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OS: Happy Mother's Day (Page 5)

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
muah muah luv yuuu
jaz for such magnificent gift
thansk pm

Thank You Glittering Graphic

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
LOVELY OS Jaz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
at first when  read ur pM asking to read dis d last one.
I tot dis might b another crying session OS.
But once i read dis OS note... iwas super duper hapi!!!
To be truth i din really get d hospital part.
too much of hospital smell Wink But i know wat was goin on.
Loved the surprise for Geet's mother's day celebration.
U made me smile all d while reading it.
Loved her family n d way 'ey surprise her.
truly blessed. Loved it. Thx for d pM

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 1:04am | IP Logged
What a sweet story...I love husbands who are not ashamed for the world to see how much they love their partner 

Edited by -pixie- - 12 May 2011 at 1:06am

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
awesome OS...
i'm just too happy to read such happy OS frm u...
just loving it...
thank u so much...Hug

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
you know something jaz i'll get  my mom  to read this and comment 
she's right here by my side 

lekha

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
awww that was just OMG...really oved it

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
- Nursing...more medical...why am I not surprised...although I do like how you bring your personal experiences into your writing
- It's nice we got some background information about Geet's life before you actually introduced the rest of the family. I like Ketan and Nisha but Mahi was all I needed to hear to break into a smile. :D
- Ketan...being the boy...little MSK? I like that and that was a pretty hectic day she had for mother's day! Poor Princess :(
- Awww...Mahi is so adorable...I got so emotional at that part...
- The ring idea was just PERFECT. Just PERFECT Jaz!
- Haha and then Ketan turns to normal again.
- I just noticed now when Geet says duty calls that its Geet thats working and tense...and Maan is all relaxed and with the kids! HUH..isnt this interesting?
- Maan didnt even snap at Ketan...he just said thats no way to talk to your sister...some role reversal I see...
- I loved how you explained the children sleeping on the couch and then Geet's like my babies...how cute. Near the ending, honestly I saw a little bit of Jaz come out. Like you were the one saying all of it and not Geet, as if you were the character of Geet. It cant put it into words.
Anywho, it was a great OS to write for mother's day and of course Jaz HAS to have a little bit of tragedy in there somewhere :P LOVELY though. :D

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