Blend of textures -- Mayur FF (Nupur intro ) pg 4

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey everyone i am back with a new FF ... I hope u will like it


Boy-  A man with golden heart , stubborn,fun loving..

          Father and mother doctors

          M.B.A student '. Modern '. Small circle of friends

          He is exactly same as his name

         Dark in color

Girl -  As tender as flower

           Father mother doctors

           Fashion designer

           Modern yet traditional

           Big circle of friends

           Fair in color.

 

Bdays are on same day aug 22

 Blend of textures :   As the name suggestsits a blend of two personalities , two life styles ...


If u guys like the concept i will continue with the story Edited by prerana_mjht - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice concept...

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Nice concept...good CS...cont soon...n add me in pm list plzz...!!!
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nice cs👏
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Nice CS. PM me when you update & Cont. soon... 😳
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Mayanks Intro

Early morning :  7.00 AM

MM: Doing pooja   MD:  reading newspaper and having tea

Zoom into room -  We see a handsome hunk sleeping under the sheets

Subah ki pehli kiran usey halke halke se choo rahin hein . Ek hawah ka jhoka uske baalon ko sehla rahan hein . Uske chehre pe ek halki si muskurahat jaise koi sapna ho.

MM:  Om jai jagdish Haare

           Swami jai jagdish hare

           Bhakth janon ke sankat

          Saad janon ke sankat

                Kshan mein door kare ….

 

MM: Uth beta subah ho gayi

M:  Thodi der sone do na maa

MM:  uth ja beta. Dekho 8 baj gaye aur aaj tumhara bday bhi hein . Uth jaa mandir bhi tho jaane hein

M: Gets up from the bed but doesn't open his eyes

M : Mom where is my gift. Mujhe mera gift do tab mein aankhein kholunga

MM : Accha theek  hein apne papa se lelo. Gift tho unhi ke paas hein.

Mayank wahan se uth kar apne papa ke paas jata hein .. Usey apne ghar itni accha se pata jo hein

MD: Arey beta tum uth gaye … Happy bday beta.

M: Thanks dad . Aur mera gift kahan hein

MD: Ye lo ye hein tumhara gift . Ab aankhein kholo aur isey dekho ..

M:  Usne envelope kholke dekha tho  usme ek photo thi … ek ladki ki ….

                              Ek pyaari si …. Ek maasoom si …. Pink dress pehne huye ….

Mayank tho usey dekhta hi reh gaya… usey aisa laga ki usey ye ladki pata hein aur usne usey kahin na kahin apna maan liya thaaa

M :  Dad ye ladki kaun hein ?

MD: ye ladki tumhara secretary hein

M :  Kya dad

MD : Haan aaj se tum office join karoge … apna khud ka business start kar rahe ho tho ek secretary tho chaahiye hogi na .. isliye

Mayank becomes confused .

M :  Kya dad aap bhi … Mujhe bday gift mein  secretary de rahein ho … bday gift tho aisa hona chaahiye ..  Jo mera saath ho , mere jeevan ke saath … mere marne tak … aap samajh rahein hein na dad.

MD :  Haan tho kya hua hum isi ladki ko tumhara permanent secretary rakh lenge . Mein aaj hi ussey baath karta hoon .

M: uske pathi use thodi rehne dega .. For so many years (  He want to know if she is married )

MD: Jab uski shaadi hogi tab uske pati se pooch lenge

Mayank heaved a sigh of relief .

M: Nahin dad aise thodi na koi itni saal secretary banke rahenge … Mujhe aise hi accha vala life long gift deejiye na dad.

MD: Isse accha aur aisa wala gift … kya de saktha hoon …. Theek hein mein isse bhi acchi , sundar, secretary dhoondh ke laata hoon .. Isey abhi nikaal deta hoon

M : Nahin dad nahin . ye secretary acchi hein usey rehne dete hein …

MM and MD burst into laughter ..

M : Kya hein mom dad aap has kyun rahein hein ..

MM :  Arey pagal ye tumhara hone wali biwi hein … Ham ne isey tumhare liye chuna hein .

M :  Mom – Love u mom .. u are sweet,cute and my best mom

MM: Theek hein maska math maar . Ab jaavo aur tayyar ho jaavo . Mandir nahin jaana.

M ( Mom hum iske ghar jaayenge na mandir jaake kya karenge )

     Jee mom mein bus yu gaya aur yu aaya…


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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the introduction part.. Mayank's really sweet. ... I liked mayank's conversation with his parents.. So he's getting married to a beautiful girl , Nupur I presume.. Lovely part continue soon.. '

-Laiba

Edited by princez_94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a intro yaar...plz pm me when u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice intro👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful intro...loved it...👍🏼
cont soon...

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