Hai Sameeha. I just found dis FF.. Wonder how i got this missed. Really an awesome concept. I cant believe u are just 12 years old. I really got shocked, u write so beautiful. It doesnt sounds like an 12 years old gal's story. Turly impressive. Loved the way u narrated each part of ur story with everyone POV. Everything was so perfect in ur story till the entry of Dev. He was such an jerk. I was so scared thinking of Geet's situaion all alone in Manali. Thank god u made them found Geet. I still cant digest the fact that Geet been raped. Poor soul. But why did Dev raped her. What was his motive. Maan is really heartbroken seeing his lady loved been tortured and he wasnt there to help her. And now plz dont make geet pregnant with dev's child. Then tat would be same like in serial. I had already sent buddy request. plz accept it.. thz.. n plz keep writing.. would love to read more.
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