Very nice story, its really interesting...and all the relationships in the sotry are very sweet from Gunjan-Nupur friendship to Maynk-Nupur nok-jhok... everything was very sweet... You write very welll... And the story so far seems awesome, add me to your pmlist... 😊
-Laiba
Samrat paced up and down the room at his aunt's wedding worrying about Mayank's sudden confession,'' Mayank what was the need for this sudden confession, why couldn't you wait?'' Samrat said to himself. He knew it was only a confession but he also knew something was definitely wrong ' when he has spoken to Gunjan earlier this week, he sensed some secret- ''Bhai..'' A young girl in her teenage years called out. ''Naina, tum jao mein abhi arahi ho.'' He told his sister who nodded and walked away. He quickly walked outside and tried to call Mayank. ''Come on! Pick up the phone dude!'' Samrat said to himself. Mayank looked at the phone as he sat on his bed. He couldn't face Samrat and he didn't feel like talking to anyone. ''Shall i pick up?'' Mayank wondered. Samrat was his friend; he couldn't just ignore everyone because of her. Finally fighting his thoughts - he decided to pick up,''Hello Samrat how's the wedding?'' He tried to act normal. ''You're not fooling me.'' Samrat snapped. Mayank as wasn't surprised Samrat realized ' they had been friends for years, 'Uhh...Sam, dude I'm not in the mood right now, how about we talk tomorrow?'' He asked politely feeling the pain of rejection coming back to him all over again. ''Okay, take care and don't worry.'' Samrat replied putting down the phone. I hope he's okay, Samrat wondered.
''KYA?'' Gunjan asked Nupur over the phone completely shocked. ''I know, i didn't think he liked me in that sense. I mean i don't and...and...'' Nupur replied drifting off not knowing what to say ' she herself was completely confused. She was hurt by Mayank's behaviour and indifference but she didn't know what to do. ''Nupur, I can't believe you! Why are you lying?'' Gunjan asked angrily. ''Bas karo Gunjan, tum bhi? I don't like him! Sachi!'' Nupur replied shocked by Gunjan's behaviour ' first Mayank, now Gunjan?. ''Arghhh Nupur how do i explain this to you? I really can't make you understand, I'm sorry but you will have to figure this one out by yourself.'' Gunjan replied shutting the phone on Nupur ' this time, she wasn't helping Nupur ' Nupur needed time, to figure out that this isn't silly, it's real ' Mayank's real, and his feelings are real. Nupur stared at the phone in disbelief. ''What the hell?!'' Nupur shouted at the phone in anger. What was wrong with Gunjan?
''Di, maa aur papa aapko bhola rahe hai...'' Pooja told Nupur. Nupur nodded and walked downstairs. ''Ji, papa, mama aapne bholaya?'' Nupur asked trying to act normal. ''Ha Nupur, actually there is some bad news.'' Her dad replied. ''Wo actually your dad's job got transferred, so me, your dad and your brother and sister are moving there. You can stay here to continue your studies.'' Her mum spoke. Nupur finally felt much better, not that she didn't love her family, she loved them more than anyone but she always wanted to have a little freedom which she never received. So she decided to act as if she was upset,''Oh okay...'' She replied feeling a little better by the news.
''KARAN!'' Nupur screamed pushing her little brother
Karan out of the way. ''It's my turn to watch TV.'' Nupur added continuing to
push her little brother, Karan away. ''NO! It's my turn.'' The bickering was interuppted by Nupur's phone. Nupur glared at Karan who was grinning, picked up the phone and walked away. ''Hello?'' She spoke without checking the caller ID. ''Hi...'' The familiar voice spoke. ''Gunjan..'' Nupur spoke softly. ''Nupur...'' Gunjan spoke guilty. She felt bad for snapping at Nupur earlier. Nupur remembering todays' earlier conversation she hung up the phone.
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