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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
simply awesome

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Maan found them! Waiting to see what Maam does now! Smile

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
The only thing I saw in this update is that Anjali is unfairly being cheated out of her father's love n company... Geet in her instincts to protect her daughter is being unfair just like her mom was to her when she beat her...agreed geet hadnt done something to garner praise from her mother...but then being beaten by belt is being inhuman n cruellest best ...n now she is being unfair to Anjali... the kid yearns for her father... the father wants the daughter he never knew existed... but the mum is scared hell to let them explore if they cud have a life together... the way Anjali n Maan hugged in ur closing scene just tells how desparately Maan might have wanted to get to Geet and Anjali... why is Geet being soo unreal... every update of urs is showing how she has been unfair to each person she has loved dearly...first Maan and now their daughter...what will she gain... I dont think this way Anjali is very far from becoming rebellious to her mother's words...
but then I trust your storytelling... probably a stronger,saner reason stems this behavior from geet... but ye kuch zyada chota tha compared to the happeningsthat happen in ur stories in each update as such...
ye dil maange more...yaar plz I just cant think of this being anything other than a dangling carrot to us hungry tigress!!! n no maan...this is simply a trailer... plzzz some more... I wont be able to sleep otherwise... the thing is I just got free after 2 yrs of slavery at school... n I am eagerly awaiting to read more of the fan fictions in my free time... I think I have landed myself a treasure of fab writers with gripping stories... so best utilization of time is read away to glory!! :) ... so plzzz update super soon if u can!!

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
awesome awesome awesome

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Wow simply loved it Liz!! Waiting for more!! Love that Maan found them.. And the way u wrote the flashback too good.. Geet's been thorugh soo much but that phone ringing in the back omg was it Maan calling her and she just thought that he never tried to contact her once he left?! Soo interesting loving it!!

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
She herself called 4r d strom. . . . See der he is. . . . But geet suffer alot 4r anjali how could he took her away. . Take geet too.

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Dat was an awesome update...loved it alooottt..
Continue soon...Wink

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