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AVITA FF : ETERNALLY BOUND Uptd Chptr22 Pg39 (Page 16)

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Hye nidhsara,
just readed all the parts of ur ff sorry haan i am realy late to do.
The story line is quiet intresting dear.
For 1-8 part.
I realy liked that avi is continuing his studies inspite of bj's dictatorship.
Avita had made a bond just after there first meet.
But avi could have hard times when his secrets will cum out.
The party was awesome our avita got glued together thats natural waise.

I liked Anu & rv's character.
Well in your ff each character is bonded wid one another
rv & avi's,anu & arpi's friendship.anu wid her father that is best part.
But bj is also there whenever she will cum she'll make a blast.
I like rough-tough girls like Ananya.
Luved ur ff

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
For Part-9
Arpi has a sad past as his father has been killed but now avi had came he will be going to be wid him.
As our avita had already fallen for each other and avi is expresing it too,as he had taken her side infront of nicky
'empty vessels make sound' ha ha ha.
I think next part will be more intresting.

Between i liked rv & anu's convo realy funny they are also faling for each think so.
Seems anu have some past mystry.

Edited by Cuty16 - 10 June 2011 at 6:27am

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 6:23am | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

Nidha, this update is remarkable. I loved how you introduced Siddhrat and narrated Arpi's past. I have this weird vibe that he will try to hurt her but Avi will be there to save her. The flashback technique was really good, I could feel Arpi getting out of that horrible experience. So RV and Anu are joining the play. I'm excited, I love live performances. My older sis took drama and she used to perform so skits in highschool. Nikki is just obsessed with herself maybe Siddhrat and her will make a perfect couple. It's sad to hear that Arpi's dad is no more but she has a great brother. RV is deeply in love. He has to find a door into Anu's heart. I'm waiting for Avita's love confession.
Thanku Sidda...Siddharth = Trouble...Rv and Anu will be a part of the play...RV is in love ...well i have a drama in my head but don't know how it will come out...confession will come but after a short drama.

 

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille

Hey Nidha dear really very nice one haan

i m liking it Wink 

the way u are giving the relations is very intresting haan

now it seems like except RV evryone is nurishing some secret or wounds hope this Sidharth will soon get what he deserves from Avi (dhishoom shishoomLOL)

n about the bimbo queen hehe when will she realize that there is no place for herOuch

i like the way Arpi replied back n Avi enters in matter,

btw who is Siddy shaiya Ramona was talking Confused

me waiting for next UD dear make it ASAP Tongue

Thanx Jo hun...relations are what makes us different from animals on earth...Siddharth will get his dose in time...Nikki will come to her senses one day...Siddy bhaiyya is Siddharth of Pyaar Ki Yeh ek Kahani serial in starone...the character has exited and we fans miss him a lot...will update dear

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jasveensokhi

Hey Nidha di realy vry nic update di 

well i now think dat Arpi will start realizing

dat hw much Avi luv her n Avi will also get

a realisation of his luv for Arpi n i hope 

dat Avi being a big bro of Anu will ahead

support her Smile so w8ing for next update

n lot's of luv n a BIG HUG  for uHug


Thanx Jas...Arpi and Avi both know that they are attracted...when they realise the depth of it...Avi will support her in future and she will support him tooSmile...big hug for you tooHug

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

Hye nidhsara,
just readed all the parts of ur ff sorry haan i am realy late to do.
The story line is quiet intresting dear.
For 1-8 part.
I realy liked that avi is continuing his studies inspite of bj's dictatorship.
Avita had made a bond just after there first meet.
But avi could have hard times when his secrets will cum out.
The party was awesome our avita got glued together thats natural waise.

I liked Anu & rv's character.
Well in your ff each character is bonded wid one another
rv & avi's,anu & arpi's friendship.anu wid her father that is best part.
But bj is also there whenever she will cum she'll make a blast.
I like rough-tough girls like Ananya.
Luved ur ff
Thanx dear for the comments...Avi will have to face a lot of music when the secret comes out...Anu is my favourite too...

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

For Part-9
Arpi has a sad past as his father has been killed but now avi had came he will be going to be wid him.
As our avita had already fallen for each other and avi is expresing it too,as he had taken her side infront of nicky
'empty vessels make sound' ha ha ha.
I think next part will be more intresting.

Between i liked rv & anu's convo realy funny they are also faling for each think so.
Seems anu have some past mystry.
Thanx again dear...our couples are in love dear...Anu does have a past

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