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wonderful update.luvd it.

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''Gunjan...'' Nupur spoke. ''Kya?'' Gunjan asked laying down on her bed, watching a movie. ''I'm bored! I came to your house, and your watching a movie.'' Nupur groaned. ''To? Come watch with me.'' Gunjan patted the seat next to her.''But...that movie is...really...bad.'' Nupur blurted out while Gunjan glared at her.''What?'' ''Gunjan, I'm sorry but i really hate the movie, i mean the book was much better, and the actors we're terrible!'' Nupur explained.''Nupur, tum aur tumhari books.'' Gunjan sighed. ''Fine. I'm out of here.'' Nupur replied irritated and walked out of her room and house before she could say something or come after her. Gunjan simply sighed and texted Nupur:
Sorry, come back! We'll do something else! Pakka promise!
Nupur smiled and replied back:
Sorry Gunjaan, aaj nahi, i was only meant to be at your house for an hour, now i need to go somewhere! See you tomorrow! Love you x
Gunjan smiled and replied:
Fine, but you better come tomorrow.
Nupur smiled and replied back one last time:
Pakka promise.
She finally got on the bus and made her way to the orphanage. She had been coming here every sunday since she was in year 7, which means she was around 12 years old. She loved working with children, she loved to see that beautiful smile on each of their face, it reminded her of herself when she was young. She never told anyone here she would go and if anyone asked, she'd make up a lie. She was the type of girl that if she did something for anyone she'd prefer them to not know, even if they hate her..

She finally arrived at the Orphanage and walked in to be greeted by a swarm of chidlren,''Di, aap aa gayi!'' A small girl screamed in happiness which was clearly evident on her face. Nupur leaned down and kissed her cheek,''Ha aap ki Di aagayi aur hum aab bohot masti karegi. Chal let's go to the playground.'' All the children screamed in happiness and started running towards the playground while all the workers and councilors smiled at her and greeted her. ''Nupur, aaj ek naya larka yaha kaam kara hai.'' A old lady in her mid 50's spoke.''Thanks for letting me know aunty-ji.'' Nupur replied as she hugged her walked towards the playground. She found herself playing games with the children, smiling and laughing like she was a child herself.

''Aunty-ji, thank you for this job, it really means alot to me.'' Mayank said as he hugged the lady. ''Koi baat nahi beta, jaao bacho playground par hai.'' She smiled watching Mayank nod and walk away. Mayank made his way to the playground, and found himself smiling to the sight infront of him.''She also works here, i didn't know.'' He whispered to himself. He started loosing himself in her childlike expressions and innocence. Nupur suddenly was alarmed bysomeone watching her. She stopped and turned around to see Mayank staring at her. She smiled and made her away towards him.''So Sharma, couldn't get enough of me in school, you've started to stalk me'' She teased. Mayank smiled,''No Bhushan, I work here from today.'' He smirked and made his way towards the children leaving her shocked. ''Idiot.'' She mumbled. ''Mein mazak kaar rahi ti aur yeah bohot smart samajta hai apni aapko.'' She muttered underneath her breath. ''Smart samajta ho nahi, ho mein.'' He smirked making her more irritated. ''Shut up.'' She snapped at him and walked towards the other side, to play with the children. ''By the way Nupur when you smile, you look very cute.'' He whispered in her ear walking away. Nupur smiled as he walked up to him and whispered,''But you look even more cute when you have your childlike expressions on.'' She replied running away playing with the children. He smiled,''Gosh she's amazing.''

Mayank and Nupur spent they whole day playing with children and whispering to eachother. They enjoyed the time together. Mayank felt himself getting more closer and attached to Nupur, whereas Nupur had no idea about these new feeling she was feeling for Mayank. It was the first time she felt them, but one part of her new about these feelings but the other part of her, wanted to ignore them...

Next day...

''Jo naam dil pe ho lika, iqraar use se hota hai..'' Nupur hummed to herself smiling. Gunjan smiled seeing Nupur like this and walked up behind her,''Kasi kaho yeh mein o yaara pyaar kaise hota hai.'' Gunjan hummed with her. Nupur was startled by Gunjan's voice and turned around. ''Gunjan! You scared me.'' Nupur sighed. ''To Nupur, iqraar kisi se hota hai? Kisi?'' Gunjan replied ignoring her comment. ''Kya bakwaas kar rahi ho. Mein to bas ghana gaa rahi ti.'' She replied walking out of her house. ''Mayank se.'' Gunjan replied shocking Nupur. ''Kya? Iqraar? Hell no!'' Nupur replied. ''Okay, maybe not love but you do LIKE Mayank MORE than a friend.'' Gunjan emphasized the word 'more'. ''Shut up, what rubbish are you speaking?'' Nupur asked her. ''Nupur baas karo. If you like someone then nothing is wrong with that!'' Gunjan sighed irritated. ''I don't like anyone, and if i do, then i can realize my feelings. I don't need anyone to tell me that.'' Nupur snapped. ''Nupur aapna natunki kisi aur ko dekho, mujhe nahi, samji?'' Gunjan snapped back. Nupur however was hurt by her comment, she didn't like Mayank more than a friend, she knew it but why is Gunjan forcing her to say something which is false? Nupur walked away leaving Gunjan shocked by her behaviour. ''Nupur ne wapas kuch nahi kaha?'' Gunjan asked herself suprised and worried. ''Nupur, wait up!'' Nupur stopped and turned around. ''Sorry for snapping at you Gunjan, but try understand that i really do not like Mayank more than a friend.'' Nupur replied and turned to walk away again...

''Nupur Bhushan.'' Mrs Sharma spoke. ''To Mayank use pyaar karta hai, aur is liye mujhe itna kuch sunaya. Milna to parega is larki se.'' Mrs Sharma spoke to herself determined to meet her.

Adhiraj spoke,''I'm sorry Suhaani. I've hurt you and everyone. I didn't know what got in to me but i do want to tell you that i used you and i'm very sorry. I don't like or love you more than a friend. Forgive me if possible.'' He felt guilty for everything he had done. Suhaani burst into tears crying uncontrolably. ''Adhiraj i-i h-hate y-you.'' Suhaani spoke between her sobs. Adhiraj felt helpless seeing her in that state but decided it was best to walk away...

''Tum theek ho?'' Samrat asked Gunjan who looked lost. ''Ha, i'm just worried about Nupur.'' Gunjan replied not looking at Samrat. Samrat didn't know why, but he just hugged her. He felt like this was the way to comfort her. He felt a different feeling why hugging her.

''Nupur, i-i like you.'' Mayank spoke to himself looking in the mirror in the men's bathroom. ''Nahi inta nervous? She'll think i am mad.'' He spoke to himself again, and kept practicing his lines.

Here Mayank was practising his lines, there Nupur was thinking about her feelings. She hadd realized she didn't like Mayank more than a friend. Mayank beleived that he liked her and she liked him. When he confesses, what will happen? Will their journey continue or end? Find out soon!

Please COMMENT!! :D




Edited by -shan- - 27 June 2011 at 12:36pm

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Hey Shanita
Congrats dear,,,,
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Thank u so much for writing a Mayur ff for usHugHug
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Part 1
Wow Awesome start dear
loved Nupur and Gunjan a lot...
loved their convo-Gunjan a chatterbox and nups is very shy but confident...

hmm then mayank and samrat- i loved both of them

mayank is lazy but top student of d school...

he and sam were late on assembly
But why did he hate Mrs. Shilpa sharma
Isnt she his mom-??? aur  i think may be Shilpa sharma is mayanks step mom- hmmm i m getting confused...
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Part 2
hahahahaha i loved ur title Mr. flirty and Miss. Sadu--- r a ye tou uulta hogaya..LOLWink
we used to consider mayu as sadu and nupur as nautankiLOLLOLLOL

wah wah- Mr. mayank was mesmerized by Nups beauty --- he was starred at her and nups caught him and getting annoyed...LOL...hehehehehe loved the convo b/w Sayank. they were discussing abt nups- whether she is new student or not...LOL

hmmm sam dont like adi - even i dont like him...he was trying to get close with nups- it was not good. but thanx GOD-- mayank stopped him...

so nups didnt like mayu- she thought mayank is a flirty guy with lots oattitude. and she shared it with gunjan... Nupur was hurt by gunjans words but she forgave her and mayyak observed the whole thing and found that Nups is a nice girl...

wah very good part
weldone dear...
loved it


Edited by -Faria- - 22 May 2011 at 5:06pm
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Part 3


wow so finally mayur become frnds...
r a whats this - nups was starring at shirtless Maynk... haye...LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

ye Nupur ko kya hogaya- is she alright????LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

Awww mayur scene at busket ball court  was too good- wow mayank hugged nupur and she was blushing...Embarrassed ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Embarrassed ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.... it was very cute shaan ... loved it loads..

hmm maynk dropped nupur at home...

hey i feel bad for nups- she felt that her parents dont love her... she felt she was sidelined like an object.Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

and on do ther side mayank was fedup with his parents fight...Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

so both of them r unhappy with their family...Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.




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Part 4

oh ho- Mayank was distubed and thats why he shouted on Nupur. Nupur got hurt by his sudden outburst... but ehen he relized that what he did with nupur  , he felt guilty and wanted to apologize to nupur. Oh GOS Nupur is such a sweet heart... instead of being angry she was sweetly talking with mayank... By GOD- loved nupur so much...

heheehehe suhani asked nupur who is d handsome ,hot hunk of this school and what is this???? maaynks image came on nupu's mind-- LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.
adhiraj- yuck - i hate this guy..Angry ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.
acha hua - mayank gave a tight punch to adi...

loved my mayur convo again - mayank shared his sorrow with nupu- thats very good
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so cute...loved it shaan
very nice update


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Part 5


this is d best , best and best part of this FF

loved it zillion...

so mayur r falling for each other...Embarrassed ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.
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part 6

so finally mayank confessed that he loves nupur oops sorry like nupur...LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.


part 7

wow mayur work on d same orphanage
they have  spent  beautiful time with with the children
they enjoyed lot by playing  with d kids..
what nups dont like mayk more than a frnd?????Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

ye kya hai?????Cry ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Cry ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.
i thought she also love mayank...anyway lets c waht iswaiting for us in ur next update
plz do cont. it


and add me to ur pm list
Bye sear
take care

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