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Good updates...
And very nicely done.
Even so, I think it would have been better if u had stretched the story by just 1 or 2 more parts.
This FF had lot of passion, emotions, angry sex and making love.
Such things can't be ended abruptly. I mean, yeah, you've made a great ending but it feels very compressed.
Like too much chocolate in a banana split, you know? No, no.. Like gas compression in gas cycllinders or syringe, you know.
I hope I'm making sense and I await more of your FFs and pls update more of SMP.
And don't make a hurried ending but you are more than welcome to make many hurried updates. LOL 😆
And very nicely done.
Even so, I think it would have been better if u had stretched the story by just 1 or 2 more parts.
This FF had lot of passion, emotions, angry sex and making love.
Such things can't be ended abruptly. I mean, yeah, you've made a great ending but it feels very compressed.
Like too much chocolate in a banana split, you know? No, no.. Like gas compression in gas cycllinders or syringe, you know.
I hope I'm making sense and I await more of your FFs and pls update more of SMP.
And don't make a hurried ending but you are more than welcome to make many hurried updates. LOL 😆
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