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Desire - [Maaneet] - [Chapter 22 - Page 144] (Page 49)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
oh wow
u really made it for not updating yesterday
awesumly beautiful
thanks sooo vry much

luv
pooja

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:41pm | IP Logged

it was amaizng

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
great part
con't soon

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
loved it sweety muwahhh Tongue

"Do you know ANYTHING could have happened? Something worse could have happened! Do you even know what I FELT when I saw you on the ground... Like that?" he whispered the end bit and I felt my heart flutter.

Maan: "I FELT LIKE NEARLY HALF MY BODY WAS BEING TAKEN AWAY FROM ME!" he yelled and I stared at Maan.   - loved this line


Really could feel  Maan still loves geet,...continue soon

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
vry vry nice dear

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
wow that was long pretty long update...
loved it...
maan cudnt hold himself from showing his love and care...
he cudnt hold himself from taking her into his arms and making out...
this sashaAngry why she always has to b this b*&%$y all the time...
will maan get to know the truth or not...
waiting fr the next update...

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 12:23am | IP Logged
awesome update. .
Thanx 4 pm.

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OMG it was a hot and passionate update,plsss continue soon.

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