in and said teasingly. Sagar hit on his arm playfully and said, "Chup kar!" Mohit giggled and Sagar said to a confused Sneha smilingly, "Kuch nahi beta, bas aise hi! Chalo andar chalte hain." Sneha excitedly nodded as she was going to meet her mom again. All three headed to the classroom.


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Mohit came in the classroom and saw Vidya sitting and waiting for him. Seeing her absolutely fit and fine made his heart filled with joy, but controlling his feelings, he tried to make his smile formal. "Hi! I'm Mohit Malik!", he went up to Vidya and extended his hands. "Vidya!", Vidya smilingly replied and they shook hands. Just when they sat, Sagar and Sneha entered. Seeing them, Vidya was dumbfounded. "Yeh dono?", she asked, shocked. Mohit turned back and smiled. "Oh yeh dono mere saath aaye hain! Yeh hain mera assistant," Mohit introduced Sagar to Vidya. "Oh sasriyakal ji!", Sagar greeted and Vidya just pressed her palms together in annoyance. "Aur yeh uski beti hain, Sneha!", Mohit introduced Sneha. "Hi!", Sneha cutely said and waved her palm. Vidya smiled sweetly at her. Her eyes again fell on Sagar, knowingly or unknowingly, she didn't know, probably she didn't understand! Their eyes met leading it to an eye-lock. But the eye-lock was something exceptional because opposite feelings were depicting from their way of staring at each other. Sagar was gazing at Vidya with a beautiful smile, while Vidya glared him and thought him stupid as she knew that outside, he pushed her on purpose.


"Ahem ahem!", Mohit coughed to bring them back to the reality. Sneha giggled and with this, Mohit giggled too. Sagar grinned hugely, while Vidya got embarrassed. Smirking, Sagar walked in, holding Sneha's hands and they sat beside Mohit.


"So Ms. Vidya! Yeh raha aap ka form. U need to fill this up now!", Mohit said and handed Vidya a form. Vidya took it and glancing at it once, she requested, "Please give me 5 minutes!" "Sure!", Mohit replied and nodded.


Sneha tapped on Sagar's arm. "Papa!", she whispered in the most adorable manner. Sagar lowered his eyes, looking at Sneha and asked in a low tone, "Bolo beta!" Sneha jumped in her dad's lap and whispered in his ears, very slowly so that Vidya didn't hear, "Mummy bohot acchi hain," she said making Sagar smile. He kissed Sneha's cheek and cupped her face. "Kyuki woh apki mummy hain," he replied and Sneha blushed. It was a cute blush! "Aww!", Sagar exclaimed seeing Sneha's cuteness and they hugged. After they broke their hug, Sneha innocently asked her dad, "Pata, bahar playground hain, main khelne jayu?" Sagar smilingly nodded and said, "Haan beta, jao!" Sneha excitedly ran out of the room and Sagar's gaze landed back to where it belonged - Vidya!


There he got to see the most beautiful sight. Strains of Vidya's hairs fell on her face because of the breeze. She looked breath-taking, Sagar thought and sighed. He wanted to tuck those strains of hairs behind her ears and peck her earlobe but he couldn't do so! Making a sad puppy face, he just kept on gazing and admiring her!


"Done!", Vidya's voice, which was nothing less than music for Sagar, echoed in the room and Sagar was back in his senses. Mohit took the paper from Vidya and read it carefully. "Aap ne aap ka surname nahi diya..aisa kyun?", he asked curiously. Vidya's face turned serious and with this, there spread a seriousness in the whole room. 


"Woh.. actually.. 7 saal pehele india mein mera accident hua tha jis mein I lost my memory," Vidya hesitantly informed. "Toh phir aap ko aapka first name kaise pata?" Sagar asked in a way as if he wanted to know everything, which he didn't know till now. "Mere purse mein  meri ek jali hui photo thi jiske peeche Vidya likha hua tha, so with that, I guessed that my name is Vidya," she said and frowned.


To make the mood better, Sagar said joyfully, "O ji koi baat nahi ji, Vidya name bhi bohot changa hain, kyun Mohit praji?" "Haan ji bilkul!", Mohit supported Sagar and all three smiled at each other. "Waise Vidya ji, aap apna surname Singh rakh sakti hain, bohot suit karega aap ke naam ke saath," Sagar said to Vidya intently looking in her eyes and Vidya got lost in those pair of blue eyes. Those were saying a lot to her, a lot of happiness, pain and something more, something she was unable to understand, she felt! They shared an eye-lock again but this time, it was deep and intent. Mohit teasingly smiled looking at Sagar and Vidya. "Do I know u?", Vidya suddenly spoke up. Mohit and Sagar got nervous.


"O ji nahin ji! Aap toh Canada mein raheti ho aur hum toh bhai naye naye hain yaha!", Sagar said in a punjabi tone. "Vidya, tu kuch jyada hi soch rahi hain," Vidya murmured to herself in her breath.


"Anyways, lets start the lesson now!", Mohit said in glee. Vidya got excited like a kid and seeing her, Sagar contently smiled. Mohit and Vidya went busy in teaching and learning the music lessons. But Sagar was in a different world. The voices in the room were hardly reaching his eardrums. He could not take off his eyes from HIS Vidya!


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2 hours had passed. The music class was over. Mohit and Sneha bid farewell to Vidya and Vidya did the same, smilingly. Sagar came up to her and said with an ocean-sized smile, "Good bye ji!" "Bye!", Vidya said with a slight smile. Surprisingly she wasn't feeling angry on him. Why? Perhaps because he changed the topic when the question about her past was arised, to lighten her mood. These thoughts roamed in her mind and shaking her head, she sat inside her car and went to her home. Mohit, Sagar and Sneha were on their way to their home.


***


Vidya threw herself on the bed and closed her eyes. Some of her past moments flashed in her mind. She squeezed her eyes and held the bed-sheet in her fist.

"Vidya Singh! Kitna amazing sound karta hain, haina Sagar?"

These words echoed in her mind. She opened her eyes in jerk and thought confusedly, "Yeh humesha mujhe apni awaz hi kyun sunaai deta hain! Aur kuch yaad kyun nahin aata. Uff!" She frustrated and the next moment, she realized something and said to herself, "Yeh Sagar kaun hain? Shayad isse mere past ke saath koi relation hain. I gotta find out.", saying that, she made a firm look.


Precap:

Flashback moments - Sagar taking care of Vidya! Embarrassed


Hey friends...i hope u all liked the episode...well,in the present,an important story is going on...so the flashbacks might not be shown in every episode...sorry for tht...n bhumi,sorry yaar...unable to write any bhoomika scenes...i wish if i cud but i need to go with the flow of the story naa..but yep..bhoomika scenes r in the next episode for sure...waiting for comments...Tongue



Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 16 August 2011 at 11:11pm

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
I think this was your shortest update Tongue
I can picture your face like Shocked seeing how fast i replied this time hehe

Hehe awww it would be soo cute to see him smiling when alone!! Big smile Just like Sharad makes us smile when we're alone and look into his eyes Blushing

The part where Sneha said Mummy achi hai was adorable and the way Sagar responded by saying "Kyunki woh Sneha ki mummy hai" made me go awww!

Hehe apna surname singh rakh lo that was funny!

Wow it's great that she's remembering even though it's only voices!!

Koi nahii I don't mind that there are no Bhoomika scenes cause it would be weird to randomly have it in the story!

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Bhumi, i typed whole afternoon and had planned in mind for a long update but this idotic laptop! it always happens with me ki suddenly the laptop turns off! Angry Iss liye phirse type kia toh itna hi type kar payi! i was tired! Sleepy

Haha yeah u r right! i'm still in shock! LOL

So true about when we stare in Sharad's eyes alone! I agree totally! Day Dreaming Blushing

Yeap! Sagar-Sneha convo is always adorable! Embarrassed

Yeah, the surname part was funny but Sagar did it intentionally! Tongue

Yeap, just the voices! It's going step by step, and with this, there will be more cute SV scenes! Wink

Thank you for understanding and also for commenting fast and in detail! Love ya! Hug
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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged

Nice part

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Awesome update ...cont soon ...n thnx for the PM

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged

omg, that update is so cute. Sneha is just beyond adorable. and yay, Vidya is slowly remembering everything. i wanna see more SV scenes <3

~Radika

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