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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged

                                                                   PART-16


Metz n jay's convo is going on-

Metz : Kyun ? Yeh gandi baat kyun hogi? Yeh to sach hain. kya tum pia se pyaar nahi karte aur abhay ki saath pia ko dekh ke tumhe taklif nahi hota? mujhe to itna taklif ho rahi hain ke aisa lag raha hain ke meri red lipstick  mujhse chin li gayi...

Then metz starts again crying . Suddenly jay starts feeling sorry 4 metz. he is feeling something strange. afterall metz is pia 's look-alike. He starts consoling her. Then he hugs metz n tells –

jay: Aww, metz, rona bandh karo, dekho niche pani jam gaya hain aur mera kimti joote kharab ho rahe hain.Yeh joote original leather ka hain.  Aur to aur tumhari make-up to pura kharab ho gaya hain...


Hearing about make-up metz stops crying immediately. But she was feeling so comfortable in jay's arm. thinking this metz starts blushing. Jay is confused. He asks –

J: What happened? Tum laal kyun ho rahi ho? Tumhari paas kya jadoo ki blush on hain?

M: Nahin to...

But he also understands the reason soon. Then they both starts blushing...

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Abhay is very happy. He is watching tv with a lots of happiness. Nobody is here 2 stop him. He is watching a film but suddenly there is a news break. Abhay becomes angry. He tells in mind " Kabhi to kuch chain se dekhne do. Nahin... kabhi pia aa jati hain, kabhi news break aa jata hain. Abhi to film ka climax shuru hua tha."

He starts watching news with anger n he is drinking rooh-afza. Suddenly he sees a breaking news that-

"Our town's very well-known businessman Mr. Arnav Dobriyal's son-in-law Mr. Siddharth Raichand is missing. He is missing from 2day's morning. His wife Panchi is very worried about him. So, if any1 can give any news of him , the person will b rewarded.".

 

Hearing this Rooh-afza stucks into abhay's throat n he starts hichki...Then after controlling himself , abhay starts shouting...

 

A: Mummy... mummy... Jaldi aao.

Haseena comes running with an irritated face n tells-

 

H: Phir se kya ho gaya? Kabhi to mujhe chain se aapne papa ke pas baithne do. Jab dekho tab mummy mummy karte rahte ho. Tum mummy mummy na karo issi liye tumhara shaadi pia se karwaithi. Lekin tumne usse bhi  jhagda karke bhaga dia aur phir se mummy shuru.

A: Arre , mummy .. Kabhi to mere batein pura suna kia karo. Bhaiya gayab ho gaya hai.

H: What? What? What? (She moves her neck 3 times like serials).

then haseena  starts shouting at abhay-

 

H: Tumhara  bhai gayab go gaya aur tum baith ke ruh-afza pee rahe ho? Tumhe koi akkal naam ki cheez hain bhi ya nahi? tum din par din alsi hote ja rahe ho. Aur ye tv ko to main- Then haseena breaks the tv.

 

A: nahin... Main kaha pee raha tha. Yeh to mera gale mein aatak gaya tha. Main alsi nahi hoon. Main bhai ko dhund ke wapas leke aaonga.

 

H: Tumhara bahut meherbani hoga.Akhir tum ghar se bahar to nikloge. naalayak kahi ka.Ghar mein baithke baap ke roti tod ne alawa tumhe aata kya hain?  Now go...

 

A: Chikhti kyun ho? Ja raha hun.

 

Then abhay goes out from home with the thinking in mind" Mom n dad ko to old home mein rakhna chahiye. Jab dekho tab chikh ta rehte hain mere upar. Aur specially mom ko old home bhejna chahiye. jake uss jagah ke buddhon ko charm kar ti. then dad mom se naraz hoke unhe divorce de deta aur mujhe bhi mom se chutkara milta".

 

actually abhay doesn't thinking these lines from his heart. He is thinking this in anger coz he wasn't able 2 watch the film n moreover haseena broke the tv...

 

abhay decides to call pia. But when pia receives the call abhay remembers that he fought with her but he really needs 2 talk with her about sid. So, he starts talking like this-

 

A: Hello. Can som1 tell me how my brother got missing?

 

pia understands that it is abhay. So, she also replies-

 

P: Ya, some1's brother got missing after doubting his wife. Sid saw panchi with neel n misunderstood them. That's why he left the home.

 

A: arrgghhh, kisika behen ka character bhi uski tarah dheela hain aur mujhe woh bolti hain ke mera character dheela hain? Woh panchi na eh sab karti aur na bhai missing hota aur na mom mera tv todti. Uski wajah se main pura film nahi dekh paya..

 

Hearing about tv pia can't control herself n shouts in the phone-

 

P: Phirse tv!! arre besharam tumhe sharam aata nahin? Itna kuch ho gaya lekin tumhe bas tv ka pada hain? Itna hi tv ka shaukh hain to ruh-afza ki jagah tv ko kha ja. Tujhe chain milega...

 

A: aab tum bhi chikh rahi ho? sab mujh pe chikh ta hain... Koi mujhse pyaar nahi karta.Aur mom to mujhe aaj kitne kuch khare khote sunayi ke main alsi, nalayak, aur ghar mein baith ke baap ka roti todta hoon.

 

Hearing this pia feels sad . She becomes softer. She tells-

P: awww, my honey bunch, sweetie pie, cuppycake, Don't b sad. Main hoon na tumse pyaar karne wali...

 

A: Sacchi???

P: Mucchi. Aur tum kya bol rahe the ke mom ne tumhe yeh sab batein bola? Ruko, aane do mujhe ghar, phir main tumhara mom ki khabar leti hoon. Meri winnie the pooh ko yeh sab bolti hain? Itni himmat?

 

A: Winnie the pooh? Yeh kaun hain?

P: Tumhe nahi pata? Yeh meri favorite cartoon show hain aur main pyaar se tumhe winnie the pooh naam dia hain.

 

Hearing this abhay thinks in mind that " I have 2 watch this cartoon n i've 2 know how it looks!!!  Kyunki pia ki koi bharosa nahin. Mujhe woh kuch bhi bana sakti hain!! Lekin tv...".

 

A: Toh ghar wapas kab aa rahi ho?

P: Pehle sid mil jaye. Phir main wapas aa jaoongi. aur aab phone rakho aur sid ko dhoondo.

A: Jata hoon, jata hoon.

 

Abhay searches everywhere but can't find sid. So, he comes 2 the jungle n starts searching from a corner.

 

After some times failure finally abhay finds sid. but abhay becomes shocked 2 see him...

 

PRECAP: Sid is doing something dangerous. abhay is trying 2 stop him but he isn't listening...

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
wow sdoll awesome update.Aww Pia call him winnie the pooh so cute.Hhaha haseena nai toh Abhay ki band baja diLOLLOL

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
roflROFL ROFL ROFL its so hiliourious old home aur haseena
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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
i really like this update.poor abhay everybody shouts at him.what sid is going to do.i am getting anxious.pleas update soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Lolzzz ...hilarious ROFL ROFL ROFL
I was imagining the scene where Abhay was calling haseena "mummy...mummy" like a kid and Haseena scolded him... n i burst into laughing... ROFL LOL
Piya n Abhay's sacchi-mucchi part n calling Winnie the Pooh was sooo cuteee... superb update dear...keep it up LOL LOL 
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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged
After many dayes i am able to read this and it's realy so funny. Thanks to pm. Jay methz convo love it. Poor Abhay ek movie bhi nahi dekh paya.

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Sry for the late reply
lovely update
thnx for the pm
Continue soon...
Winnie the pooh
Hahahahah
i have a very huge winnie the pooh doll
thanks
love u
renuka

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by renuka1997

Sry for the late reply
lovely update
thnx for the pm
Continue soon...
Winnie the pooh
Hahahahah
i have a very huge winnie the pooh doll
thanks
love u
renuka



Awww, a huge winne the pooh doll!!! Sooo cute.Tongue ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

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