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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai , main bhav nahi khati hun yaar, kyunki khane ke liye aur bhi bahut kuch hai.

I know i take a lot of time 2 update a part but i have justified reasons like i m an engineering student n i have 2 do loads of classes , so i become tired easily everyday. So, i have 2 update parts when i get a little bit free time.

After seeing ur liking 4 my FF, i m feeling obliged that u people like it so much. it'a a great feeling 4 me.


So, chill buddies , i m updating next part.
Read n enjoy.
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-18

 

Abhay comes with Sid in the outside of dobriyal house. Then abhay tells sid –

 

A: hey, just wait here n i m going inside of the home. Then i'll tell all that i've found u , then u come. It'll b a nice surprise 4 every1.

S: okkk.

 

Then abhay enters in the house, But after entering ,his eyes starts becoming like  marbles. Abhay sees that there is a huge crowd inside the home. Abhay becomes curious n comes near the crowd. Abhay hears  that some people r saying that " i will get the money". Abhay doesn't understand anything. When he sees that panchi is in the centre of the crowd , he goes near 2 her after a lots of efforts. Then abhay asks panchi that-

 

A: Panchi, what's going on here?

P: Arre, abhay . bahut badi problem ho gaya hai.

A: kaisa problem?

P: Actually, jab humne sid ki missing news tv pe diya tha , tab hum sid ka photo dena hi bhul gaye. Tumne to dekha hi hoga. Aur aab yeh sab log  kisi aur ko lake keh rahe hai ke yeh sid hain.

 

Abhay: What??????

 

Then abhay sees that some people r carrying a beard man n coming near to panchi.Then abhay asks-

 

A: arre, yeh dariwala aadmi kaun hai?

Peoples: aaplogon ka sid !!!!

A(Shouting): Kya? Sid ki dari kahan se aa gaya? Yeh humara sid nahi hai, infact ihan pe koi bhi sid nahi hai. Mujhe asli sid mil gaya hai.

Peoples : Jhoota kahi ka. Saara reward ka paisa khud khane ke liye humse jhoot bol rahe ho!!!! dhokhebaz aadmi.

 

Abhay is shocked. This was left 4 him 2 hear!!!!!

 

In the meantime , sid enters in the home n shouts-

S: Shoo, shoo, shoo away u junglee peoples. Kahan se yeh sab galat dariwala aadmi ko pakad ke laye ho. Akhir mera bhi to koi class hai na?

 

Panchi runs 2 sid n hugs him. All people understand that this is the real sid. So, they start leaving the house with sad face. The peoples who brought that dariwala admi r talking " pehle hi bola tha , sadak se iss pagal ko uthake lane ka kya zaroorat ? Iska chera hi ghatiya hain. yeh kaise sid dikhega?"

 

 

Panchi is holding sid tightly n sid seems like vomiting...Then abhay is going 2 shout at sid , but suddenly piya comes n kisses him with a lots of passion. Abhay is blushing. Pia tells 2 him –

P: my dear winnie the pooh, tumhara muh bandh hi acche lagte hai.

A: Lekin tum mujhe bolne kab deti ho?

P: shut up n lets go back home.

Abhay agrees. they take leave from sid n panchi

 

After reaching home , pia tells abhay that now ur mom is happy , so, lets go 4 a shopping . N this time i'll buy a new tv 4 u.

 

Abhay becomes astonished. He can't  believe his ears that what is he hearing!!! Pia wants 2 shop 4 him n  moreover a tv!!!!

 

Pia tells abhay that-

P: aise golgappa jaise akhein banake kya dekh rahe ho? Main samajh gayi...tum yehi soch rahe ho na ke main bina make-up ke bhi kitni pretty lagti hun?

 

hearing this abhay moves his eyes in pia's face n screams...

 

A: Jaldi se make-up lagalo, warna mujhe heart-attack ajayega.

P: Heart tumhara paas hoga tab na. Kalmuha kahi ka. Sirf ashubh batein bolta hain. Ab shopping chalo...

 

Abhay n pia r in the shopping mall. They r searching 4 a nice tv. Suddenly they come face 2 face with  jay n metz. Metz is wearing a beautiful princess gown. When jay sees that abhiya r here , he hides himself under metz gown. Metz didn't notice this.

 

Abhay : Metz!!!!

Metz: Ya...(hesitantly).

Pia: Tu ihan bhi humare piche piche aa gayi? Kya kar rahi hain tu ihan ?

Metz: Xcuse me!! Main tumhara piche nahi aayi. Main to ihan aapni mangetar ke saath aye hoon shaadi ki shopping ke liye.

 

Hearing this , from abhay's hand falls the remote of that tv which was abhiya checking. This remote goes under metz gown. Abhay bows down 2 take the remote.

 

PRECAP: Abhay finds jay under metz gown . So, what'll happen now?

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!!! y all r under metz gown...🤣...nice update... Edited by peehu24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaldi make-up lagao🤣warna heart attack ho jaye ga and golgappa eyes🤣
lolx...
nice update and thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya funny update hai... jaladi se make up lagaao varana heart attack aa jayega lol... jeh under Metz gown lol... Eagerly waiting for the next update... Please continue soon... thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya funny update hai... Abhiya's kiss was gr8... jaladi se make up lagaao varana heart attack aa jayega lol... jeh under Metz gown lol... Eagerly waiting for the next update... Please continue soon... thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab ye abhay aur jeh kya metz ke gown ke neeche hide n seek khelenge 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">ab ye abhay aur jeh kya metz ke gown ke neeche hide n seek khelenge🤣</font>


that would be really very funny
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: peehu24

omg!!! y all r under metz gown...🤣...nice update...



LOL😆 Agar metz ye 21st century mein aake bhi princess gown pehnegi to iska thoda fyda uthana to bantahe boss!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: black_scorpio

jaldi make-up lagao🤣warna heart attack ho jaye ga and golgappa eyes🤣

lolx...
nice update and thnx for pm



Thnx 😆dear. 😉