AVITA FF : ETERNALLY BOUND Uptd Chptr22 Pg39 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nidhhaa🤗


OMG!!! RV- Anu are damn cutee😳😳 their fights always bring smile at my face😊

aww...Loved the cute scene of them... RV is confused abt his feelings😕 I hope he comes 2 knw abt it soon😉  Anu was blushing😳😳 Oh Finally!!!!

Atleast nw its clear tht even she likes RV..but her past is not letting her to go more ahead


Oh My My...Avi is jealous!!! Woooww😉😛  Loved Jealous Avi...

Nidha...u wrote AVi- Anu's part very well...they have an understanding... 'Chutka' how sweet

what 2 say Nidha..u wrote marvelously the beautiful scene between Anu- Avi- Rv


Update soon...Ill be waiting

I hope Avita's confession comes soon😉




Love ya😳





Edited by prash_t - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nidha, this update is magnificent. Each time you update a chapter, I fall in love even more. RV has fallen in love with Anu and Anu is recognizing his love. The dialogue scene was funny. I'm happy that both of them are also in the play and I love how Anu scolds RV. This Ranya's love story is very cute as well. Anu has accepted Avi as her bro and he treats her like Anand. Maybe he can heal some of her pain. That Rohan guy seems creepy, Arpi is way to generous to leave Avi for him. Avi was really pissed off, I could see the bhayyaji in him. RV is lucky to have his best mate as his future brother in law. Both guys have found love in the form of these beauties. Anu's dream comes true to make Arpi her bhabi. I can't wait to read the restaurant scene. It's a duel date for sure. Thanks for this great update and I'm excited for the next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nidha! I read the last few chapters that i missed in one go. They were all amazing!
I am looking forward to the revelation of avdesh's dual life, wobdering how everyone will react.
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heya Nidha di vry awesome update by u

i liked d brother n sister convo between

Avi n Anu n also d way Avi was concerned

bout Arpi😊 well continue soon di 😊

lot's of luv n a big hug 2 u 🤗😳
Edited by jasveensokhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hye nidha,
loved the part and will wait for ur next part.
Loved ananya & avi convo.
Updated my post on pg-18
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: joliefille

Wow Nidha dear Wat a UD ,

i just love it,

ao finally Avi n Anu came face to face now ,

i m loving these warm relations , the way u r giving Anu is superb n Rv - Anu - Arpi-Avi when ever these guys came together i can watch it in front of my eyes , 👏

btw who is this new guy one more villain in story hope in next UD Avi usee to thikane laga hi dega😆

n plz play ka kuch hint do naa , i m eagerly wiating for it,

i know its early but Update soon 😉

Thank you Jo...
This new guy definitely has an aim...
Play will  be a rom-com...I have an idea in mind but don't know what the end result will be...
Will update soon darling🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye nidha,
nice part dear.
Loved rv&anu's part.

So anu now going to call avi bhaiya and now her IF words became also true arpi going to be her bhabhi ji.

So avi can't see arpi wid any one else waise i am also having doubts on this rohan,to much sweetness is not good na.
Now all are knowing that they are falling for one another.
Waiting for there confession.

Thank you Cuty dear...
Anu has got a brother who will love her very much and heal the wounds that Anand's loss had caused her...
Avdesh loves Arpita though he hasn't confessed it hence he is jealous...
RV is still confused about his feelings...Anu won't fall easily...
The confession will come...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Sidda8

Nidha, this update is magnificent. Each time you update a chapter, I fall in love even more. RV has fallen in love with Anu and Anu is recognizing his love. The dialogue scene was funny. I'm happy that both of them are also in the play and I love how Anu scolds RV. This Ranya's love story is very cute as well. Anu has accepted Avi as her bro and he treats her like Anand. Maybe he can heal some of her pain. That Rohan guy seems creepy, Arpi is way to generous to leave Avi for him. Avi was really pissed off, I could see the bhayyaji in him. RV is lucky to have his best mate as his future brother in law. Both guys have found love in the form of these beauties. Anu's dream comes true to make Arpi her bhabi. I can't wait to read the restaurant scene. It's a duel date for sure. Thanks for this great update and I'm excited for the next.

Thank you Sidda...
I have to again disappoint you in the matter of date...but this time I can promise you that if God permits a date is definitely bound to be there in the next few updates...
Anu will get the brotherly love and support that Anand had once given her...
Rohan = trouble😆
Will up date asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: newfoundlove

hey nidha! I read the last few chapters that i missed in one go. They were all amazing!
I am looking forward to the revelation of avdesh's dual life, wobdering how everyone will react.
Continue soon

Thank you Radha...for spenting your precious time to appreciate my work😊
That revelation will sure create a storm...
Will update asap

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: jasveensokhi

Heya Nidha di vry awesome update by u


i liked d brother n sister convo between

Avi n Anu n also d way Avi was concerned

bout Arpi😊 well continue soon di 😊

lot's of luv n a big hug 2 u 🤗😳

Thank you Jaz...as I have always said relations are what makes us human...
Avdesh loves Arpi...so is concerned for her...
Will update asap😊🤗
Edited by Nidhsara - 12 years ago