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Posted: 30 October 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepi20

Awesome update! Nirbhay has the attitude and arrogance like his dad! LOL And Piya still likes to suspect on Abhay, you would think after 7 years she would calm down a bit! LOL Looking forward to the next update! Precap sounds really exciting! Continue soon Smile


Thnx dear. Ya, nirbhay is carbon copy of abhay but he has more arrogance than abhay. LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.n A wife's doubt knows no end.Wink ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.i'll continue soon.

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gr8 update. thanks for pm

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged

                                                                    PART-25


~In the Raichand Mansion~

Abhay is shouting on Nirbhay n Nirbhay is listening quietly-

A: How dare u Nirbhay? Tumhara himmat kaise hua itna ganda harqat karne ka? Kya hum tumhe yeh sab sikhate hain? Tumhe sharam nahi aaya ladki ki kapda phadte hue?

Now Nirbhay answers-

 

N: Mujhe sharam kyun ayega? kapda toh ladki ki phadi hai na..toh sharam bhi toh usse hi aani chahiye.

 

Abhay then starts slapping Nirbhay. But Pia stops him.

 

P: Kya kar rahe ho? Bacche ko aise maarte hai?

A: Aise nahi toh kaise maarte hai?

P: Dekho aise...

then pia brings a scale n tells nirbhay 2 keep his hands straight. Nirbhay does n pia starts beating him with scale in his hands. n soon Nirbhay's white hands starts turning red . Abhay notices it n says pia-

 

A: Aab bas bhi karo pia. Aur mat maaro isse. Aisi hi mera haton ka thappad khake iska gaal laal ho gaya aur aab tumhari maar khake iska haat laal ho raha hai. Aisa hi chalta raha toh thodi der mein yeh nirbhay raichand se laal raichand ban jayega.

 

Hearing this pia stops but she looks that nirbhay is smiling. Watching this pia tells-

 

P: Dekho abhay, tum iska kuch karo. Ek dum besharam hai , tumhare tarah. Itna maar khaya phir bhi haas raha hai.

 

Abhay didn't notice that pia has taunted him , so he says-

 

A: Ok. Nirbhay . Tumhe maarne se kuch nahi hoga. Tumhe bahut bada punishment milega. Aaj se 2 din tak tum , tumhara room mein bandh rahoge, bahar jaana ekdum bandh, aaj ki party mein bhi tum nahi aa sakte, aur tumhara room se computer,tv, playstation etc. sab kuch bahar nikal dia jayega.Tumhe sirf tumhara text books ke saath choda jayega.Aur har afternoon tumhe ria ki saath khel na padega.

 

Nirbhay can tolerate everything but text books n playing with Ria...

 

N: Nahi... dad please. Text books toh main phir bhi pad lunga lekin Ria...no dad plz. Ria nahi.

 

A: Kyun ? Aab aaya line pe. Aab toh tumhe har roz subha se sham tak Ria ke saath khelna padega.

N: Nahi...Isse better hai , aap mujhe maar daliye. Lekin Ria ke saath khelne mat boliye.

Pia(feels sad): Chi nirbhay. Ria tumhara behen hai , aur tum usse itna hate karte ho?

N: No, mom. Main usse hate nahi karta. Bas jhel nahi sakta.

A: Nirbhay, Aab tumhe samajh mein aaya ke mujhe tumahra mom ko jhelte hue kaisa lagta hai? Phir bhi toh Ria tumhara behen hai, kamse kam tumhara piche nahi padi rahegi.

 

Pia wasn't listening abhay n nirbhay's convo carefully coz she was busy in thinking in her mind that what shud she wear in 2day's party. so, she missed abhay's dialog n says-

 

P: Nirbhay , tumhara dad bilkul sahi keh rahe hai. Ek dum 100% correct.

 

Abhay is so surprised 2 hear that pia is agreed with him , n she isn't quarrelling with him after hearing his line. Abhay feels that tear is coming from his eyes in happiness.

 

Abhay controls himself n says 2 nirbhay-

 

A: Nirbhay , it is enough . It is not a discussion , it is my order. U've 2 do this.

N: Dad, aap daddu ka dialog kyun chura rahe hai? Khud ka koi dialog ho toh boliye.

 

Hearing this abhay holds nirbhay's hands n takes him in his room n locks nirbhay.

Then abhay goes from there.

 

Nirbhay is boiling in anger. How much he requested his dad that he doesn't want 2 play with ria but his dad din't listen 2 him.

 

N: Dad, aapne yeh aaccha nahi kia. Now u've 2 pay 4 this.

 

~In the evening~

 

The arrangement of party has been done very beautifully by mallika. Every1 is busy in praising her efforts. But in her mind mallika is waiting 2 hear her praise from abhay. But abhay isn't there.

 

After sometimes guests start coming. Sid n panchi come in the party with their daughter pammi. Arnav, madhu n misha cudn't come 2 the party as they r not in the town. panchi n sid r going 2 enter inside the raichand mansion.

 

Sid is carrying his daughter in his arms , but suddenly he loose his arms n pammi falls down.

 

Panchi: Yeh kya? Tumne pammi ko kyun gidaya?

Sid(makes a face): Kya karta? agar main pammi ko nahi gidata , toh main khud gid jata. Baap re, yeh  6 saal ki baby hai ya phir baby elephant hai?

 

Panchi: How dare u? Tum aapna hi beti ko elephant bol rahi ho?

 

S: Isse elephant nahi bulao toh aur kya bulao? har waqt iski muh chalta rehta hai khane ke liye. Dekho dekho, aabhi bhi kha rahi hai. Humare ghar se yahan tak aane mein time kitna lagta hai, only 10 min. lekin yeh 10 min. mein hi pammi ne 10 packet potato chips kha daala !!! that means in 1 min. 1 packet chips!!!

 

Panchi: Tum aisa kyun behave kar rahe ho? Meri pammi baby ko bhuk lagti hai, issi liye khaati hai.

S: Haan, tum toh bologe hi naa, akhir yeh tum par hi gayi hai. Tum dono ka bas chale toh tum dono milke mujhe hi kha jao.

 

Panchi was going 2 give him a reply but pammi tells-

 

Pammi: Mummy... mera chips khatam ho gaya. kuch khane ko do naa...

Panchi: haan beta, andar chalo. Tumhe kuch khane ko deti hun.

Sid gives them a angry look n says-

 

S: Yaad rakhna, mera bhai ko bhikhari mat bana dena. warna poora zindagi bhar aaj ka party dene pe afsos karta rahega. Aab  andar chalo.

 

 

~Abhiya's room~

 

Pia is infront of her dressing table n doing her make-up. Abhay is standing behind her n waiting that when will pia finish n they will go down.

 

After a long time, pia finishes n says-

 

P: Main kaisi laag rahi hun?

 

abhay looks that pia is really looking beautiful in her red n black saari . He replies-

 

A: Tumhari itni mehnat rang laaya. U r looking beautiful.

P: Lekin, main tumse naaraz hun. Tumne toh mujhe koi gift dia hi nahi.

A: Wait baby. U'll get it 2day night.

P: really?

A: Yes. Lekin aabhi  tumhari liye ek aur surprise hai. Thodi hi der mein tumhe mil jayega.

 

P: Oh God!! i can't wait more. jaldi niche chalo.

 

Abhiya comes in the party n every1 is very happy 2 see them 2gether. So, all starts congratulating them 4 their anniversary n also praising them 4 the nice arrangement.

 

suddenly , mallika comes there n asks abhay-

 

Mallika: Sir, aapko party ka arrangement kaisa laga?

Pia in her mind : Bahut hi ghatya laga.

Abhay: Oh just wonderful!! I knew it, tum itna aachi arrangement kar paogi. afterall u r really brilliant in ur job.

Pia in her mind: e hi hi. Batein toh aise kar raha hai jaise muh se honey na naali gid raha hai.

Mallika(blushes): Thank u so much sir.

Abhay: Now plz xcuse us.

Mallika: Oh sure.

 

Abhay goes n hugs sid. Then both the brothers starts chatting while pia is busy in chatting with panchi. n pammi goes 2 ria's room 2 meet her.

 

Nirbhay was looking all these things from his rooms window. He decides that he has 2 go into the party but in such way that no1 can see him. n he has 2 do something fast 2 spoil the party. Nirbhay comes out by the window fast n hides himself behind a pillar.

 

Suddenly abhay comes near 2 pia n says –

A: look pia, who have come .

Pia is surprised 2 see that jeh n metz have come . But she is moe surprised 2 see them  with nirali n josh!!!

 

PRECAP: Nirbhay plans 2 ruin the party by creating misunderstanding between abhiya n he succeeds. but som1 is stalking nirbhay n making video of his every movement.

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
awesome update aditi.Hug.Hug...i luvd it 2 d coreStar...see i guessed correct abt nirali n joshEmbarrassed
i was laughing like madROFLROFL...omg!!omg!!..baby elephantROFL...mera bechara sidCry.LOLLOL...
i luvd his dialoguesLOL.LOL...pammi apnie mummy ki thara haiROFL.ROFL...can't u make a siddy boy...instead of small birdieAngry...how can they beat my nirabhay.Angry..i can forgive them 4 this but making that poor soul with riaDead...poor nirabhay.Cry...hayee.!!.some one is stalking nirabay n talking video...woh T ki beti tho nehi na!!!continue soon m waiting eagerly n thnx 4 d pmSmile


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haha I was right nirali & josh r metz & jeh's baby.And the prsn who is stalking nirbhay will b none other thn nirali.Pammi Panchi ki baby.Sahi hai baby elephant hi hogiLOLLOL.Nirbhay Abhiya mai misunderstanding khadi karega.I m so excited 2 read another partEmbarrassed

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
awesomeLOLi guess nirali will help abhiyaLOL

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhuri16

awesome update aditi.Hug.Hug...i luvd it 2 d coreStar...see i guessed correct abt nirali n joshEmbarrassed
i was laughing like madROFLROFL...omg!!omg!!..baby elephantROFL...mera bechara sidCry.LOLLOL...
i luvd his dialoguesLOL.LOL...pammi apnie mummy ki thara haiROFL.ROFL...can't u make a siddy boy...instead of small birdieAngry...how can they beat my nirabhay.Angry..i can forgive them 4 this but making that poor soul with riaDead...poor nirabhay.Cry...hayee.!!.some one is stalking nirabay n talking video...woh T ki beti tho nehi na!!!continue soon m waiting eagerly n thnx 4 d pmSmile


Thnx a lot dear. Thnx 4 loving it. Ya, every1 was correct abt nirali n josh.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page. n i have made a small birdie coz she is gonna b the ultimate fun element LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.n what can b the greater punishment 4 nirbhay than keeping him with ria. now he has 2 tolerate her. really bechara.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page. 

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteshrishti

haha I was right nirali & josh r metz & jeh's baby.And the prsn who is stalking nirbhay will b none other thn nirali.Pammi Panchi ki baby.Sahi hai baby elephant hi hogiLOLLOL.Nirbhay Abhiya mai misunderstanding khadi karega.I m so excited 2 read another partEmbarrassed


Yes dear, u were r8. Wink ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.n ya, it's nirali coz afterall usse nirbhay ka watt jo lagana hai. LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.n nirbhay... , aisa baccha hai jo aapna mom-dad tak ko nahi chodta.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

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