MG OS - Unfinished Journey - Page 5

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

though the story is well written...just a teeny tiny request...plz don't pm me if it's a sad story. i don't take sad things well. may b i have seen too many deaths to get the entertaining part out from them. they remind me of things i wanna forget about.

too good...wondrfully written..thanks for giving us such wondesfull OS...it just bought a tear in my eyes!!!

Originally posted by: shah10

wow..amazing.

maan 's love for geet was deeper...

love it.

do pm me if u can plz.

thx

Originally posted by: maanddy

Oh dear ! I'm really very very very sorry for hurting you through my work ! I'm so sorry ! And, yes the upcoming story is not sad one, so relax ! But, even then you don't find it like that, then feel free to PM me, i will stop sending you link ! Okay ? 😊

And, thanks once again and sorry, too ! 😊

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

no plz don't say sorry. u'r work is beautiful. it's just that the pain intensify if u can relate to it. if it's a feeling that's just a fiction then really it doesn't hurt any1. so i'm not tellin u to change the way u write. it's beautiful. keep it coming but pm me the happy ones...

"happy"  means end shud b happy..journey can b brutal. 😉

thanx for the pm n the reply.

awsome ...i could feel the pain while reading it😭...the ending was a bit unfortunate but i guess every story does not always have a happy ending.this idea had struck me also one day and i had imagined how maan or geet would feel if they came to know that they were about to loose each other in a few days...but im not much of a writer...u have put the whole thing very beutifully into words...grt job!!!!!!!👏

loved d os... even though it was a sad one...

Originally posted by: tanya94

awsome ...i could feel the pain while reading it😭...the ending was a bit unfortunate but i guess every story does not always have a happy ending.this idea had struck me also one day and i had imagined how maan or geet would feel if they came to know that they were about to loose each other in a few days...but im not much of a writer...u have put the whole thing very beutifully into words...grt job!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

loved d os... even though it was a sad one...

but m glad maan never knew abt geet's disease...

n abt d new ff, nice concept...

plz dnt forget 2 add me in d pm list..

thnx..

OMGGG...i had a feeling he would die when he said that he can't live without her...in a way i think u did the right thing...he would never be able to bear the grieve of losing her...